Help me sex it up!

[JosephineKuo]

So I have a weird problem. I am having a hard time writing about sex!

The reason why this is weird is because I am a very sexual person. I've worked as a phone sex operator, first on a vanilla line (mostly p in v) and later on a fetish line (literally ANYTHING GOES). I am a great dirty talker, and I'm very open-minded. No problem with dirty words, physical descriptions, talking about stuff I might not (or might) do, but my sex writing is... flacid. So to speak.

Anyone want to help a filthy-mouthed former phone ho write about fucking?

 

[EdEc]

I have the time and the desire to help.

 

[Cfnmlover84]

I have the time and the desire to help.

Oddly enough i'm also having trouble writing sex.

 

[yukonnights]

Oddly enough i'm also having trouble writing sex.

Can you elaborate on what's not working for you?

 

[Cfnmlover84]

Can you elaborate on what's not working for you?

I'm writing a story about a college guy who has a crush on a girl in his dorm. He breaks into her dorm room and puts a love potion in her beer. The beer gets accidentally drank by her mom. She then goes to the guy's room, Forces him to strip out of his robe, Tapes his mouth shut and ties his hands up with the robe tie. Then she gives him the best blowjob of his life.

I need help writing the blowjob. It needs to be from the pov of a woman who hasn't sucked cock in 15 years and has now lost her inhibitions due to a love potion.

 

[Bealzabozo]

I would describe how she takes the cock in her mouth and how it feels in her mouth and hands. What she's thinking while she's doing it, maybe doing that brings back strong memories that really turn her on. Describe what it's like for her to have a man's power in her mouth and how she works it, her technique. Describe the noises it makes as she sucks on it and noises both her and he make together. They way his body squirms, and tries to break his hands free, as she works, what does she do to hold him down. Little details, like the color of her fingernails or her lipstick leaving a mark on his cock.

If you have something written, I would love to take a look at it and I can offer some more advice

 

[sdsioux]

story

so would I. pm me

 

[Mrswitch]

oops

sorry I accidentally posted in the wrong area. Would delete but can't seem to figure out how.