Interested in Writing a Desi (i.e. South Asian) story about a brother or sister who live together. How would I go about a writing it?

[SS100]

Basic Summary: So I as thinking about writing a story about two South Asian siblings who live together and eventually fuck and commit incest.

Longer Ideas and Summary:

I was thinking for the following then. The story is about two South Asian siblings are living in Canada and for various reason have ended up living together. The brother (in his mid 20s) has found a nice job with a six figure salary in a good city and thus bought a house there, though he remains unmarried. The sister however has just turned 18 or 19 and is starting Medical school. Coincidentally they both get the prospects in the same city and thus decide to house share because it would be easier for the for the two of them.

Where the Conflict Begins

Of course because of the situation they are end the two of them eventually end up fucking. I want to show the typical tensions between Siblings who are choosing to have sex with each other with the added twists of being South Asians (since I'm one myself). Like there's a burden placed on family and getting married and arranged marriage. Though they are able to maintain the relationship whilst they are in another city can they do it forever?

And if someone finds out what is the consequences?

Furthermore because of how gender dynamics and conservative some families are or problematic it may I would want to touch upon both the expectations from the community and family members to be "perfect", how far they may want to go or what would happen now that they're having sex with each other?

How they treat or mistreat each other in this story makes it filled with more tension than a standard smut story. Adding a touch of realism to smut makes it better in my opinion.

Conflicts, conflicts and etc

 

[Carnevil9]

I'm not sure what "South Asian" means, but it probably doesn't matter. People are people.

It sounds like you know the story you want to tell. Just write it! You don't seem to be missing any important information that anyone else can give you. Close your eyes, imagine what will happen, then open your eyes and write it up!

Don't worry, there are no wrong answers. You are the author, so you are in charge. Your first story might suck, but they will get better with practice. Go for it! You can do it.

 

[SS100]

I'm not sure what "South Asian" means, but it probably doesn't matter. People are people.

It sounds like you know the story you want to tell. Just write it! You don't seem to be missing any important information that anyone else can give you. Close your eyes, imagine what will happen, then open your eyes and write it up!

Don't worry, there are no wrong answers. You are the author, so you are in charge. Your first story might suck, but they will get better with practice. Go for it! You can do it.

Being that they're South Asian and are house sharing a decent house I was wondering how I would write the house size properly and in a good location in Edmonton.

FYI I'm basing this off this template - https://www.point2homes.com/CA/Home...er/11207-99-AV-NW/118343740.html#lg=1&slide=0

I don't know how to appropriately show that there is some power dynamics or power plays here though. For example the South Asian Brother is the one with the Mortgage and the job so his sister is living rent free in his home. On the other hand, despite him working out, the sister is the one with the sex appeal and is sexy.

Plus the age gap here.

I do want to show the two of them as flawed people e.g. She's a bit bitchy, he's a bit creepy. But I don't want to go overboard. They're flawed people but I don't want to present them as horrible or bad people.

But I do like it when my incest stories are a bit dynamic and the characters aren't goody two shoes.

Also how would you describe the two of them. They're both in shape but the sister is more in shape.

FYI here's what he looks like and here is what she looks like.

 

[SS100]

I'm thinking of what they're house would look like. Since it is on a bit of the better end of town (i.e. a bit more white) there's some more scrutiny that the two of them would have to be aware of. Nevertheless I'm going to describe their home a bit and would like some thoughts on the home itself.

Summary: The two of them are currently living in a double storey house located half an hour from the Medical University the sister is studying at by Public Transport. The House itself has four bedrooms, three bathrooms and two bedrooms courtesy of the the job the brother works. Whilst a very good house, especially for the money, there are some things that aren't on par compared to everything else. For example the basement is not as high standard compared to the rest. The garage is also one that isn't as good as expected. Their front and back yards aren't as big as they want either but it's all good.

