Point of vierw story is up

Did I make the cut?

  • Yes

    Votes: 0 0.0%
  • No

    Votes: 0 0.0%
  • luk is too fucking stoopid to know how to read but he's gonna 1 bomb it anyway

    Votes: 2 100.0%

  • Total voters
    2
  • Poll closed .
1. You use commas where you should be using semicolons, and vice versa. (Like, throughout the whole story.)

2. "You want his black cock? You want the fat old black man's cock in your pussy?"

^^^
Well, this explains a lot... :rolleyes:
 
1. You use commas where you should be using semicolons, and vice versa. (Like, throughout the whole story.)

2. "You want his black cock? You want the fat old black man's cock in your pussy?"

^^^
Well, this explains a lot... :rolleyes:

Oh my goodness, a grammar nazi critiquing the punctuation in a FREE porn story while completely avoiding the poll... :rolleyes:


You need a life. I mean a life that's not completely fucked up like the one you already have.




BTW, there's a mistake in the story about the color of her bra that I didn't catch until after I submitted it. Oops, my bad.

Props to the one who finds it and mentions it. I'll even consider putting you in my next story; I have one in mind already although you probably won't like what kind of situation you'll find yourself in. Sex/gender/preferences of the lucky winner isn't important.
 
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Stop spamming the GB with your lame jerk off stories, timmy.

You do realize that this site is supported by ad revenue from advertisers who put their ads here BECAUSE OF those "jerk off' stories that contributors like me (and not noncontribs like you) provide to the site for free.

Yes?


Or was that sentence too long for you to comprehend and I should have put a semi-colon in it somewhere?
 
You didn't address the part about the mother getting beaten for fantasizing about a black man while your character watches.

It doesn't take a genius to deconstruct this.

(Racists like HisArpy can't help themselves when they try to be creative.) ;)
 
You do realize that this site is supported by ad revenue from advertisers who put their ads here BECAUSE OF those "jerk off' stories that contributors like me (and not noncontribs like you) provide to the site for free.

Yes?


Or was that sentence too long for you to comprehend and I should have put a semi-colon in it somewhere?

The GB is not for promoting your shitty jerk off stories. Advertisers would do just fine without your shitty amateur contributions.
 
Oh my goodness, a grammar nazi critiquing the punctuation in a FREE porn story while completely avoiding the poll... :rolleyes:


You need a life. I mean a life that's not completely fucked up like the one you already have.




BTW, there's a mistake in the story about the color of her bra that I didn't catch until after I submitted it. Oops, my bad.

Your stories are racist, boring, and filled the errors. Remember, dipshit, the site is also FREE to you and your garbage stories.
 
What a bore, lol.

TL;DR version:

Chapter one: Son gets off on seeing mom punished for fantasy about black man.

Chapters two through thirteen: Characters justify to one another about why that's okay. <--- This is the most HisArpy thing ever.


https://i.imgur.com/gRfdRF4.gif
 
What a bore, lol.

TL;DR version:

Chapter one: Son gets off on seeing mom punished for fantasy about black man.

Chapters two through thirteen: Characters justify to one another about why that's okay. <--- This is the most HisArpy thing ever.




Apparently you went with the lackluster DR part prior to your review because the story isn't about a "son" at all.

No "son" anywhere except as supporting cast (dad and the mechanic)

So, third option in the poll above for you. Go vote for your true lack of understanding.
 
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The GB is not for promoting your shitty jerk off stories. Advertisers would do just fine without your shitty amateur contributions.

Your stories are racist, boring, and filled the errors. Remember, dipshit, the site is also FREE to you and your garbage stories.

Says two of the GB noncontribs.


You want any cred on this? Go write something and publish it here. THEN you can talk smack.

Otherwise, all you can do is the walk of shame. And 1-bomb. Not that that's unheard of from you idjits.

BTW, isn't this about the point where you dumfuks start talking about me having another "meltdown" while you totally not read the story you're 1-bombing and dissing?
 
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Is there water?

Just a few Car-bons. There may have been some Bon-bons involved in there somewhere too but I'm not saying if I'm the one who ate them or not.

(It was the neighbors dog.)
 
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Says two of the GB noncontribs.
You want any cred on this? Go write something and publish it here. THEN you can talk smack.

You're unemployed and write terrible stories for no pay. You write jerk-off stories for other men while stroking yourself to your rape fantasies.
 
You're unemployed and write terrible stories for no pay. You write jerk-off stories for other men while stroking yourself to your rape fantasies.

And???

You need to relax, you're having a meltdown.
 


And?

What are you saying; that you're having a meltdown too?

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I get the impression that you and the rest of the GB idjits are CIS men who have feelings of inadequacy that you're attempting to address by visiting a porn board and then trying to make it seem like being a member or contributor here is somehow...
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Dirty.

Is that why you come here? To feel ashamed of yourselves?
 
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Wanted to add:


Ladies, there's some girl on girl in there you might appreciate.








And how come there's only 2 votes in the poll? There HAS TO BE more of you who think luk is a stoopid fuk.
 
Consecutive shitpists and begging for votes that no one believes in is another RAPEY MELTDOWN.
 
Consecutive shitpists and begging for votes that no one believes in is another RAPEY MELTDOWN.

Cue lil lukies continuing meltdown while saying it's someone else doing it.



You must be an Alinsky Democrat.
 
You made a thread about Luk disguised as shitty spam in order to get views. I own you so much.

I'm sure there are a couple of members here who can point you to "discrete" websites where you can sign up and get all the "abuse" porn you need. Most of them are even free in case you aren't ready to pay to be abused.


The pay sites will still be there for when you need them to help you get it up after the free sites aren't doing it for you anymore.
 
I'm sure there are a couple of members here who can point you to "discrete" websites where you can sign up and get all the "abuse" porn you need. Most of them are even free in case you aren't ready to pay to be abused.


The pay sites will still be there for when you need them to help you get it up after the free sites aren't doing it for you anymore.

The projection is strong with you, Rapey.
 
Huh. Racist Rory never has complimented me on my prodigious use of semicolons; I employ them frequently.
 
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