I SHOULDN'T before "I DO"

PattieD

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A husband-to-be accepts the cordial invitation from his future mother-in-law for an overnight stay the night before his marriage to her daughter. Admittedly, he would have rather have stayed in a hotel with points but down deep he realized that just such an acceptance would contribute towards the melding of families.

This would be his second marriage and his future bride's first. His first disintegrated upon his ex's discovery of his infidelity. This pre-existing condition somewhat delayed his fiance's acceptance of his marriage proposal but his immediate candor replaced doubt with trust. It also provided an unexpected point of shared experience with his future mother-in-law.

Once all the formalities of introducing his bedroom, providing towels and encouraging complete access to the kitchen, he sat down in her very inviting and dimly lit library. She was the loan benefactor of the family's multi-generational ownership of brandy and cognac distillery therefore he was not surprised to be handed a snifter of her favorite cognac.

Her constant and deliberate movement about her spacious library lent to his previous perception of her confident aura. In between sips, she shared of how she too had been sued for divorce countless times because of her flagrant infidelities. Surface admissions became more revealing as the strong drink loosened her hesitations.

He too was slipping into the trance that she was casting upon the room. Her elusiveness had been an intrigue from the start. Whereas, her appearance was an appreciation of his as he saw how much his future wife's beauty could be credited to her mother (her father committed suicide after their divorce). Actually, her mother was much more athletically toned with an immaculate taste in clothes that perfectly accentuated her form and face.

Her elusiveness was decreasing as their alcohol blood levels increased at an exponential rate. Seems that this particular spirit was only for family consumption as its ingredients and potency would not pass FDA restrictions. Her articulation remained the same but her boldness in sexual content soon populated her every shared sexual dalliance.

Suddenly, she was proudly describing how her ability in providing oral pleasure managed to fill her stable full of wanting men. Though, she was single she yearned for another husband just so she could cheat on him. Yet, each husband received all of her sexual talents while her beaus were given just the minimum to keep them at her service.

With the confidence of his intoxication, he interjected his disbelief that a man would break off relationships with wives and girlfriends simply for a blowjob. She smiled into a grin as she placed a swizzle stick into her mouth and out came a knotted red bow. Still, he shook his head in misbelief.

She mocked him by shaking her head "yes" as she looked down at his crotch. Well-tailored slacks bought just for tonight's rehearsal dinner were now revealing a well developed erection. Not until he followed her lasered gaze did he realize that he too had fallen under her spell.

Downing an alarming amount of her special spirit, she licked her lips as she changed direction towards the elephant in the room.
 
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Pattie, darling, the suggested max length for an Idea is three paragraphs. You gave provided a full outline. flesh it out a bit, it could be submitted.
 
I now understand the limitations of “Story Ideas”.
My apologies for going well beyond the maximum.
 
I now understand the limitations of “Story Ideas”.
My apologies for going well beyond the maximum.

As I understand the policy it exists to
a) encourage full form publications in the page's main body instead of a draft in shady back corner this forum is;
b) to avoid occurence of unwanted content before moderator has a chance to see it.

I'm too often guilty of dropping full outlines here. It takes just an hour while chopping firewood to weave one, and then type it out on the phone while pooping. Fleshing it out to an actual story would require actual hard work and time commitment at actual keyboard... Even if I wasn't afraid of all the little details I have no words in English for, not speaking the language. (And for some reason I have little interest to create this type of content in native language, and the idea of doing so and then attempting to translate is seemingly actively counterproductive either.)
 
no apologies necessary.

I was serious that this outline has potential.
Thank you
I need to put this up on the shelf
As I am dangerously close to finishing two drafts that I have been working on for too too long
 
As I understand the policy it exists to
a) encourage full form publications in the page's main body instead of a draft in shady back corner this forum is;
b) to avoid occurence of unwanted content before moderator has a chance to see it
I have wrongly and selfishly been using “Story Ideas” as a wall to see what sticks
The end purpose was and is to put it out there to be scrutinized before I officially submit
. . . where on this site would be a more appropriate means of seeking such feedback?
 
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