Here's an idea of what things look like

The House from the Exterior
https://mediavault.point2.com/p2h/listing/8147/c9d0/0b14/9baddbd513a1df7c3915/nwm_full.jpg
The Kitchen

https://mediavault.point2.com/p2h/listing/0f63/3990/db8e/ecea027c67af472adff9/nwm_full.jpg
The Two Bathrooms (bathubs are off screen)

https://mediavault.point2.com/p2h/listing/cb84/d497/e58c/dca86d713caf2d8eac13/nwm_full.jpg
The Dining Room
https://mediavault.point2.com/p2h/listing/961a/0859/7368/5b1cc161670c04c88932/nwm_full.jpg
The Living Room

https://mediavault.point2.com/p2h/listing/0cf6/c6c4/b31f/8f6265561ff57637443a/nwm_full.jpg
(Two) Of the Four Bedrooms

https://mediavault.point2.com/p2h/listing/40cb/b35c/0e64/160f11768571f98df31a/nwm_full.jpg
https://mediavault.point2.com/p2h/listing/599e/d426/ec19/f78074a38b10f66ec26a/nwm_full.jpg
Double Garage

https://mediavault.point2.com/p2h/listing/464e/918b/4558/249bbae30efe530e2686/nwm_full.jpg
Backyard with Shed

https://mediavault.point2.com/p2h/listing/dab1/09da/34ba/e2b30475844a31539c89/nwm_full.jpg
Basement

https://mediavault.point2.com/p2h/listing/cd80/4d7c/d7d2/0805367c5bb02d88ad9b/nwm_full.jpg

Now given all these images what are you thoughts on their house?

 

[SS100]

I’m curious as to why you are so concerned about the house. Does how nice or sub-par a particular room is figure into the story?

Well as a desi couple there's going to be a lot of drama and hiding. Hard to do with family. Plus the cultural expectations and life they'll live. I also plan to eventually have them fuck in every room of the house. So good idea to get a visual of things first.

 

[SS100]

Oh I agree you need to know the house, it just seems like you are overly worried about what readers might think about the house. So long as you describe it well, I doubt they will care much

What are your thoughts on the house?

 

[NewOldGuy77]

Basic Summary: So I as thinking about writing a story about two South Asian siblings who live together and eventually fuck and commit incest.

Longer Ideas and Summary:

I was thinking for the following then. The story is about two South Asian siblings are living in Canada and for various reason have ended up living together. The brother (in his mid 20s) has found a nice job with a six figure salary in a good city and thus bought a house there, though he remains unmarried. The sister however has just turned 18 or 19 and is starting Medical school. Coincidentally they both get the prospects in the same city and thus decide to house share because it would be easier for the for the two of them.

Where the Conflict Begins

Of course because of the situation they are end the two of them eventually end up fucking. I want to show the typical tensions between Siblings who are choosing to have sex with each other with the added twists of being South Asians (since I'm one myself). Like there's a burden placed on family and getting married and arranged marriage. Though they are able to maintain the relationship whilst they are in another city can they do it forever?

And if someone finds out what is the consequences?

Furthermore because of how gender dynamics and conservative some families are or problematic it may I would want to touch upon both the expectations from the community and family members to be "perfect", how far they may want to go or what would happen now that they're having sex with each other?

How they treat or mistreat each other in this story makes it filled with more tension than a standard smut story. Adding a touch of realism to smut makes it better in my opinion.

Conflicts, conflicts and etc

When I write stories about India, I use this website as reference material, http://www.samosapedia.com/
I also have Indian friends I verify my stories with.

 

[SS100]

So I'm thinking about the sister tempting her brother a lot by bending over a lot and/or sending selfies in tight clothing like Yoga pants. I think it would be interesting to have the brother go "fuck it" and fuck her there like "online dating game" the story. Maybe have the sister use it against her brother and blackmail or hurt him.

 

[SS100]

If you could pick three drugs that the sister could give her brother to dominate and fuck him what would it be? Are we allowed to talk about drugs here? I want to show that the sister is sneaky, ambitious, manipulative and affectionate. But I want to show that the brother is loyal, envious, calm and addled. Thoughts?

