I have a plot, looking for writer

[Gregr3188]

I have a plot for a story I'd like written but I am not a good writer. Not good with adding details, developing characters, and dialog. Ideally, we would work together piece by piece on it. I'm married with kids so I understand priorities and how valuable time is so this doesnt need to be done overnight. We could work on it whenever we can.

My plot involves my wife, my friends, and a poker game. I make a bet for way too much money that I shouldnt have and lose.

If interested please reach out. Open to other ideas as well but like to stick to the hotwife/cuckold theme.

 

[Hypoxia]

The vast majority of LIT authors started as not-writers. We learn by doing.

Here's a possible approach for you: Think of the story as a clay sculpture. The basic plot is the armature, the framework, upon which you slap literary clay: settings, characters, actions, speech, etc. Add more 'clay' to fill it out; scrape off fragments to trim it down; mold it with wet hands to shape it as you want. Let it sit a bit, then return to it and modify it as needed for your satisfaction.

Maybe request a beta-reader for advice. Submit it and watch the reactions. Then write another one, and another, and poof! You're an author! Congrats!

 

[Abbafan]

Yeah, might want to try it yourself. A lot of the stories that get submitted here are are kind of rough and amateurishly written, and still get a positive response. I'd suggest maybe putting it into the first person, maybe even have the narrator explain that they aren't an experienced writer.

I might be more worried about the fact that this sounds like it could fit into the loving wives category, which is notorious for getting vitriolic responses from readers.

 

[lovecraft68]

Echoing others, we all started somewhere.

Your idea has been done many times. I'm not saying that to discourage you, people will read the same idea over and over as long as the author makes it interesting.

I say it because you could search for poker/wife stories and maybe read a couple, see how others did it, get a feel for it.

 

[feeng]

Hey Gregr 3188 sorry I'm a bit late to this party . Not sure if you have done any writing in reference to your poker game . As coincidence would have it I have had similar fantasies and have had an opportunity to experience something along a game of strip poker with my wife and another couple . Just so happens my first name is also Greg . So Hmm maybe there is a fit here ? Will help if I can later

 

[JaxRhapsody]

I have a plot for a story I'd like written but I am not a good writer. Not good with adding details, developing characters, and dialog. Ideally, we would work together piece by piece on it. I'm married with kids so I understand priorities and how valuable time is so this doesnt need to be done overnight. We could work on it whenever we can.

My plot involves my wife, my friends, and a poker game. I make a bet for way too much money that I shouldnt have and lose.

If interested please reach out. Open to other ideas as well but like to stick to the hotwife/cuckold theme.

Look in the mirror, bruh.

 

[gunhilltrain]

I have a plot for a story I'd like written but I am not a good writer. Not good with adding details, developing characters, and dialog. Ideally, we would work together piece by piece on it. I'm married with kids so I understand priorities and how valuable time is so this doesnt need to be done overnight. We could work on it whenever we can.

My plot involves my wife, my friends, and a poker game. I make a bet for way too much money that I shouldnt have and lose.

If interested please reach out. Open to other ideas as well but like to stick to the hotwife/cuckold theme.

Faulkner said we can learn about writing by reading other writers, both good and bad. He would say not just Literotica writers, but all writers. I know you're busy, but I think you can find a few hours somewhere (instead of watching TV?)

It seems that this is partially based on yourself and people you know, so it's fine to use fictionalized versions of those. I do that all the time. The setting could be a version of your own hometown or maybe the actual place. Having a realistic setting adds a lot of credibility to a story. Dialogue is something you learn by doing it. If you already know these people, try to remember how they actually talk. Maybe you shouldn't try for excessive length. You can have a pretty good story with only about 7,000 - 8,000 words or so.

You have to figure out why the wife would go along with the situation. My guess is that she was already thinking along those lines. I would also guess that the marriage was already somewhat rocky. Maybe give the husband's view of it. (Is he bored with conventional married life? Is she?)

Don't rush it. If you actually get it done and published, it will be a great feeling. It might actually do better than you expected.

 

[Hypoxia]

My plot involves my wife, my friends, and a poker game. I make a bet for way too much money that I shouldnt have and lose.

Did she agree to be a fungible property so her fuckabout is consensual? Does your loss include watching the winners fuck her right in front of you, maybe catching the drippings in your mouth? Are you excited, like a cuck fetishist?

 

[gunhilltrain]

Did she agree to be a fungible property so her fuckabout is consensual? Does your loss include watching the winners fuck her right in front of you, maybe catching the drippings in your mouth? Are you excited, like a cuck fetishist?

She must have agreed to it. Otherwise, it would be completely non-consensual and it wouldn't fly here.

As I mentioned, both members of this couple seem to be completely bored with their marriage and will do almost anything to get some kicks out of it. I wouldn't be surprised if he deliberately lost so that this would happen. He obviously wants to watch; that is the whole point of it.

 

[SteelPoint]

I have the plots and the full stories.

Now then, imagine how hard it is to find an illustrator...

 

[Hypoxia]

I have a plot. I'm looking for a gravedigger. Asking for a friend. Well, they *thought* they were my friend.

 

[sirhugs]

I have a plot. I'm looking for a gravedigger. Asking for a friend. Well, they *thought* they were my friend.

you could always just rent a backhoe.

 

[Hypoxia]

you could always just rent a backhoe.

A sexy gravedigger with a clean backhoe -- is that too much to ask for?

('Backhoe' is a euphemism, of course.)

 

[Carnevil9]

A sexy gravedigger with a clean backhoe -- is that too much to ask for?

('Backhoe' is a euphemism, of course.)

For a prostitute that specializes in anal, I assume.

 

[Hypoxia]

For a prostitute that specializes in anal, I assume.

Self-fertilizing, then? He or she will need to be good at digging, too. Whilst being plowed, sure. I think R.Crumb did a comix piece about that.

 

[NaomiDPlumm]

I have pot, looking for writer...

Days later: "Why are we here?"

"I don't know, pass the Doritos."