Haiku

[Winter_Fare]

Muddy little thing
All aglow with rainy days
And your innocence

 

[Candy_Kane54]

The sun is up now.
All is bright with birds in flight,
but rainclouds threaten.

 

[AlinaX]

those pesky rainclouds!
their offering of pennies
needs a piggy bank

 

[Winter_Fare]

Modern paper trails
Clutter up giant servers
All over the world

 

[AlinaX]

eat away at life
one little bit at a time
it's all digital

 

[Voboy]

No form. No being.
Nothing tangible, nor "real."
This is the future.

 

[Candy_Kane54]

When I was younger
I thought time was infinite.
Now, I know better ...

 

[AlinaX]

time is a trickster
selling coffins by the road
amongst other things

 

[Voboy]

Time both heals, and robs.
We need more, but then it flies.
It's a fickle bitch.

 

[AlinaX]

we are time's cuckolds
mere spectators to the fuck
of the pendulum

 

[Winter_Fare]

No-one expected
Temporal monogamy
When I was a lass

 

[Voboy]

Time: a rampant bull
Plowing the hotwife of life.
We? Its ex-lovers.

 

[JuanaSalsa]

Boredom expands time
and excitement shortens it
Live longer: Be dull.

 

[AlinaX]

let it be written
that he outlived us indeed
but lived not at all

 

[stickygirl]

Slow cooked office days
Bakes outside, ovens inside
Too hot for sex, love

 

[Candy_Kane54]

Once upon a time
Was a long, long time ago
Now is just that ... Now.

 

[JuanaSalsa]

Past stays in the past
Except in those memories
Leaked into fiction

 

[Candy_Kane54]

The present is past
The future is the present
The past is future

 

[EbersMoll]

Present, where quantum
Futures form classical pasts.
Thermodynamics!

 

[stxjimmy]

we are time's cuckolds
mere spectators to the fuck
of the pendulum

Would swing fit better than fuck?

 

[Voboy]

Some may think they hear,
"Critic! Reveal thyself! Now!"
But no one wants it.

 

[Voboy]

Or, more succinctly?
Opinions are like assholes.
Write your own haiku.

 

[stxjimmy]

Or, more succinctly?
Opinions are like assholes.
Write your own haiku.

Time rampages, and robs
Never enough, it races and flies
Healing, then its gone

For a wordsmith you're not very articulate, or polite. Asking if swing would be better than fuck does not warrant being labelled an asshole.

I appreciate there's a niche for every kink but I've yet to see a pendulum fucking.

 

[Voboy]

Time rampages, and robs
Never enough, it races, flies
Healing, then its gone

For a wordsmith you're not very articulate, or polite. Asking if swing would be better than fuck does not warrant being labelled an asshole.

I appreciate there's a niche for every kink but I've yet to see a pendulum fucking.

I prefer the original artist's choice. After all, it's not your piece, and your input was neither sought nor required. You're welcome to write your own anytime, and the rest of us will undoubtedly choose not to be so rude as to correct your work unasked... unless you get the syllables wrong. See below.

And I never labeled you an asshole. I didn't say stxjimmy was like an asshole; I said opinions are like assholes. It's a well-known idiom, but in case you don't know it, it goes like this: "opinions are like assholes: everybody has one, and they're both full of the same thing."

 

[Winter_Fare]

Public service rant
Haiku are five seven five
Have a blessed day