I play nice.

[Ninjasr4real]

Hello, looking for a collaborator to put the heart in the body of my story. The premise is, you follow the main character as he falls into some unique situations with mature women, embodying various kinks. He was able to hook up with the lady he purchased a car off of Craigslist, so he goes to the well several times. Each situation is a little unique but all end with the main character appreciating new kinks. Take a read... Not married to the ideas that are just in the planning stages.

https://***************/document/d/13TpA8dnrUz8lWTqaq7AnOXe9huzqSXVbZ-MI15SYfMc/edit?usp=sharing

I'm pretty laid back because it's all for fun. Just don't work/play well with flakey folks. PM me. Thanks.

 

[Ninjasr4real]

60 views no takers. Bummer. I’d appreciate feedback. Do I suck, the story sucks, the idea of only writing sex scenes suck. Standing on the firing line, blind folded with a cigarette dangling.

 

[Ninjasr4real]

Exposing myself a bit here. I was extremely embarrassed When running my story on my desktop that google docs didn’t catch my spelling errors on my IPad. If you have read the story before and thought I was a little slow, I get it. I have dyslexia and that sucks as a writer and as a professional person. Please don’t let this hinder your opinion of me as I will make sure I use Ginger and Gammarly to catch basic grammatical errors before your review.

 

[Salacious_Scribe]

Exposing myself a bit here. I was extremely embarrassed When running my story on my desktop that google docs didn’t catch my spelling errors on my IPad. If you have read the story before and thought I was a little slow, I get it. I have dyslexia and that sucks as a writer and as a professional person. Please don’t let this hinder your opinion of me as I will make sure I use Ginger and Gammarly to catch basic grammatical errors before your review.

I too have mile dyslexia. I used to get a lot of negative comments on my stories about spelling and grammar. Some was due to the condition, some was because I wouldn't have someone else read it to find the mistakes I missed.

I discovered Hemingwas Editor and Grammarly, both free web based apps. Since I started using them, my writing has improved immeasurably and I got almost no comments about spelling and grammar anymore.

 

[DarkPleasures]

60 views no takers. Bummer. I’d appreciate feedback. Do I suck, the story sucks, the idea of only writing sex scenes suck. Standing on the firing line, blind folded with a cigarette dangling.

Story Ideas is not a board for feedback on stories, and feedback is given (in the appropriate board) to people who submit, and publish, their stories on Lit. Sorry.

 

[AlinaX]

Also, it felt too much like car porn at the start, which put me off. (Not my kink.)

 

[Ninjasr4real]

Thanks for the heads up folks. My previous post must have missed the mark. Just wondering why no takers rather than feedback on the story. I appreciate the heads up on the tools.

 

[Salacious_Scribe]

Thanks for the heads up folks. My previous post must have missed the mark. Just wondering why no takers rather than feedback on the story. I appreciate the heads up on the tools.

I tried to read it, but I could get into it after the 1st two paragraphs so I stopped. I'm very picky about what I read and if a story doesn't capture my interest pretty fast I stop.

 

[Ninjasr4real]

Thanks for the consideration Scribe. I too am very picky so I understand.

I think this is the road I am going to travel by myself.

 

[TarnishedPenny]

Well, Ninja, I for one do think this is an appropriate lace to ask your question. Very often, we get somebody looking for a writer and the first response is - reasonably - “Details required.” It looks like the makings of a good yarn. Sadly, for a number of reasons, I cannot help at this time. Good luck.

 

[SimonDoom]

Ninja, the lack of reaction is not in any way a reflection on your story.

You are not the first person to make an inquiry like this. I've seen this sort of thing before. Let me offer some comments and suggestions, which I hope are helpful.

Writers here are busy trying to write and finish and publish their own stories based on their own fantasies. It can be difficult to catch their attention to get a collaboration going. Take me, for example: I've written two stories in the past based upon fantasies given to me by Literotica members, but I'm scrambling so much right now trying to finish my own stories I have no time to think about other people's story ideas.

The best way to collaborate is to establish yourself as a writer, build relationships with people, and do some homework to identify other writers you think you could collaborate with. The "cold call" approach is seldom effective, from what I've seen.

So my suggestion is to publish some stories, participate in forums, read other writers' stories, and when you think you are ready reach out to someone in particular you'd like to collaborate with. I think you'll find it will be a much more fruitful approach.

 

[Ninjasr4real]

Well, Ninja, I for one do think this is an appropriate lace to ask your question. Very often, we get somebody looking for a writer and the first response is - reasonably - “Details required.” It looks like the makings of a good yarn. Sadly, for a number of reasons, I cannot help at this time. Good luck.

Thanks for the redirection. I am still trying to get a feel of the forums. Actually the feel to Lit. I am surprised that for “Fringe” folk there is a lack of consideration. Thanks for taking time to comment.

 

[Ninjasr4real]

Ninja, the lack of reaction is not in any way a reflection on your story.

You are not the first person to make an inquiry like this. I've seen this sort of thing before. Let me offer some comments and suggestions, which I hope are helpful.

Writers here are busy trying to write and finish and publish their own stories based on their own fantasies. It can be difficult to catch their attention to get a collaboration going. Take me, for example: I've written two stories in the past based upon fantasies given to me by Literotica members, but I'm scrambling so much right now trying to finish my own stories I have no time to think about other people's story ideas.

The best way to collaborate is to establish yourself as a writer, build relationships with people, and do some homework to identify other writers you think you could collaborate with. The "cold call" approach is seldom effective, from what I've seen.

So my suggestion is to publish some stories, participate in forums, read other writers' stories, and when you think you are ready reach out to someone in particular you'd like to collaborate with. I think you'll find it will be a much more fruitful approach.

Thanks! Solid advice. Lol I was going to go cold calling next.