Looking for Story

[JustAnEroReader]

There is a story about this 20-something year old guy living a nudist lifein LA (I think) with his personal trainer when his mom calls asking for a place to stay.
After she learns of his lifestyle she tries to change it but get roped in. His sister also confessed that she's loved him for a long time.

He also has a live-in maid with an 18 year-old daughter. She, during a study session with a friend, witness the guy having sex with his mom.

Would appreciate your help finding this story.

 

[hogjack]

Is the protagonist of the story named "Mitch?" Described as a young Charlie Manson but without the charm or crazy eyes?

 

[JustAnEroReader]

I honestly don't remember his name, but as I recall it had like 5-6 chapters and was a pretty good read. Unfortunately I mistakenly deleted the bookmark I had on it awhile back.

 

[Saint_Ann]

I honestly don't remember his name, but as I recall it had like 5-6 chapters and was a pretty good read. Unfortunately I mistakenly deleted the bookmark I had on it awhile back.

Was it luke?

 

[hogjack]

I honestly don't remember his name, but as I recall it had like 5-6 chapters and was a pretty good read. Unfortunately I mistakenly deleted the bookmark I had on it awhile back.

Your story description sounds familiar. I recall the writer as being very good at developing realistic characters and their relationships with each other. If it is the story I recall it had an emotional core that, at times, overwhelmed me.

Oddly enough the well-written sex scenes actually interrupted the primary emotional thrust.

 

[OldJourno]

Me too. I was in tears.

 

[hogjack]

Me too. I was in tears.

The story is a tear-jerker but it also is inspiring. I think about it alot when I face one of life's obstacles. I can get through it. I WILL succeed!

 

[FL30]

There is a story about this 20-something year old guy living a nudist lifein LA (I think) with his personal trainer when his mom calls asking for a place to stay.
After she learns of his lifestyle she tries to change it but get roped in. His sister also confessed that she's loved him for a long time.

He also has a live-in maid with an 18 year-old daughter. She, during a study session with a friend, witness the guy having sex with his mom.

Would appreciate your help finding this story.

You need to go to the stories section, that is why it is there. You can't find stories here.

 

[JustAnEroReader]

It most certainly is possible.



I'm desperate to find it.

 

[hogjack]

It most certainly is possible.



I'm desperate to find it.

Several of us spent many hours searching for it.

Is it possible you misremembered some of the details?

 

[JustAnEroReader]

I really hope I haven't messed-up the details.

You guys have my appreciation.

 

[hogjack]

I really hope I haven't messed-up the details.

You guys have my appreciation.

Are you positive the nudist was in Los Angeles?

And was the maid with an 18-year-old daughter living with the nudist or was the maid located near the nudist?

These details are crucial in finding the story you are desperate to read again.

 

[JohnnySavage]

Don't spoil the ending for me; I haven't read it yet.

 

[JustAnEroReader]

Not a 100% on the Los Angeles part, but it was definitely one of those I got a ton of money so I've moved into a hipster neighborhood vibe.

I'm positive the maid was living with the nudist. I remember something about the maid having already having had an incest experience around the time she was a teen.

Also, if it helps, the story was in the Incest/Taboo category.

Appreciate your help peeps.

 

[hogjack]

Not a 100% on the Los Angeles part, but it was definitely one of those I got a ton of money so I've moved into a hipster neighborhood vibe.

I'm positive the maid was living with the nudist. I remember something about the maid having already having had an incest experience around the time she was a teen.

Also, if it helps, the story was in the Incest/Taboo category.

Appreciate your help peeps.

Thanks. We can take another shot at it. I am not comfortable with nudity, in general, as part of an erotic tale but in this case it does not seem to be done for shock value. Sometimes nudity is essential for the "sex" part of the story but I encourage writers to work around that when possible. People do not need to see other people without clothing in order to have relations. This is a FACT.

Incest is another topic that bothers some readers. However, again, the characters as you describe them feel authentic plus there is a positive message (i.e. love everyone including maids and their kin).