I Want to Get Raped Ch. 02

[thebobber326]

https://www.literotica.com/s/i-want-to-get-raped-ch-02/comments

This is a short follow up to my "I Want to Get Raped" story a short while ago. I would love any and all feedback.

 

[thomas1965]

Just a few thoughts:

I am not sure if you should call it rape if she wants it. Normally rape implies non-consent.

A bit room for some minor improvements.

“Get on your knees and unzip my pants,” he ordered“

Maybe better: "Get on your knees!" It's cleat that it is an order and he gives it.

"Now suck it," he said.

"Now suck it!"

I slapped his legs to "get him to stop"

Only direct speech should be in quotes.

 

[lovecraft68]

Literotica-we don't allow full out rape stories
Literotica "we let stories with rape in the title right on through so people who want the rape stories we don't allow can easily find them."

Whether the story is consensual or not, the word being allowed in the title shows you how full of shit this site is.

 

[AwkwardlySet]

Literotica-we don't allow full out rape stories
Literotica "we let stories with rape in the title right on through so people who want the rape stories we don't allow can easily find them."

Whether the story is consensual or not, the word being allowed in the title shows you how full of shit this site is.

I think Laurel should just make the approval process more transparent. When I asked a question on the forum some time ago, I was quite surprised to learn that not even the long time members seem to know how exactly does the whole approval process work. Maybe some stories just slip through?
I remember when I was publishing the first chapter of my fantasy series, my MC, 17 at the time, had a very chaste sexual fantasy. All I said was how he felt aroused seeing the curves of Mrs. Adams, his neighbor, and it got rejected because of the underage rule. There was no sex, no masturbation, or even any mention of any sex organs. So yeah, I suppose it does feel weird that things like this are allowed.
It is their website, so I suppose their house, their rules, but in my experience, both Laurel and Manu are nice and forthcoming in communication, so I don't see the need to keep the approval process so mysterious.

 

[KeithD]

I remember when I was publishing the first chapter of my fantasy series, my MC, 17 at the time, had a very chaste sexual fantasy. All I said was how he felt aroused seeing the curves of Mrs. Adams, his neighbor, and it got rejected because of the underage rule.

Being aroused in voyeurism is a sex act. It isn't Laurel who needs to adjust on what is sex and what isn't.

 

[thomas1965]

Looks there are a lot of stories with the word rape in the title.
Rape in Title

Doesn't seem to be a slip through.

 

[thebobber326]

I think Laurel should just make the approval process more transparent. When I asked a question on the forum some time ago, I was quite surprised to learn that not even the long time members seem to know how exactly does the whole approval process work. Maybe some stories just slip through?
I remember when I was publishing the first chapter of my fantasy series, my MC, 17 at the time, had a very chaste sexual fantasy. All I said was how he felt aroused seeing the curves of Mrs. Adams, his neighbor, and it got rejected because of the underage rule. There was no sex, no masturbation, or even any mention of any sex organs. So yeah, I suppose it does feel weird that things like this are allowed.
It is their website, so I suppose their house, their rules, but in my experience, both Laurel and Manu are nice and forthcoming in communication, so I don't see the need to keep the approval process so mysterious.

The criteria for a rape story to be published is the victim has get some enjoyment out of it.

 

[thebobber326]

Just a few thoughts:

I am not sure if you should call it rape if she wants it. Normally rape implies non-consent.

A bit room for some minor improvements.

Maybe better: "Get on your knees!" It's cleat that it is an order and he gives it.

"Now suck it!"

Only direct speech should be in quotes.

Thanks for the feedback! I call it rape because she does not give verbal or any other form of consent despite the fact that she wants it.

 

[AwkwardlySet]

Being aroused in voyeurism is a sex act. It isn't Laurel who needs to adjust on what is sex and what isn't.

I misspoke. He wasn't actually watching her, he was fantasizing while lying on his bed, remembering how he saw her while she was doing farm chores, fully clothed of course. Also, is it voyeurism if you look at a fully clothed woman who isn't doing anything erotic and feel arousal? I am not sure what the definitions are, but this one seems exaggerated if it's true...

 

[AwkwardlySet]

The criteria for a rape story to be published is the victim has get some enjoyment out of it.

I never really looked what the exact rules are, but they seem too lax if what you are saying is true. I am not trying to attack your story, I am just surprised such themes are allowed

 

[KeithD]

I misspoke. He wasn't actually watching her, he was fantasizing while lying on his bed,

That's a sex act on Literotica, as evidenced by the story being rejected.

