Editor for short story - Consensual - MF / MMF

[akrivi]

Looking for Editor - short story - Consensual - MF / MMF

Hi All,

I am looking for an editor to have a look at a short story (4 pages).
The category is probably group since it has MMF.

I have checked the story in online grammar and spelling tools.
If you can take an extra look for grammar, spelling and any awkward words or phrases that would be good.

If not, just tell me your opinion and any suggestions on structure, plot, and characterizations aspects. What you liked, what you didn't, and why.

Best Regards,
Akrivi

 

[PansexualPeach]

Are there any kinks that might turn some readers off?

If not I can help

 

[akrivi]

Are there any kinks that might turn some readers off?

If not I can help

No, I don't think that there is some kind of special kink.

 

[PansexualPeach]

Ok let me read your story

 

[akrivi]

I have sent a PM to PansexualPeach.
No need for more replies.