a story about a society so capitalist people who default on their debts and "harm society" (criminals and such) are sold as slaves in an auction?

[skull_kicker]

and maybe the narration can switch between a drop out college student who defaulted on student loan payments, an upper middle class guy who tries to help defaulters escape the country and a rich businessman who buys slaves for his industrial ventures but saves the hottest women for sexual pleasures?

I just really want to read this story but dont have the skills to write it

 

[gunhilltrain]

I think there may be some stories on here like that; I'm not sure. For a story like that to work, it would probably have to be set in the future or otherwise, it's an "alternate history" tale. Is this the United States, or does it not matter?

I've messed around with a series set about twenty years in the future, and I found it a challenge. Maybe I'll back to it at some point.

You'll never know what skills you have until you try it. (Maybe it's this idea, maybe something else.) Most of us learned by doing it and, I hope, we got better at it. You already have a basic plot, although it looks a bit ambitious to start with. I'm even sure what technique to use, whether or not you should outline it first, for example.

If I had to guess, I would say start off not being too complicated. Maybe just have the college student be the one of the women that the businessman buys. If that works, add the other guy later, maybe in a sequel. Keep it simple, but try to explain a bit about how the world got that way.

In this story based on an old Twilight Zone episode, I added some details that Rod Serling didn't have. I think I gave enough about why the world of 2114 is that way. But it's condensed into two Lit pages.

penitentiary-planet

 

[Bubo_bubo]

and maybe the narration can switch between a drop out college student who defaulted on student loan payments, an upper middle class guy who tries to help defaulters escape the country and a rich businessman who buys slaves for his industrial ventures but saves the hottest women for sexual pleasures?

I just really want to read this story but dont have the skills to write it

I think there are a number of stories that touch on this subject. A search under the slavery tag should give you a fair number of results. Not maybe your exact setup, but similar.

Joe_Doe_Stories has created a world where slavery is legal, and other authors have set stories in that same world.

 

[Carnevil9]

......I just really want to read this story but dont have the skills to write it

If you just want to read something like that, you might enjoy some of John Norman's "Gor" stories. They aren't about capitalism making slaves, but there are plenty of slaves and plenty of sex. Don't start with the first one, though; the slavery and sex really ramp up around the middle of the series.

 

[Wifetheif]

I've written several stories on that very topic one set in contemporary times is my series "Boss From Hell" He's a capitalistic bastard who controls the economy of the entire mill town. https://www.literotica.com/s/boss-from-hell
Others are set in the near future where slavery has been reinstated for debt and other criminal offenses.https://www.literotica.com/s/lizzie-5
Another one set in the near future is The Big Exclusive https://www.literotica.com/s/the-big-exclusive about a beautiful cable news reporter who sets out to investigate the modern slavery operation and ends up as a slave where she is sold to a younger filthy rich son of a one-percenter. It's a long story with lots of twists and turns. Capitalism is not portrayed in a benevolent way.
There is also Lilybeth https://www.literotica.com/s/lilybeth where a society much like the Amish has to pay tribute in the form of young men and women to a neighboring country that is ardently capitalist and technologically advanced.

I think that you will like at least one of those stories
Sincerely, Wifetheif

 

[Nuff_Said]

I would much more love a story, where wealthy fuckers can skip taxes only by lowering their sex rites. Or, to be considered your wealth as rightfully earned, when you must follow increasing day-to-day sex chores.
I honestly don't get what is the fun about sexually abusing people who are already abused by the system.

"Honey, I'm offered a promotion to regional manager!"
"Great news, you worked so hard to get there!"
"Yes, but now two days a week my ass is free use for the employees and I have to wear that sheer blouse braless every day, whole week, not just 3 days as I do now!"
"I don't care, you come home with your breath smelling cum every other day, so we can use the pay upgrade!"

"No, Miss, you can't wear that to the office. It is too sexy for your rank. Wait at least a year until you get promoted. And don't think that using those late hours tutoring sessions with the CEO will get you anywhere, we all here keep an eye that his sex quota is used completely. He is not that dumb to risk his status for a fresh face like yours."