 

[AwkwardlySet]

That's a sex act on Literotica, as evidenced by the story being rejected.

That much is obvious, yes... I wasn't complaining about it, I was just trying to compare cases and the criteria for different types of borderline stories seem somewhat unbalanced to me. Once again, their site, their rules, so all is fine. I would still like to see the approval process explained. It would make things easier somewhat.

 

[KeithD]

After a few years most of us stop fighting or railing against it and just float with it. Haven't noticed a change in the paycheck, though.

 

[AngelRider]

Jesus christ. "I want to be raped" if that isn't the most fucked up, ridiculous statement that I have ever read.

As if rape is something to which one should aspire to experience. Tell me, if someone is raped and had their life completely derailed, is it their fault for not "finding enjoyment?"

 

[KeithD]

Jesus christ. "I want to be raped" if that isn't the most fucked up, ridiculous statement that I have ever read.

As if rape is something to which one should aspire to experience. Tell me, if someone is raped and had their life completely derailed, is it their fault for not "finding enjoyment?"

Erotic fiction extends out to ultimate arousing fantasy. Being raped (when coming to the realization that having sex with another man is already there in their mental preferences) is such an arousing fantasy game in the GM world at least. There are guys who want forceful sex from men but society guilts them for wanting sex from men at all. It helps them be aroused if they can have the inclusion of control taken away from them--at least in what they read for sexual arousal. I suspect it's there too, albeit probably to a lesser intensity, in the straight world.

If you can't separate arousal fantasy fiction from real life, you really shouldn't be reading on this topic on a porn story Web site. The issue can be separated by a mature reader (or at least one who hasn't had a bad personal experience that blocks their capability of enjoying/being aroused by this aspect of erotic. If so, just don't read it. It's your issue, not everyone else's.)

 

[Rob_Royale]

I'm doing a story of a husband taking steps to fulfill his wife's rape/ravishment fantasy. It's really quite challenging to write. And totally out of my wheelhouse. Until I started reading here on the forum I'd no idea it was even a thing. But my wife verified it. Very interesting.

 

[thomas1965]

I'm doing a story of a husband taking steps to fulfill his wife's rape/ravishment fantasy. It's really quite challenging to write.

What are the challenges you face?

 

[Rob_Royale]

What are the challenges you face?

Well I'm trying to write it so that he can fulfill her fantasy without bringing additional men into the equation.

 

[thomas1965]

Basically the husband has to rape her without her knowing it is him.
He could break into their house or maybe assault her in a car park after work. Or she could be running in a secluded forest. There are probably plenty more options.

 

[Rob_Royale]

Basically the husband has to rape her without her knowing it is him.
He could break into their house or maybe assault her in a car park after work. Or she could be running in a secluded forest. There are probably plenty more options.

Yes, that's the plan, but the fantasy included multiple assailants. Not to mention at some point she has to realize that it is her husband and he's doing this to fulfill her fantasy, or else it's just rape and not something she can enjoy at some point. I've got it pretty well laid out, it's just wildly different from my usual May/December romances.

 

[LiverpoolMaster]

An interesting corruption of the idea would be for the thing to backfire... inasmuch as a third party gatecrashes a "planned rape" where the wife is primed to expect an "event". All kinds of possible constructs to allow this to happen. The wife is hugely enjoying her experience up to the point where she realises it isn't her hubby... and perhaps beyond that point..?

Maybe even hubby could subsequently come along and do his arranged thing... only for the wife to realise what a piss-poor effort he's making of the task as compared with what she's already savoured...

This should be on Story Ideas.

 

[thomas1965]

or else it's just rape and not something she can enjoy at some point.

Why not?
If it is her deepest desire she should feel at least in peace after it is fulfilled. The peace can turn into bliss when she founds out that it was her husband trying to make her happy.

 

[Rob_Royale]

Why not?
If it is her deepest desire she should feel at least in peace after it is fulfilled. The peace can turn into bliss when she founds out that it was her husband trying to make her happy.

I think fantasy/desire and reality would be drastically different in this case. I don't think a person who has a rape fantasy, is liable to enjoy actually being raped. It's violence and pure terror.

In my story, she'll feel the fear at first, as she's faced with multiple men, stripped, handcuffed, and blindfolded and as the first cock is pushed into her, her husband uses a pet name that only he knows, to let her understand she's in no actual danger and can enjoy what happens thereafter.

 

[Filipinawife]

I agree. I was nearly raped by four guys once I was terrified.

 

[AngelRider]

Jesus christ. This site