Good Girl comes home early....

Soma99

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Story idea I had but didn't really know where to go with it so maybe someone else will take it.... feel free to copy and paste the opening paragraph or change whatever obviously.

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Patricia felt very proud of her decision as she slipped into the side door of her house. She had planned on spending the night of her high school graduation at her friends house but after Jane's parent's had gone to bed two boys came over and Patricia knew she was not allowed to be alone with boys. The nuns had taught her for the last twelve years all the things that would go wrong if she gave in to the devil's temptation. So even though they were very cute and one of them even smelled really good she got in her car and drove home.

It was late, after ten, so she went inside very quietly. She planned to just peak into her parents bedroom and just wake them up just enough to let them know she was home.

She pushed the door open a crack but before she could say anything she heard a faint noise, like breathing but heavier. It took a minute to adjust to the lighting in the room but it took her brain even longer to process what she was seeing.

Her mother knelt on the floor, naked, her bottom facing Patricia, her father sat on the edge of the bed, his head back facing the ceiling. Her mother's head moved up and down, up and down and she could hear a slurping noise each time she did. It seemed like her head went up a full foot each time.

Patricia had no idea what was between her mother's legs, it was orange and each time her mother's head moved up her body settled back into it and it slid up into what she always called her private place.

Patricia closed the door and went to her room. She started to cry she was so overwhelmed. Her mother had always told her she should try to be pure like she was, but if that was pure maybe Patricia had been doing the wrong things.

Patricia thought about that image every day for the rest of the summer.

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Hope you at least liked the start.
 
It's a dildo — I'd go with pink instead of orange.

But, seeing her own parents like this could evolve to Patricia coming to the realization that all of the self-pleasure she had been doing lately in bed alone maybe wasn't so sinful after all — mom and dad are doing "things", so it can't be that bad … as her thoughts evolve, her hands find more places to explore and pleasure … maybe it's not too late to go back to the graduation/slumber-party?

When she gets back to Jane's house and goes to her window to tap — she sees Jane and the two young men having their own fun on Jane's bed. The voice in her head tells her no — but the voice between her legs speaks louder, and Patricia lightly taps on the window ….
 
It's a dildo — I'd go with pink instead of orange.

But, seeing her own parents like this could evolve to Patricia coming to the realization that all of the self-pleasure she had been doing lately in bed alone maybe wasn't so sinful after all — mom and dad are doing "things", so it can't be that bad … as her thoughts evolve, her hands find more places to explore and pleasure … maybe it's not too late to go back to the graduation/slumber-party?

When she gets back to Jane's house and goes to her window to tap — she sees Jane and the two young men having their own fun on Jane's bed. The voice in her head tells her no — but the voice between her legs speaks louder, and Patricia lightly taps on the window ….

I hadn’t considered her going back! I like that.
 
What if the story moved onto what happened with Jane and the two boys while Jane's parents slept?
Your story ends but another begins.
 
I like the iidea of Jane remaining "pure" i.e. a virgin, but becoming a voyuer and watching the sexual goings on in the house. Including the cards night wife swapping (Jane always wondered why she was sent to bed early those nights); the tip for the paper boy ( esp. when its Dad's turn); the visit from Uncle Ralph; the grandparents come to call...
 
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