Advice!

[lilbit_kittykat011]

Soooooo my series stories aren’t what I thought it would go. I thought it sounded good but I have gotten so much feed back that it’s sucks. I want to continue it but I also want to write about more stories. I got so many ideas just need a little advice or something boost me.

Here’s what all I have in mind.

1) Maybe Jill Biden? Why? Because she is a school teacher AND a First Lady like how cool is that! But what I want to write a story about is specifically about her teaching and how she will seduce a student named Jane. She’s not just bi curious but has a deep dark secret that she hides from Joe. Now I know a lot of people don’t agree with h but that’s not the point. I want to take away the whole political and just do the teacher and student.

2) I watch a lot of series of tv shows and one particular show is called The Bold Type well I love how Jacqueline is played. She’s the head of the fashion designer Scarlett and she gets this girl name Jane under her wing. Now if you see the show it’s addictive but anyhow I want not to be based on the tv show I just want the names. And Janes got this high volume interview in NY but Jacqueline is a co worker that is way much older than Jane and saw Jane in her interview. Jane is just 19 graduate from Miami and has a degree in Graphic Design.

There’s so much more but right now I just want those two but it seems like how I write is different and just need the help. I know most of it it’s because from my Oklahoma accent twang lol.

I was never good in English but in college I did write really good reports but I’ve always wanted to try some sex stories.

Thanks,
Kat

 

[AlinaX]

It seems to me that you're really into erotic fan fiction, and while there's nothing very wrong with that, you are forcing yourself into an awkward corner on Literotica. Teacher-student seductions are popular here, but make sure the student is 18+, keep overt politics out of it, and as soon as anyone real or copyrighted is involved it has to be C&FF and fully consensual. Is it *really* worth trying to use Jill Biden?

Maybe anonymise it to allow greater flexibility.

Mrs B was my favourite teacher. She was the senator's wife and lived in a huge country mansion and always wore designer clothes, and she was old enough to be my grandmother, but I was head over heels from the very first class.

Generally you will have a lot more freedom to write and use your imagination if you stay clear of celebrities and fan fiction.

 

[sirhugs]

I don't think Lit allows the use of political figure or families.

 

[lilbit_kittykat011]

It seems to me that you're really into erotic fan fiction, and while there's nothing very wrong with that, you are forcing yourself into an awkward corner on Literotica. Teacher-student seductions are popular here, but make sure the student is 18+, keep overt politics out of it, and as soon as anyone real or copyrighted is involved it has to be C&FF and fully consensual. Is it *really* worth trying to use Jill Biden?

Maybe anonymise it to allow greater flexibility.

Mrs B was my favourite teacher. She was the senator's wife and lived in a huge country mansion and always wore designer clothes, and she was old enough to be my grandmother, but I was head over heels from the very first class.

Generally you will have a lot more freedom to write and use your imagination if you stay clear of celebrities and fan fiction.

Alina - thank you for this advice I have thought about it all day and I think I know what I’m going to do thank you very much!

 

[RoperTrace]

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[lilbit_kittykat011]

I thought the rule was no real people, but maybe I'm mistaken. He could always make the "Jill" teacher character the wife of a fictitious governor or a big-city mayor. I like the female teacher idea, as long it doesn't involve minors.

That is very true. I was thinking like a sophomore year in college like 19 or 20 and has been crushing on her since the beginning of freshman year and finally has a class or something. And liking the fictional governor or mayor. Thank you guys so much!