 

[SS100]

How do you write a sister that is sneaky, cunning, ambitious, arrogant, ruthless and direct?

 

[000zing]

A Canadian brother and sister living in India... now that would be hot... now you'd be talking...

 

[SS100]

A Canadian brother and sister living in India... now that would be hot... now you'd be talking...

I want to show the younger sister as sneaky, ambitious, arrogant and ruthless whilst the older brother as protective, direct, affectionate and loyal. The reason why is that they both have reasons for deciding to fuck each other but overtime the power imbalance shifts to the sister who decides to screw her brother and trap him primarily because she seems him a catch but not someone she wants to fuck. In terms of attractiveness the brother is a 6/10 whilst she’s a 9/10. However she decides to trap him primarily because the brother is making about $180,000 or more a year and things this is the best way to have a stress free life. Plus what’s her brother going to do? Wrong move and his life is destroyed. On the other hand he’s not thinking straight because the sex is pretty good and still things, despite the red flags, as his little sister.

 

[BrattyLinds]

What are your thoughts on the house?

Are you sure you're not an employee for Realtor. com?

 

[FantasySharer1]

I had a lot of South Asian friends growing up. Sounds like a great story but I'd love for her to finally get tamed and realize he's the best thing that ever happened to her. And that she calls him "Bhaiya" (is that right? Sorry if it's not) while they fuck.

You should include religious stuff since these families are fairly practicing. Like they fuck before some weekly ritual and she has their cream pie sliding into her panties while praying
with the family. I don't know what religion they will be but make them fuck in the religion room of the house where the gods are kept or where the prayers happen etc.

Having him help her with hw and studying and their sessions devolve.

Their mom keeps trying to get him married (arranged) and she uses her wit to sabotage every relationship. He falls in love with one of the arranged prospects and she somehow manipulates it into them falling apart and takes the spoils (the brother) for herself.

One day, after he's fallen for her, she can't take the guilt anymore confesses while he's fucking her in the ass. He gets so angry that she cost him the love of his life but he also realizes as he's reaming out her absolutely perfectly asshole that in truth, with manipulation aside, she is the love of his life.

He punishes her by angry fucking her ass, slapping it tell its red and reaming it out while she cries I'm sorry bhaiya just fuck me. I'm sorry just make me your slut forever. Etc

During aftercare, she apologies, and he comforts her as they start healing together.

 

[SS100]

I had a lot of South Asian friends growing up. Sounds like a great story but I'd love for her to finally get tamed and realize he's the best thing that ever happened to her. And that she calls him "Bhaiya" (is that right? Sorry if it's not) while they fuck.

You should include religious stuff since these families are fairly practicing. Like they fuck before some weekly ritual and she has their cream pie sliding into her panties while praying
with the family. I don't know what religion they will be but make them fuck in the religion room of the house where the gods are kept or where the prayers happen etc.

Having him help her with hw and studying and their sessions devolve.

Their mom keeps trying to get him married (arranged) and she uses her wit to sabotage every relationship. He falls in love with one of the arranged prospects and she somehow manipulates it into them falling apart and takes the spoils (the brother) for herself.

One day, after he's fallen for her, she can't take the guilt anymore confesses while he's fucking her in the ass. He gets so angry that she cost him the love of his life but he also realizes as he's reaming out her absolutely perfectly asshole that in truth, with manipulation aside, she is the love of his life.

He punishes her by angry fucking her ass, slapping it tell its red and reaming it out while she cries I'm sorry bhaiya just fuck me. I'm sorry just make me your slut forever. Etc

During aftercare, she apologies, and he comforts her as they start healing together.

What about if the sister gets pregnant? How would you deal with that?

Or them going on vacation together for two weeks and fucking like rabbits?

 

[FantasySharer1]

What about if the sister gets pregnant? How would you deal with that?

Or them going on vacation together for two weeks and fucking like rabbits?

