SinfuIDreams
Kinky Daredevil
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Hi everyone,
So this is a feedback thread for my series To be loved.
The first chapter
https://www.literotica.com/s/to-be-loved-ch-01
And the second
https://www.literotica.com/s/to-be-loved-ch-02
I'd like some opinions on if I should continue on the series with even darker tones or move it on to a happier place and end it on the next chapter.
So far I've had mixed feedback via pms and email, some positive and loving the flow others commenting on how fast I delved into sex.
As the title of the thread states it's submitted under BDSM. The story is based around a stalker out for revenge on a woman he believes has wronged him.
It is written in first person with the majority of the view during sex scenes being from the leading ladies perspective. I have had help from one of male friends in real life on the leading males perspective. So hopefully between the two of us it's realistic enough.
I have two other series up at the moment that interlink with this one but it can be read as a standalone.
So this is a feedback thread for my series To be loved.
The first chapter
https://www.literotica.com/s/to-be-loved-ch-01
And the second
https://www.literotica.com/s/to-be-loved-ch-02
I'd like some opinions on if I should continue on the series with even darker tones or move it on to a happier place and end it on the next chapter.
So far I've had mixed feedback via pms and email, some positive and loving the flow others commenting on how fast I delved into sex.
As the title of the thread states it's submitted under BDSM. The story is based around a stalker out for revenge on a woman he believes has wronged him.
It is written in first person with the majority of the view during sex scenes being from the leading ladies perspective. I have had help from one of male friends in real life on the leading males perspective. So hopefully between the two of us it's realistic enough.
I have two other series up at the moment that interlink with this one but it can be read as a standalone.