Looking for story ideas about blackmail

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Looking to write a story about blackmailing my friendwife into becoming my subservient slut against her desire to do so. we are both military and i was thinking that her husband would be away/deployed and i would either help her out around the house and find something, or some other way i would find some leverage.
thinking that whatever it is it is enough to keep her obedient, allowing me to gain further leverage as i dominate her.
i cant seem to come up with anything that is natural and not too forced and something that makes sense.
Thank you for any help.
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Her hubby is very conservative, does not believe in female masturbation. You find her dildo...
 
Maybe find not just any dildo but a strap-on set.

With has dual implications:

1) that she may have used it with her female friends she indeed spends a lot of time with; her bisexuality would be news her hubby may not take well

2) that she may have used it on her hubby; with could be in stark contrast of the public image her husband stress about

Either, both, or neither may be in fact true, but the implications alone might be enough to start the abuse. Then of course it's only matter of manipulative skill to get more and more hard proof on either and more, even if it was never intended.
 
Thank you

Those are both great ideas. I think they both have potential. How would I find this out without snooping and looking for them directly do you think. Love the suggestions. Thank you
 
Those are both great ideas. I think they both have potential. How would I find this out without snooping and looking for them directly do you think. Love the suggestions. Thank you

Pretty simple, really. You just need the 'invitation into the house' scenario:

You're handy with decorating and offer to help out when she complains at your wife's coffee morning of being useless with a paintbrush.

IT problems with her PC.

Leaking pipe.

Thermostat wrongly set.

Aircon malfunctioning.

Etc... etc...

Once inside you find the strap-on in the course of searching for a dropped brush/flash drive/spanner/screw.

Then you suggest an afternoon's romp will keep your lips sealed.

Then you secretly film the romp with a hidden cam.

You get the idea...
 
Obviously, with hubby out of town she had let her guard down... and the toy in the sink for being washed more thoroughly later, and forgot or being distracted... and (one of) her bff had just left while you come in perhaps slightly earlier than expected.
 
Wow. You guys are good at this. Thank you. Any ideas other than finding a dildo/strap/pics on. Something if she's conservative or prim and proper. Some leverage to break her down after some initial hesitance
Also a good way to initially break her down to be able to keep using her and ensure servitude.
Thanks again. You are all awesome
 
Because this is Literotica, a sexual indiscretion is best. If not a toy, maybe a diary filled with fantasies. Or you are asked to help with a computer issue during which time you find her Pornhib and Fetlife histories...
 
Wow. You guys are good at this. Thank you. Any ideas other than finding a dildo/strap/pics on. Something if she's conservative or prim and proper. Some leverage to break her down after some initial hesitance
Also a good way to initially break her down to be able to keep using her and ensure servitude.
Thanks again. You are all awesome

Be her hubby a businessman there's always had been the possibility to find evidence she's stealing from him while removing a nasty ransom virus from her computer.

But yes, the punishment should match the crime, so if you're after sexual favors the secret has better to be sexual in nature.

Prim and proper, that's the public image and outward pose up to the very last; you yourself wouldn't have consciously allowed an impure thought... until now. And it's not said she had indeed used it with her bff as it seemed, she may even try to claim it's indeed the bff who used it just on herself alone and just storing it with her as bff hubby is even worse (excuses don't have to be logical), maybe even try to bring out the point her husband knows about existence of the toy in her defense (that's where you get the idea she's using it with him), and so on.

After all, even a few well hidden and managed indiscretions aren't making her wantonly whore; that's how religious mind works the hypocrisy, if it's ain't known, it didn't happen.
 
Ok... so her outward public image is 'prim and proper'...

... but you're a computer hacker and you discover that she's been surfing the net in interesting ways while hubby is away...

... and you approach her anonymously for phone sex...

... and she thinks you're on the other side of the world...

... but you're recording her voice as she masturbates and taking telephoto video through her bedroom window of her fingering herself...

None of this is rocket science.
 
All very good ideas. Thank you again. Can't wait to start writing now.
Since you are all experienced, what are some good ways to ensure/reinforce the submission. Like acts or activate to make her realize she has no choice and helps to make her submit. Thank you again
 
He finds her making amateur nude photos in front of a mirror. He "offers" to take pictures of her and orders her into positions and poses.
 