She should get pregnant, and they should escape somewhere. Maybe to Europe where its not a crime or something (in some countries)

Their parents will reject them until there are a few grand kids maybe.

Then the parents show up and reluctantly accept.

 

[SS100]

How would I show here as Ambitious, Ruthless and cunning if those are her three personality traits?

She should get pregnant, and they should escape somewhere. Maybe to Europe where its not a crime or something (in some countries)

Their parents will reject them until there are a few grand kids maybe.

Then the parents show up and reluctantly accept.

 

[NegateGivity]

I have a question. Are they both immigrants or are they second generation?

So are they dealing with culture shock from moving continents, and being submerged in a new culture? Or have they been raised in a western culture inside a traditional south Asian home?

Also just for my own clarification. South Asia is a big place, with many different cultures, which one specifically are you making your characters? I would assume that for example Hindu, Sikh and Pakistani would all have differences. Though I'm sure what you are proposing is taboo in all of them.

 

[ericrodman101]

I'm thinking of what they're house would look like. Since it is on a bit of the better end of town (i.e. a bit more white) there's some more scrutiny that the two of them would have to be aware of. Nevertheless I'm going to describe their home a bit and would like some thoughts on the home itself.

Summary: The two of them are currently living in a double storey house located half an hour from the Medical University the sister is studying at by Public Transport. The House itself has four bedrooms, three bathrooms and two bedrooms courtesy of the the job the brother works. Whilst a very good house, especially for the money, there are some things that aren't on par compared to everything else. For example the basement is not as high standard compared to the rest. The garage is also one that isn't as good as expected. Their front and back yards aren't as big as they want either but it's all good.

Here's an idea of what things look like

The House from the Exterior
https://mediavault.point2.com/p2h/listing/8147/c9d0/0b14/9baddbd513a1df7c3915/nwm_full.jpg
The Kitchen

https://mediavault.point2.com/p2h/listing/0f63/3990/db8e/ecea027c67af472adff9/nwm_full.jpg
The Two Bathrooms (bathubs are off screen)

https://mediavault.point2.com/p2h/listing/cb84/d497/e58c/dca86d713caf2d8eac13/nwm_full.jpg
The Dining Room
https://mediavault.point2.com/p2h/listing/961a/0859/7368/5b1cc161670c04c88932/nwm_full.jpg
The Living Room

https://mediavault.point2.com/p2h/listing/0cf6/c6c4/b31f/8f6265561ff57637443a/nwm_full.jpg
(Two) Of the Four Bedrooms

https://mediavault.point2.com/p2h/listing/40cb/b35c/0e64/160f11768571f98df31a/nwm_full.jpg
https://mediavault.point2.com/p2h/listing/599e/d426/ec19/f78074a38b10f66ec26a/nwm_full.jpg
Double Garage

https://mediavault.point2.com/p2h/listing/464e/918b/4558/249bbae30efe530e2686/nwm_full.jpg
Backyard with Shed

https://mediavault.point2.com/p2h/listing/dab1/09da/34ba/e2b30475844a31539c89/nwm_full.jpg
Basement

https://mediavault.point2.com/p2h/listing/cd80/4d7c/d7d2/0805367c5bb02d88ad9b/nwm_full.jpg

Now given all these images what are you thoughts on their house?

Love the house pics but was so expecting the last one to be a sex dungeon after all that ordinary suburban stuff.

 

[FantasySharer1]

I think the focus should be more on the relationships, less on the house.

 

[SS100]

I have a question. Are they both immigrants or are they second generation?

So are they dealing with culture shock from moving continents, and being submerged in a new culture? Or have they been raised in a western culture inside a traditional south Asian home?

Also just for my own clarification. South Asia is a big place, with many different cultures, which one specifically are you making your characters? I would assume that for example Hindu, Sikh and Pakistani would all have differences. Though I'm sure what you are proposing is taboo in all of them.

They're second generation here. They've been both born in Canada and living in a mostly white neighborhood though a pluarity of the people are south asian in their area.