All art is derivative

Jesus.

I saw a story pop up after I published A Karen Gets Her Comeuppance where the guy wrote about a raging "Karen" but while the concept was similar, he at least wrote his own story.

This just looks like a badly done Cliff Notes of yours.
 
I am assuming here that the two stories have a very similar plotline and yours is the original version. Alas these things happen, I would say you are right in saying that you should be flattered.
I believe quality of writing wins out in the end.

I do think you have missed out on opportunity to wholeheartedly plug your own story here :)
 
Wanda, I didn't read the first story but I did read yours. Voted and commented also.
 
In both stories, two nine-year-old girls meet at a beach during summer vacation and become fast friends. Each year after that, they spend their summer vacation together at the same beach until they are fifteen. They lose touch after that until meeting again at a beach when they are 22 ("You, Me and The Sea") or 25 ("Sandcastles"). The two women eventually become lovers during their stay at the beach. "You, Me and The Sea" stops there, whereas that's about the halfway point of "Sandcastles". "You, Me and the Sea" is much shorter at two pages than "Sandcastles" (eight pages), so unsurprisingly "Sandcastles" is a slower story. The beginnings are very similar, but once the women reunite, I felt the stories had different ways of reaching the same destination.
 
Damn, the story is gone 🫤
I totally wanted to troll you by claiming the derivative one was better written :p

Wow. Got taken down quick.

The comments section was going after them big time.

Good job, writers and readers having Wanda's back.
 
Okay so apparently links no longer work. And yet I can still read it if I go to My Comments then click the story title. Weird.

The thief not only stole @onehitwanda s story, but also managed sneak in some creepy underage. 😳
 

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