Another possibility is that she finds herself a bit overspent - buying lots of new clothes and things when her husband is away and knows she will go ballistic when he finds out about her shopping sprees. She asks to borrow money to pay off her personal credit card, but to trust you not to tell him as well. You agree, but then request/demand that she give you a personal modeling show of her different purchases. She's embarrassed, but you insist if she wants the money. She tries to hides several of the new purchases, but you push her, seeing the bags from Victoria Secrets. She reluctantly obeys and finds she gets turned on by teasing you a bit as the outfits get more and more risque. Of course, you film it all without her knowing to blackmail her further. Slowly getting her to do more and more submissive, degrading things...
 
I've been toying around with a story like this, but, based on a slippery slope where the initial indiscretion is very small. But, you keep raising the stakes bit by bit.

So... the husband is away. You see her unloading some heavy items from the car. You grab the box with the big TV and help her in with it. She stops you at the door and says she has it. You insist because it's very heavy and push past her into her place. She reluctantly agrees. Later she thanks you for helping, but makes you swear to not mention it to her husband. He's very jealous and while on deployment other men are not allowed in the house. He'd be very angry.

When the husband is home and the 3 of you are chatting you ask how they are enjoying the new TV. She looks at you wide eyed and terrified. You quickly cover by saying you saw her bringing it in and was impressed by her strength. She breaths a sigh of relief, but gives you a glare. Later, when you and she are alone for a moment, she slaps your arm and says "That was NOT funny!" You chuckle and tell her "Oh, it was a LITTLE funny. You were totally squirming! You should have seen yourself! Sorry, I couldn't help myself... I just had to tease you." She giggled a bit, but still gave you another glare as her husband returned.

The husband is away again and she's out shopping. While she's out you put one of your Amazon deliveries on her step. When she comes home, she brings it over and rings the doorbell. You left the front door open. You shout from within the house to "Come right in. Please put it on the table!" You come out in a towel having just showered. She blushes and heads for the door. You stop her and apologize, saying that you are expecting take-out food and assumed the doorbell was the delivery guy.

She explains that she shouldn't have come inside... her husband would be angry and again asks you to not mention it. "No problem... it's our secret that I've been in your place and you've been in mine. That seems like a lot of silly rules. It's all totally harmless. Or it was until you tried to be a peeping Tom while I was showering!" you add jokingly... but you can see on her face the fear that her husband won't think it's funny.

She agrees and starts to leave again just as the food delivery actually arrives. You insist she join your for dinner as a thank you. You try for some sympathy because, as she knows, you've recently broken up with a long-time girlfriend... and just need some company. She insists she can't. You explain that, since she's already in your house, the rule is already broken... so it won't do any more harm... and imply that you might not keep the secret if she doesn't agree.

She stays for dinner. You ordered extra spicy food. You offer her a drink. She declines. You ask if that's a rule too... no alcohol while the husband's gone? She says it is. You pour her a glass of wine anyhow and put it in front of her. "I insist. I promise he'll never know... unless you decline my hospitality." She glares are you... "OK, but, that's it. Then I really need to get home! He usually calls at 10 to say good night."

The spicy food made her drink quicker than she intended. It helped that you kept her glass full. She got a little tipsy... and flirty. At one point you were joking about "kids today" and their selfies. You lean in and take several quick selfies with her while you both laugh. She panics a bit and says "Delete those photos now!" "Not a chance! I want a souvenir of our fun date night!" "Oh, you're such a jerk!" she says, but, still grins a bit, as you're still just (mostly) goofing around... as far as she knows.

The husband returns home and you once again give her a little scare by telling them about the great date you'd had recently and how much fun it was and how hot the girl was and that she's coming over again next week. She once against chastises you when you're alone. You once again apologize, but say it's just too easy to tease her and too much fun to resist. You joke that you like having something to hold over her head... to make her do your bidding." and you cackle in a funny over-the-top way. She says "I MEAN it", but, your joking manner makes her crack a little smile before she smacks you.

Next week the husband is gone again... and you insist she come over for dinner. She resists but you explain again that it's totally harmless, and you'll keep the secret (and the photos) from her husband only if she comes over again. You half-jokingly remind her that she really has no choice.

