Misty

[Reyblack]

Hi All! I've been a reader on here for a long time. Preparing to break my cherry and post my 1st story. I mostly stick to the incest taboo tales. For the most part on here I've focused on mom/son stories. My own story, however, is going to center around my young niece who I am calling Misty. She is legal, and I've developed something of a crush on her. In order to work out my awkward attraction to her, I'm working on my first short story to post here.

Any Constructive Criticism will be appreciated. To be Continued

 

[Soshameless11]

Good luck! I look forward to reading it.

 

[Carnevil9]

Congratulations! Posting your first story is a scary yet exhilarating experience. It is like baring your soul for all to see. It is like walking down your street naked for all your neighbors to laugh at. It is a leap of faith that you may regret in the short term, but will relish in the long term. Go for it!!

 

[sirhugs]

If you want feedback on a posted story, there is a separate forum for that:

https://forum.literotica.com/forumdisplay.php?f=1

 

[Hypoxia]

A niece or nephew, child of a sibling with whom you share 1/2 of your DNA, has 1/4 of your DNA and fairly qualifies as incest here. I've written a few tales with avuncular (aunt/uncle/niece/nephew) relationships, such as a niece rescuing her mistreated uncle, or an auntie seducing her studly nephew. To gain reader approval of your uncle-niece-crush story, I'd recommend skipping plain-vanilla infatuation and throwing in some attention-grabbing dramatic twist(s). Have fun!

 

[Reyblack]

Hello There! Ok, I've finally submitted the story. I caution all that my story is pretty bland. I only wrote of my interests and curiosities for this 1st part. It is not exactly sexual, but hopefully has a good element of sensuality that I decided to start with. In the following 'sequel' of the story that I plan to expand on I will include more fantasy elements.

 

[sirhugs]

Hello There! Ok, I've finally submitted the story. I caution all that my story is pretty bland. I only wrote of my interests and curiosities for this 1st part. It is not exactly sexual, but hopefully has a good element of sensuality that I decided to start with. In the following 'sequel' of the story that I plan to expand on I will include more fantasy elements.

please post a link once it is online.

 

[Reyblack]

Ok, I posted the story and.....It was Rejected!
Apparently the moderators found something in it about 'an underage sexual relationship', which is weird because I mentioned her age being about 21. And, I warn the reader that the story is kind of bland for this 1st posting. There's no direct sexuality involved.
So, maybe I should post this elsewhere, but I'll leave the story here so y'all can tell me what you think the moderators are talking about.

Thank You!

(Ok, never mind. I might need to repost it somewhere I can attach it for feedback)

....What the Hell! Is there a spot on the forum where I can attach the whole story?

 

[astuffedshirt_perv]

Resubmit with a disclaimer in the "Note to Admin (optional, not published)" when you submit that all participants are over 18. Done.

 

[Hypoxia]

Is there a spot on the forum where I can attach the whole story?

No. Only 3 paragraphs of a story may go into any forum. You could request a beta reader at the Author's Hangout or Editor's Forum. Give an overview of category, length, tags, etc, and maybe include a link to your draft offsite. Be ready to attach the tale to a PM sent to your volunteer helper.

To avoid underage rejection, make it clear in your text that every humanoid fucker and fantasizer is physically over 18 and appears so. Explicitly thinking about sex counts as active sex here. Underage sex may be reported ("she was knocked-up at 15") but not described ("he poked his hot cock into her pre-pubescent pussy").

You can repeatedly revise and submit a rejected tale until Laurel, the LIT goddess, finds it meets her criteria. One of mine took 4 tries, for issues other than age. Don't give up.

 

[Reyblack]

Ok, LOL, the moderators may be messing with me, unless a writer just needs to word their characters' actions carefully.
I submitted again with a note stating that none of the characters are underage, and could I please get an explicit explanation of what they feel conveys the idea of underage sexuality in my words. They rejected it twice now claiming the same underage purposes and even warning about putting certain content about the characters that I've read people use on here in a variety of different ways. Bottom line, my story doesn't even convey outright sexuality, but Sensuality about the character.

I gave a 3rd submission the opportunity to work it's charm, and I offered the simple note 'All characters are over 18.' Fingers Crossed.

(I wonder if I may need to section off a portion of the story to send the Editors and see what they tell me)

 

[Hypoxia]

Don't blame 'moderators' or 'editors' for fucking with you. Laurel owns the site and solely reviews the 100+ daily submissions, so you've just gotta swing with her rules. You can try PM'ing her with a query. Good luck.

 

[PattieD]

Ok, I posted the story and.....It was Rejected!
Apparently the moderators found something in it about 'an underage sexual relationship', which is weird because I mentioned her age being about 21. And, I warn the reader that the story is kind of bland for this 1st posting. There's no direct sexuality involved.
So, maybe I should post this elsewhere, but I'll leave the story here so y'all can tell me what you think the moderators are talking about.

Thank You!

(Ok, never mind. I might need to repost it somewhere I can attach it for feedback)

....What the Hell! Is there a spot on the forum where I can attach the whole story?

No warnings.
No mention of age.
Give her the necessary maturity by nonchalantly mentioning that she is a recent college graduate.
Whether it is a two or four year degree it establishes her age without calling attention to it.
Then as further evidence, have her sharing how frustrated she is that she has been jobless with a college degree

 

[LupusDei]

Actually, it could be as simple as same phrasing, word usage the bot flagged. I doubt any human read them at this point, so all the talk about high level maturity indicators is more likely moot than not. But who knows.

 

[Reyblack]

Ok, Ok! I need to try rephrasing one line to get passed the moderator's objection. This 1st story of mine is true, for the most part, and I include one line in explaining my interest in my niece. The line speaks of finding her so precious and adorable from when she was younger, and then oddly enough feeling attraction once she came of age. That, apparently, is what is shutting my story down. I just need to rephrase it. Please be patient, Everyone! LMAO!

 

[Dudeinahat]

How long did it take after submission till you were notified?

 

[Reyblack]

Eureka!!! The story's Posted.
As I mentioned at the beginning, the story is very bland for a 1st submission. Be Kind and I welcome "Constructive Criticism". Part 2 will be up as soon as possible.

https://www.literotica.com/s/my-niece-misty