Bob_Aganoush
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I read chapter 1. Enjoyed it thoroughly. The descriptions of the church, the town and characters are precise as are the interplay of the characters and the emotions of Priscilla May in her determination for independence. Thanks and I'll definitely take in Chapter 2.I have released 2 chapters of a new sci fi series called May Rising that follows a small town girl as she is cast out into the world (and beyond) of the 22nd century. Follow her as she makes her way to survive extra-planetary conflict and explore the unknown!
Check it out:
May Rising Chapter 1
May Rising Chapter 2
Aw yay! i’m glad that you enjoyed it! I was kinda worried that my writing/story was too slow off the bat and that folks got turned off. But in glad someone liked thatI read chapter 1. Enjoyed it thoroughly. The descriptions of the church, the town and characters are precise as are the interplay of the characters and the emotions of Priscilla May in her determination for independence. Thanks and I'll definitely take in Chapter 2.
Sci-fi may now be something I'll have to consider writing.
I left a comment on chapter 2. Enjoyed it as well.Aw yay! i’m glad that you enjoyed it! I was kinda worried that my writing/story was too slow off the bat and that folks got turned off. But in glad someone liked that
Let me know what you think of chapter 2!
Congratulations on your first stories. I read both parts of Student Aid. April is certainly adventurous and as first stories they're good.Hello
New to this so hope I don’t mess it up. First stories.
I have written a couple of true stories of my adventures while responding to a Craigslist Ad. Remember those?
Here are the stories
https://literotica.com/s/student-aid
https://literotica.com/s/student-aid-ch-02
Love to read your comments and please rate my story if you like it….I need the encouragement…lol
Feel free to follow me also as I have submitted another story and hopefully it will get published soon.
All my stories are true.
Thanks
April602
Thank you for the great feedback. Will keep that in mind going forward.Congratulations on your first stories. I read both parts of Student Aid. April is certainly adventurous and as first stories they're good.
However, one technical issue. Please don't combine the dialog of two characters into the same paragraph. Just makes following the story easier to read.
The sex scenes are great and I particularly enjoyed April's awakening in chapter 2. That said, I find her slipping into it bit too readily. A little more reluctance and convincing by Paul and Jim would have gone a long way.
Keep writing!
Most welcome. New here, so to speak, and trying to get acquainted.Thank you for the great feedback. Will keep that in mind going forward.
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Feel free to follow me as I will you…if you don’t mindMost welcome. New here, so to speak, and trying to get acquainted.
I gave it a read, and although the premise is indeed controversial, you wrote it very well, particularly both the physical and emotional effects of pregnancy. The sex was steamy too.
I did leave a comment and hopefully the moderators will post it soon. Five stars too, but I'm sure there will bombers who can resist their righteous indignation that you've insulted their sensibilities. Screw 'em. Keep writing.