The night unfolds much like the last one. You turn on music. You make sure the topic of dancing comes up in conversation. She says she loves dancing. You take her hand and invite her to dance. She of course declines and adds "I meant with my husband!" You once again say it's just an innocent dance and would it really matter to her husband if he knew she had dinner and drinks and danced... or just had dinner and drinks (again implying you'd tell him). She reluctantly agrees and you dance. She relaxes and enjoys herself.

It's after 10. Her phone rings and she looks at you in terror. You say "Don't worry... I'll be quiet as a mouse!" "You BETTER!" she says.

So she takes the call. She tries to shoo you away to another room, but, you stay put and listen in. You hear her say "What? No... I haven't been drinking! I'm just sleepy Honey"

You pour her more wine. She glares at you, but accepts it when you act like you're going to say something out loud. You hear her say "Yeah, that's just the radio. I have the radio on. I don't know... I usually don't, but I felt like some music tonight"

You take her hand and pull her up and dance to the slow song that's on. She resists, but can't risk you saying something and her husband hearing. How would she explain it? She's obviously trying to cut the call short, but, the husband then sounds angry and suspicious, so she continues talking with him and occasionally glaring at you, especially as your hand explores her lower back. And especially when you take another selfie while you dance and she chats with her husband.

At this point she can't say no to another innocent dinner, though she tries. She begs you to stop. You explain that you can't help yourself... that it's too much fun. And, you've been lonely and want more of her company, so, "your place tonight?". She fumes, but knows she can't say no. "OK, but, this is it. This has to stop!"

You have dinner and drinks and dance at her place. She tries to get you out the door before 10. You tell her you'll stay... what's the difference? You've already been there for a "good night" call as you show her the selfie you took the last time. The fumes and hopes her husband doesn't call.

He does call. And he's been out drinking with the guys. And is apparently horny. You hear her saying "No, not tonight Hon, I'm really tired... I don't think it's a good idea." She's blushing and motioning you toward the door and making silent pleading gestures. You make yourself comfortable instead.

"No, no, of course not Hon. You know I do. Of course not. Ok, ok, ok, I'll do it." She turns away from you and tries to talk quietly, but you can still hear as she starts to talk dirty to him like he asked. She says that yes, she's touching herself. You starts to say, "MMmmm... no you're not" and she looks at you in terror and covers the phone with her hand. You nod as if to say "Go ahead..."

She glares angrily at you, but, begins to touch herself through her clothes. At some point she says "Yes, Hon, I'm naked now on our bed". You stand up and pull her skirt off her making it clear you're going to make sure she is. She stops you and does it herself.

You take some photos, initially while she has her eyes closed. Then she opens them and realizes what you're doing and glares again. You and she both know these photos have raised the stakes again and there's nothing that she won't do now.

And, as soon as she finishes saying good night to her husband you tell her "Thanks for another lovely evening. Tomorrow night at 6 again? Wear something sexy." and you let yourself out already thinking about the fun you'll have tomorrow night. She's in way over her head and can't deny you anything you command.



OK... so... as usual, I can never just toss out an idea without getting wrapped up in it...
 
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I've been toying around with a story like this, but, based on a slippery slope where the initial indiscretion is very small. But, you keep raising the stakes bit by bit.

So... the husband is away. You see her unloading some heavy items from the car. You grab the box with the big TV and help her in with it. She stops you at the door and says she has it. You insist because it's very heavy and push past her into her place. She reluctantly agrees. Later she thanks you for helping, but makes you swear to not mention it to her husband. He's very jealous and while on deployment other men are not allowed in the house. He'd be very angry.

When the husband is home and the 3 of you are chatting you ask how they are enjoying the new TV. She looks at you wide eyed and terrified. You quickly cover by saying you saw her bringing it in and was impressed by her strength. She breaths a sigh of relief, but gives you a glare. Later, when you and she are alone for a moment, she slaps your arm and says "That was NOT funny!" You chuckle and tell her "Oh, it was a LITTLE funny. You were totally squirming! You should have seen yourself! Sorry, I couldn't help myself... I just had to tease you." She giggled a bit, but still gave you another glare as her husband returned.

The husband is away again and she's out shopping. While she's out you put one of your Amazon deliveries on her step. When she comes home, she brings it over and rings the doorbell. You left the front door open. You shout from within the house to "Come right in. Please put it on the table!" You come out in a towel having just showered. She blushes and heads for the door. You stop her and apologize, saying that you are expecting take-out food and assumed the doorbell was the delivery guy.

