First time published on Lit

[JayJams78]

My first Lit published piece (though far from my first piece of writing or even first published work) is officially up and posted. Please feel free to go check it out, comment, and give me feedback. Hopefully more works will be coming.


https://www.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=6271247&page=submissions

 

[litfan10]

My first Lit published piece (though far from my first piece of writing or even first published work) is officially up and posted. Please feel free to go check it out, comment, and give me feedback. Hopefully more works will be coming.

Congrats!
welcome to the madhouse, tis a lot of fun.

 

[TxRad]

Welcome aboard. Put a link in your sig line for the lazy, uh, search challenged.

 

[lovecraft68]

Congrats

If you want some opinions on it, start a thread here

https://forum.literotica.com/forumdisplay.php?f=1

And be sure to post the link to the story, most people won't take the time to go looking for it.

 

[JayJams78]

It's a poem, and I did post a thread in the poetry feedback section as well. Thanks for your suggestion though. I may post a thread in that section, if only to expose the naughty story readers to a higher form of literature.

Geeze, put down the pitchforks people. I kid... Kinda

 

[TarnishedPenny]

Welcome. It’s such a great feeling when one’s first goes up.

 

[JayJams78]

Tarnished, this is very impressive writing! The character development, the dialogue flow, the plot lines, the word choice... This is every bit as good if not better than what paid pros do!