First time swinging

[SecretGuardian]

I have another idea I’d like to share here and hear suggestions. It’s about a couple who want to enter the world of swinging, friends suggest that they join a club where all couples like that.
There are several rules in the club, but the main one is that there can be no sexual encounters unless the four people agree.
But in the club they meet a guy who obssesses himself with the protagonist girl and gradually tries to convince her to have sex even without their partners knowing it-

 

[sirhugs]

I assume that by "girl" you mean "woman".

The focus should be on her reaction. If she hives in, the trolls will hit you with "Burn the Bitch" comments and 1 bombs. If she resists, though, where is the resolution?

Maybe she has an affair with the stalker's wife instead?

 

[SecretGuardian]

It´s a Woman

I assume that by "girl" you mean "woman".

The focus should be on her reaction. If she hives in, the trolls will hit you with "Burn the Bitch" comments and 1 bombs. If she resists, though, where is the resolution?

Maybe she has an affair with the stalker's wife instead?

Yeah, she’s a married woman in her 30s.
I’m sorry, my English is still not perfect, so I confuse words sometimes.

 

[Carnevil9]

You could make it a younger couple. They go to the club and introduce themselves as first-timers. They get introduced to an older couple who are known for breaking in newbies. The older couple take them aside, give them plenty of advice, and then gently fuck their brains out. The drama could focus on the nervousness of the newbies, and how they push through their fears and end up loving it. Maybe even embed that story as a flashback where the newbie couple, years later, are remembering their first time as they prepare to break in another newbie couple.

 

[SecretGuardian]

You could make it a younger couple. They go to the club and introduce themselves as first-timers. They get introduced to an older couple who are known for breaking in newbies. The older couple take them aside, give them plenty of advice, and then gently fuck their brains out. The drama could focus on the nervousness of the newbies, and how they push through their fears and end up loving it. Maybe even embed that story as a flashback where the newbie couple, years later, are remembering their first time as they prepare to break in another newbie couple.

I like the idea, I think it might work.

 

[yukonnights]

I have another idea I’d like to share here and hear suggestions. It’s about a couple who want to enter the world of swinging, friends suggest that they join a club where all couples like that.
There are several rules in the club, but the main one is that there can be no sexual encounters unless the four people agree.
But in the club they meet a guy who obssesses himself with the protagonist girl and gradually tries to convince her to have sex even without their partners knowing it-

Hi there. I see that this will be your first story for Literotica. So, some of the following might stray a bit from your direct question.

In the setup you've described, I would give a lot of attention to the conversations the couple has about their "fantasy" to swing with another couple. Who brings it up — him or her? Is one for it and the other reluctant? In real life, they wouldn't jump in right away — the idea must "bake" awhile as it rises like a cake in the oven. This too can be written in a very erotic way as it unfolds over awhile in their own bed — until finally, they want to try the real thing.

Look over some of your own favorite stories and pay attention to what the author does; Things like interesting dialogue that moves the story in the direction you want it to go. Also, give some peeks into the thoughts and emotions of the couple.

The situation you've described about the wife being the object of desire from a single man is an opportunity to inject some drama and conflict into the story. Perhaps the husband reluctantly concedes and watches the event — perhaps this results in some conflict between the couple when they get home and over the upcoming days. Or, perhaps he refuses and they go home to discuss it some more?

So then, either way, there is a need for a resolution, a forgiveness and regrouping by the couple. Then, in order for it to advance to a swinging situation — it seems to me that they must now try again while being in agreement it must be a couple they swing with. (To keep it as only the wife having fun would be more of a cuckold theme.)

Hope this helps in a broader sense.

 

[shinybikiniwife]

You could make it a younger couple. They go to the club and introduce themselves as first-timers. They get introduced to an older couple who are known for breaking in newbies. The older couple take them aside, give them plenty of advice, and then gently fuck their brains out. The drama could focus on the nervousness of the newbies, and how they push through their fears and end up loving it. Maybe even embed that story as a flashback where the newbie couple, years later, are remembering their first time as they prepare to break in another newbie couple.

This is very relatable! I would definitely read this story.

 

[Hypoxia]

IMHO swinging works better on a friendship basis than with strangers.

Two young couples were good-enough friends in a midwestern high school but were not sexually involved crossways. For whatever reasons, Lynda and Larry move near Boston, while Mike and Marcia relocate near Los Angeles.

L&L soon visit M&M on summer vacation. They decide to party on the desert for a week, maybe renting a cottage near Palm Springs with a private swimming pool, or tent-camping by a rock pool (rainwater catchment) near Joshua Tree. It's the hot season so skinny-dipping is appropriate. A bit of cannabis puffed; a bit of alcohol drunk; admiring glances at each other's bodies; and Lynda or Marcia suggests they swap partners. Swinging ensues.

What else ensues? Do L&L look for swingers' clubs back East while M&M pursue the lifestyle in the Southland? Do L&L and M&M work a permanent partner swap? Do they all move back to their hometown to recruit former classmates for mini-orgies?

 

[davion2308]

I'm with you

IMHO swinging works better on a friendship basis than with strangers.

I'm with you on that. It's more fun when there is what appears to be an established relationship. Two couples went to college together, split up and followed each other on FB or whatever, but no one really posted much.

They meet up 10 years later, everyone's in good shape, the one husband and other wife start talking about how they almost ended up together, and the conversation flows from there. Then they're experimenting a little bit, then a bit more, then a lot more.

But they're all comfortable, they know each other, and that's the hook.