I need a female perspective on a First Time story

[Jay142]

I have completed a story about a young woman who loses her virginity but it's missing something. I need a female perspective to help me put the finishing touches on the story. I wrote it in Google docs and can easily share it with the right person. PM me if you are interested.

 

[Athalia]

I think you'd have to be more specific of what kind of experience you'd want the character to have. If it's like most women's experience in real life, it was a "well, there it is... I did it" thing, very much like a man's I'd think, except that there was always the specter of pregnancy in the background. She may have birth control, or she may have been trying to time it to her cycle, but there's always an uncertainty factor. And pregnancy is a huge concern.

But in erotica, it's assumed that the woman is protected, and the protection works, and the loss of virginity is a welcome thing and gets her off every time.

I suppose you could write a character that intends to get knocked up on her first fuck, but that's really stretching the limits of credulity.

 

[NaughtyPartyGirl]

From the stories I read, a lot of guys get the whole hymen thing wrong. Often it is in the wrong place (no, not at the very entrance...go a little deeper) and it's not some kind of impenetrable barrier. It has a hole in it big enough for a finger or a tampon, but not for a penis. Also, the first time is seldom much fun despite the cherry thing, but who wants to read a story about someone that didn't enjoy sex? Why not let her have multiple orgasms and become an instant nymphomaniac!Just a female reader's perspective.

 

[LiverpoolMaster]

I think you'd have to be more specific of what kind of experience you'd want the character to have. If it's like most women's experience in real life, it was a "well, there it is... I did it" thing, very much like a man's I'd think, except that there was always the specter of pregnancy in the background. She may have birth control, or she may have been trying to time it to her cycle, but there's always an uncertainty factor. And pregnancy is a huge concern.

But in erotica, it's assumed that the woman is protected, and the protection works, and the loss of virginity is a welcome thing and gets her off every time.

I suppose you could write a character that intends to get knocked up on her first fuck, but that's really stretching the limits of credulity.

Not really a concern for the vast majority of guys (and obviously, therefore, the vast majority of alleged 'females') visiting this site.

 

[Athalia]

Not really a concern for the vast majority of guys (and obviously, therefore, the vast majority of alleged 'females') visiting this site.

That's true. I have only one story on this site about a girl who loses her cherry, but it's a fantasy... not a male fantasy, but a fantasy of mine, about a life that's more ideal than mine, with a character who was more open to the suggestion that I might have been. In the story, there are a certain set of conditions that happened to align in such a way as to make it as pleasurable as possible. Such alignments don't happen very often in real life.

The story is "Summertime Sex Ed" and actually got a positive review on a woman's web site. It can be found here: https://www.literotica.com/s/summertime-sex-ed

(I can't recall where the review was, having lost the link when I upgraded computers.)

I have written another story, published on a site that no longer exists, of how I really lost my virginity. But no one would mistake it for erotica.