Looking for women's thoughts on cuckquean narratives, and what I could do to broaden my readership in this series moving forward

[DragonLairReads]

Any perspective on my on going series that would give me insight on how to make it more appealing to women- if that's even possible would be wonderful. Please and thank you!

 

[Mastered_again]

Any perspective on my on going series that would give me insight on how to make it more appealing to women- if that's even possible would be wonderful. Please and thank you!

Personally, I never got the allure of cuckolding, and although I know it's very real for some women, I can't offer up much input.

My motto, Seriously kinky but seriously monogamous

 

[CurvySassyAJ]

Ok, your ratings on stories are great, lots of views for a lesser known Kink. Wish I was so lucky.

You can not control who reads and enjoys (or not) your stories. You are doing well, so keep doing your own style.

 

[AngelRider]

Cuckqueens without submissive themes are basically marriages with a wife who is uninterested in sex but recognizes that her husband requires sex and agrees to discrete noncommittal sex with others because she trusts him to return and be faithful and devoted in every other way. I am sorry but I find the imagery of a wife who gets aroused by watching her husband bang another woman without any involvement to be a male fantasy alone. Now, if she is submissive and gets off on humiliation... well that is much more believable.

 

[AlinaX]

What if it's more fundamental than that. A woman who for some reason has a deep voyeurism fetish, who finds intimate, private, romantic sex to be increasingly unsatisfying, but who has often found watching her husband flirt with other women exciting in an imagine-if way, and one day she suggests he goes further than merely flirting, that it would excite her to watch him go further...

 

[RoperTrace]

Any perspective on my on going series that would give me insight on how to make it more appealing to women- if that's even possible would be wonderful. Please and thank you!

I'm somewhat confused, which isn't surprising(at least to me), since you identify on your profile as female. As a male writer, I've often thought about how to make my stories more appealing to women. Why is it difficult in your case? And how do you know that females don't make up the majority of your readers?

We all have different likes as to types of stories. Before I started writing here, my assumption was that women preferred more romance in their stories, and judging from some of the nice emails I've received from women, they also like a whole range of kinks as well. Since I find writing about romance difficult, I stay away from that.

One of the more prolific writers on here, wrote an essay telling how to punch up the titles and short description of your story. If you continue adding to your 10-part series, I'd expect each subsequent chapter to have less readers. At least that's what happened to my only six-part series.

 

[djrip]

I've read your first few chapters, and I love the story! I think you've done a great job creating a sexy scenario. I did feel a little rushed at points, I felt the narrative could have taken some more time to breath in some places. There were particularly hot moments that maybe could have been drawn out, exploited more fully.

And I liked the prologue but I didn't feel like it related to or explained the MFC's fetish of wanting her bf to sleep with her sister/other people. I think we could look more deeply into her motivation on that. And I was right there with her when she told dude to shut up! He was talking and worrying way too much! But having her comment on it made it cute.

But I overall I found it extremely hot and I think your ratings show that as well. It had parts that captured the feel of cheating, in a good way, with the behind gf's back stuff, and then the right in front of gf stuff made it even better. And I appreciate that the relationship with gf was loving as well. It was great how insatiably turned on she got from the idea of her bf with her sister.