Dialogue in Spanish during sex

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Hi,
As an english speaker with very little knowledge of the Spanish language, I am seeking input on some dialogue I put together for a sex scene. This is not meant to be a conversation, but just one side of things. This is a spanish speaker having sex with a non-spanish speaker. Can anyone that is fluent take a look and provide comment?

“Dios mio,” she sighed, adding, “es muy rigido.”

“Si mi chico,” she agreed, starting to ride him in a rhythm.

“Esta bien. Its ok,” she said with a strained voice, nodding.

"Esso es…” she huffed. “Oh Kyle… si… si…”

“Oh I’m coming, Voy a venir!” she cried out, grinding down on him.

“Mmmm, I love it,” she purred. “Eres duro y enorme.”

“Si… si, mi amore… damelo…” she sighed. Her voice deepened and she grunted, “Damelo duro,” with intensity. “Fuck me hard!”

“Ay Papi! Mas Duro! Damelo! I can take it.”

“Si SI SIII!” she cried. “As lo que quieras!"

“Voy Otra Vez! I’m coming again mi amore!”

“Dame Esa Leche! Ven comigo!”

“…unnngh… mas leche… tanta… llename de tento leche…”

Are these phrases/dialogue realistic? Any suggestions would be welcome.

 

[JackBellend41]

Hi,

“Oh I’m coming, Voy a venir!” she cried out, grinding down on him."

Are these phrases/dialogue realistic? Any suggestions would be welcome.

A lot of the slang depends on where your character is from. Spain vs the Carribean vs Central America vs South America....even then, Puerto Ricans have different slang than Cubans, Cubans different than Dominicans, etc.

For Example, I'm cumming in Spain would be "me corro" while in most of latin america, it would be me vengo.

If you want it to be authentic, decide where your characters are from and start doing some specific research into that countries or regions slang.