She explains that she shouldn't have come inside... her husband would be angry and again asks you to not mention it. "No problem... it's our secret that I've been in your place and you've been in mine. That seems like a lot of silly rules. It's all totally harmless. Or it was until you tried to be a peeping Tom while I was showering!" you add jokingly... but you can see on her face the fear that her husband won't think it's funny.

She agrees and starts to leave again just as the food delivery actually arrives. You insist she join your for dinner as a thank you. She insists she can't. You explain that, since she's already in your house, the rule is already broken... so it won't do any more harm... and imply that you might not keep the secret if she doesn't agree.

She stays for dinner. You ordered extra spicy food. You offer her a drink. She declines. You ask if that's a rule too... no alcohol while the husband's gone? She says it is. You pour her a glass of wine anyhow and put it in front of her. "I insist. I promise he'll never know... unless you decline my hospitality." She glares are you... "OK, but, that's it. Then I really need to get home! He usually calls at 10 to say good night."

The spicy food made her drink quicker than she intended. It helped that you kept her glass full. She got a little tipsy... and flirty. At one point you were joking about "kids today" and their selfies. You lean in and take several quick selfies with her while you both laugh. She panics a bit and says "Delete those photos now!" "Not a chance! I want a souvenir of our fun date night!" "Oh, you're such a jerk!" she says, but, still grins a bit, as you're still just (mostly) goofing around... as far as she knows.

The husband returns home and you once again give her a little scare by telling them about the great date you'd had recently and how much fun it was and how hot the girl was and that she's coming over again next week. She once against chastises you when you're alone. You once again apologize, but say it's just too easy to tease her and too much fun to resist. You joke that you like having something to hold over her head... to make her do your bidding." and you cackle in a funny over-the-top way. She says "I MEAN it", but, your joking manner makes her crack a little smile before she smacks you.

Next week the husband is gone again... and you insist she come over for dinner. She resists but you explain again that it's totally harmless, and you'll keep the secret (and the photos) from her husband only if she comes over again. You half-jokingly remind her that she really has no choice.

The night unfolds much like the last one. You turn on music. You make sure the topic of dancing comes up in conversation. She says she loves dancing. You take her hand and invite her to dance. She of course declines and adds "I meant with my husband!" You once again say it's just an innocent dance and would it really matter to her husband if he knew she had dinner and drinks and danced... or just had dinner and drinks (again implying you'd tell him). She reluctantly agrees and you dance. She relaxes and enjoys herself.

It's after 10. Her phone rings and she looks at you in terror. You say "Don't worry... I'll be quiet as a mouse!" "You BETTER!" she says.

So she takes the call. She tries to shoo you away to another room, but, you stay put and listen in. You hear her say "What? No... I haven't been drinking! I'm just sleepy Honey"

You pour her more wine. She glares at you, but accepts it when you act like you're going to say something out loud. You hear her say "Yeah, that's just the radio. I have the radio on. I don't know... I usually don't, but I felt like some music tonight"

You take her hand and pull her up and dance to the slow song that's on. She resists, but can't risk you saying something and her husband hearing. How would she explain it? She's obviously trying to cut the call short, but, the husband then sounds angry and suspicious, so she continues talking with him and occasionally glaring at you, especially as your hand explores her lower back. And especially when you take another selfie while you dance and she chats with her husband.

At this point she can't say no to another innocent dinner, though she tries. She begs you to stop. You explain that you can't help yourself... that it's too much fun. And, you've been lonely and want more of her company, so, "your place tonight?". She fumes, but knows she can't say no. "OK, but, this is it. This has to stop!"

You have dinner and drinks and dance at her place. She tries to get you out the door before 10. You tell her you'll stay... what's the difference? You've already been there for a "good night" call as you show her the selfie you took the last time. The fumes and hopes her husband doesn't call.

He does call. And he's been out drinking with the guys. And is apparently horny. You hear her saying "No, not tonight Hon, I'm really tired... I don't think it's a good idea." She's blushing and motioning you toward the door and making silent pleading gestures. You make yourself comfortable instead.

"No, no, of course not Hon. You know I do. Of course not. Ok, ok, ok, I'll do it." She turns away from you and tries to talk quietly, but you can still hear as she starts to talk dirty to him like he asked. She says that yes, she's touching herself. You starts to say, "MMmmm... no you're not" and she looks at you in terror and covers the phone with her hand. You nod as if to say "Go ahead..."

