Editor needed for short story

[TitusPetronius]

I have a relatively short story (~4100 words) that needs to be edited.

This tale involves somebody who is flirting with Dominance/Submission, but that is really just a plot device that makes it work, not the substance of the story. It could also be Non-Consent / Reluctance or maybe erotic couplings. In fact, advice on the appropriate category would be appreciated.

I think I do a good job on spelling, punctuation and grammar (though I could be wrong What I think I need is advice on story structure and development.

 

[LostBabygirl3489]

I have a relatively short story (~4100 words) that needs to be edited.

This tale involves somebody who is flirting with Dominance/Submission, but that is really just a plot device that makes it work, not the substance of the story. It could also be Non-Consent / Reluctance or maybe erotic couplings. In fact, advice on the appropriate category would be appreciated.

I think I do a good job on spelling, punctuation and grammar (though I could be wrong What I think I need is advice on story structure and development.

I would be happy to edit. Feel free to message me.

 

[TitusPetronius]

Thanks LostBabygirl3489, PM sent.