She glares angrily at you, but, begins to touch herself through her clothes. At some point she says "Yes, Hon, I'm naked now on our bed". You stand up and pull her skirt off her making it clear you're going to make sure she is. She stops you and does it herself.

You take some photos, initially while she has her eyes closed. Then she opens them and realizes what you're doing and glares again. You and she both know these photos have raised the stakes again and there's nothing that she won't do now.

And, as soon as she finishes saying good night to her husband you tell her "Thanks for another lovely evening. Tomorrow night at 6 again? Wear something sexy." and you let yourself out already thinking about the fun you'll have tomorrow night. She's in way over her head and can't deny you anything you command.



OK... so... as usual, I can never just toss out an idea without getting wrapped up in it...
That's a good idea. I like the thought that went into that
 
If you don't want to write in the nonconsent/reluctance category, set up an unhappy marriage, and a more oh-please-twist-my-arm "blackmail" scenario as she's looking for an out. She would have to mention the word "blackmail" first. (Destroying the guys' friendship is a bit of lagniappe.)
 
I've been toying around with a story like this, but, based on a slippery slope where the initial indiscretion is very small. But, you keep raising the stakes bit by bit.

So... the husband is away. You see her unloading some heavy items from the car. You grab the box with the big TV and help her in with it. She stops you at the door and says she has it. You insist because it's very heavy and push past her into her place. She reluctantly agrees. Later she thanks you for helping, but makes you swear to not mention it to her husband. He's very jealous and while on deployment other men are not allowed in the house. He'd be very angry.

When the husband is home and the 3 of you are chatting you ask how they are enjoying the new TV. She looks at you wide eyed and terrified. You quickly cover by saying you saw her bringing it in and was impressed by her strength. She breaths a sigh of relief, but gives you a glare. Later, when you and she are alone for a moment, she slaps your arm and says "That was NOT funny!" You chuckle and tell her "Oh, it was a LITTLE funny. You were totally squirming! You should have seen yourself! Sorry, I couldn't help myself... I just had to tease you." She giggled a bit, but still gave you another glare as her husband returned.

The husband is away again and she's out shopping. While she's out you put one of your Amazon deliveries on her step. When she comes home, she brings it over and rings the doorbell. You left the front door open. You shout from within the house to "Come right in. Please put it on the table!" You come out in a towel having just showered. She blushes and heads for the door. You stop her and apologize, saying that you are expecting take-out food and assumed the doorbell was the delivery guy.

She explains that she shouldn't have come inside... her husband would be angry and again asks you to not mention it. "No problem... it's our secret that I've been in your place and you've been in mine. That seems like a lot of silly rules. It's all totally harmless. Or it was until you tried to be a peeping Tom while I was showering!" you add jokingly... but you can see on her face the fear that her husband won't think it's funny.

She agrees and starts to leave again just as the food delivery actually arrives. You insist she join your for dinner as a thank you. You try for some sympathy because, as she knows, you've recently broken up with a long-time girlfriend... and just need some company. She insists she can't. You explain that, since she's already in your house, the rule is already broken... so it won't do any more harm... and imply that you might not keep the secret if she doesn't agree.

She stays for dinner. You ordered extra spicy food. You offer her a drink. She declines. You ask if that's a rule too... no alcohol while the husband's gone? She says it is. You pour her a glass of wine anyhow and put it in front of her. "I insist. I promise he'll never know... unless you decline my hospitality." She glares are you... "OK, but, that's it. Then I really need to get home! He usually calls at 10 to say good night."

The spicy food made her drink quicker than she intended. It helped that you kept her glass full. She got a little tipsy... and flirty. At one point you were joking about "kids today" and their selfies. You lean in and take several quick selfies with her while you both laugh. She panics a bit and says "Delete those photos now!" "Not a chance! I want a souvenir of our fun date night!" "Oh, you're such a jerk!" she says, but, still grins a bit, as you're still just (mostly) goofing around... as far as she knows.

The husband returns home and you once again give her a little scare by telling them about the great date you'd had recently and how much fun it was and how hot the girl was and that she's coming over again next week. She once against chastises you when you're alone. You once again apologize, but say it's just too easy to tease her and too much fun to resist. You joke that you like having something to hold over her head... to make her do your bidding." and you cackle in a funny over-the-top way. She says "I MEAN it", but, your joking manner makes her crack a little smile before she smacks you.

Next week the husband is gone again... and you insist she come over for dinner. She resists but you explain again that it's totally harmless, and you'll keep the secret (and the photos) from her husband only if she comes over again. You half-jokingly remind her that she really has no choice.

The night unfolds much like the last one. You turn on music. You make sure the topic of dancing comes up in conversation. She says she loves dancing. You take her hand and invite her to dance. She of course declines and adds "I meant with my husband!" You once again say it's just an innocent dance and would it really matter to her husband if he knew she had dinner and drinks and danced... or just had dinner and drinks (again implying you'd tell him). She reluctantly agrees and you dance. She relaxes and enjoys herself.

It's after 10. Her phone rings and she looks at you in terror. You say "Don't worry... I'll be quiet as a mouse!" "You BETTER!" she says.

So she takes the call. She tries to shoo you away to another room, but, you stay put and listen in. You hear her say "What? No... I haven't been drinking! I'm just sleepy Honey"

You pour her more wine. She glares at you, but accepts it when you act like you're going to say something out loud. You hear her say "Yeah, that's just the radio. I have the radio on. I don't know... I usually don't, but I felt like some music tonight"

You take her hand and pull her up and dance to the slow song that's on. She resists, but can't risk you saying something and her husband hearing. How would she explain it? She's obviously trying to cut the call short, but, the husband then sounds angry and suspicious, so she continues talking with him and occasionally glaring at you, especially as your hand explores her lower back. And especially when you take another selfie while you dance and she chats with her husband.

At this point she can't say no to another innocent dinner, though she tries. She begs you to stop. You explain that you can't help yourself... that it's too much fun. And, you've been lonely and want more of her company, so, "your place tonight?". She fumes, but knows she can't say no. "OK, but, this is it. This has to stop!"

You have dinner and drinks and dance at her place. She tries to get you out the door before 10. You tell her you'll stay... what's the difference? You've already been there for a "good night" call as you show her the selfie you took the last time. The fumes and hopes her husband doesn't call.

He does call. And he's been out drinking with the guys. And is apparently horny. You hear her saying "No, not tonight Hon, I'm really tired... I don't think it's a good idea." She's blushing and motioning you toward the door and making silent pleading gestures. You make yourself comfortable instead.

"No, no, of course not Hon. You know I do. Of course not. Ok, ok, ok, I'll do it." She turns away from you and tries to talk quietly, but you can still hear as she starts to talk dirty to him like he asked. She says that yes, she's touching herself. You starts to say, "MMmmm... no you're not" and she looks at you in terror and covers the phone with her hand. You nod as if to say "Go ahead..."

She glares angrily at you, but, begins to touch herself through her clothes. At some point she says "Yes, Hon, I'm naked now on our bed". You stand up and pull her skirt off her making it clear you're going to make sure she is. She stops you and does it herself.

You take some photos, initially while she has her eyes closed. Then she opens them and realizes what you're doing and glares again. You and she both know these photos have raised the stakes again and there's nothing that she won't do now.

And, as soon as she finishes saying good night to her husband you tell her "Thanks for another lovely evening. Tomorrow night at 6 again? Wear something sexy." and you let yourself out already thinking about the fun you'll have tomorrow night. She's in way over her head and can't deny you anything you command.



OK... so... as usual, I can never just toss out an idea without getting wrapped up in it...

That's almost a story, more than just an idea. Just needs the meat on the bones.
 
Way over the top.

Isn't there some rule about 'only a couple of paras' from an actual story..?

This is supposed to be a place to discuss ideas... not one where we've got to the point of putting down dialogue...
 
Way over the top.

Isn't there some rule about 'only a couple of paras' from an actual story..?

This is supposed to be a place to discuss ideas... not one where we've got to the point of putting down dialogue...

Sorry... I got carried away once I started. :)

Next time I'll stick to "Blackmail that starts small/innocent/joking... but the stakes keep slowly increasing... each step being small and not worth fighting, but, each one digging the hole deeper."
 
Way over the top.

Isn't there some rule about 'only a couple of paras' from an actual story..?

This is supposed to be a place to discuss ideas... not one where we've got to the point of putting down dialogue...

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