Mistaken identity

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Family is at a beach resort. Mom goes up to the room after telling husband that she needs a rest. Dad later sends son up to the room to get his book.

When mom hears the key in the door she thinks it’s her husband and decides to have fun. Son goes in to the foyer and looks for the book in the dark room. The lights are off and the curtain is drawn.

‘Hey big boy, why don’t you come over here and fuck me.’

He hears his mom and almost freaks out. He knows that she will be embarrassed if she finds out it’s him and not his father.

‘Come on don’t make me beg for your hard cock. Come here and give it to me.’

He peeks around the corner and sees the sillohette of his mom on the bed with her legs spread.

‘Dont Make me ask again’ she says as she rolls over and sticks her ass up in the air. ‘Fuck me before I get bored’

He inches forward and goes for it.

‘Oh my god you’re so hard!

Afterwards she tells him to go back to the pool so they don’t lose their chairs and says that she will be down soon.

After she gets down she tells her husband that she’s surprised that he’s not napping.

‘Huh?’

‘You always fall asleep afterwards. Where’s Tom?’

‘I sent him up to get my book from our room and then he headed off somewhere. Why?’

‘That wasn’t you in the room?’

‘No, why? I hope Tom didn’t bother you.’

 

[Carnevil9]

That's a cute start. But I would keep the characters in the dark for a little longer and let some more mistaken-identity sex happen. Possibly fueled by Tom and his need for a little more motherly nookie.

 

[Magineer]

You have to do more than that to give any thinking reader a reason to suspend their disbelief. A darkened room would still allow the mother to know who it was, almost instantly, sorry.

Has the mother maybe blindfolded herself? Maybe more than a touch drunk? Maybe it's a happy accident - she's been eying up her son's physical development and now the chance presents itself?

Something... to help out those of us who need stories which aren't simple descriptions of fucking like 99% of what's on offer in the Lit archive, but which actually at least try to ground the sexual frisson in a believable matrix.

 

[centrum1000]

You have to do more than that to give any thinking reader a reason to suspend their disbelief. A darkened room would still allow the mother to know who it was, almost instantly, sorry.

Has the mother maybe blindfolded herself? Maybe more than a touch drunk? Maybe it's a happy accident - she's been eying up her son's physical development and now the chance presents itself?

Something... to help out those of us who need stories which aren't simple descriptions of fucking like 99% of what's on offer in the Lit archive, but which actually at least try to ground the sexual frisson in a believable matrix.

Good point!

I can see her enjoying a few too many margaritas in the sun before going up to the room.

That would also allow her to be in the dark a bit longer. After she wakes up from her nap they go out to dinner and she has a few too many glasses of wine. She’s still feeling frisky from her prior encounter and the son overheard her telling her husband that she going back to the room just like earlier. He doesn’t know what she’s talking about and is enjoying the live entertainment. But the son decides to test his luck and slips away for another shot at his mom.

 

[JaxRhapsody]

You have to do more than that to give any thinking reader a reason to suspend their disbelief. A darkened room would still allow the mother to know who it was, almost instantly, sorry.

Has the mother maybe blindfolded herself? Maybe more than a touch drunk? Maybe it's a happy accident - she's been eying up her son's physical development and now the chance presents itself?

Something... to help out those of us who need stories which aren't simple descriptions of fucking like 99% of what's on offer in the Lit archive, but which actually at least try to ground the sexual frisson in a believable matrix.

Nah... that can slide. If you wanted to ruin the dream, it would be the physical differences between the two. But that's why plot bunnies exist. She could be doggystyle with her face in the pillow, who's to say the hotel room(which has a foyer) doesn't have blackout curtains?

 

[JaxRhapsody]

Good point!

I can see her enjoying a few too many margaritas in the sun before going up to the room.

That would also allow her to be in the dark a bit longer. After she wakes up from her nap they go out to dinner and she has a few too many glasses of wine. She’s still feeling frisky from her prior encounter and the son overheard her telling her husband that she going back to the room just like earlier. He doesn’t know what she’s talking about and is enjoying the live entertainment. But the son decides to test his luck and slips away for another shot at his mom.

Dad shouldn't find out right away either. You can stretch the story by having mom find out first, like maybe one of his endeavers, a notification lights up her phone and then she sees it's her son. There goes a mirad of possibities:

-It's dad calling, looking for the son
-- She doesn't answer but the light gives it away
--She does answer because she sees the caller id
--Answers and then freaks out and dad finds out over the phone

-Some sort of message causing the phone to reveal her son dicking her down and she freaks out, blah
--She's unnaturally impressed at his skills and allows it to continue
--Freaks out but eventually succombs to fucking her son when dad ain't around because fantasies, dreams, what have you.
--Decides to use it as reward
--Admits through guilt and shame to dad

-Dad finds out
--Finds out by going to the hotel room
--Finds out later on by catching them in the act at home
--Moms guilt ends up causing her to admit to it

-Dad finds out because somebody else catches them
--That somebody might not know who it is, but informs that she has been cheating as they seen the siluettes or something.
--Dad pretends to sneak away and catches them
--Confronts her until she admits it

-Dad finds out but doesn't care

-Mom tells dad and he doesn't care or finds a reason to allow it

-Son tells dad or lets it slip

-Son accidently tells dad via journal or something

-Dad finds out, raises hell
--They try to fix it and stop fucking each other
--Try to fix it, but simply go behind his back(could be some interesting situations)
--Try to fix it and quit, but their desires are too strong and they faulter
---Dad or somebody catches them again
--Dad leaves them or divorces wife over it, leaving them to their sexual happiness

Ways to go depending on how long or short you want it, how much sex, suspense and whatnot you want in it. Unless dad is good with it, Dad shouldn't find out in till towards the end, unless they keep doing it afterwards.

 

[centrum1000]

Dad shouldn't find out right away either. You can stretch the story by having mom find out first, like maybe one of his endeavers, a notification lights up her phone and then she sees it's her son. There goes a mirad of possibities:

-It's dad calling, looking for the son
-- She doesn't answer but the light gives it away
--She does answer because she sees the caller id
--Answers and then freaks out and dad finds out over the phone

-Some sort of message causing the phone to reveal her son dicking her down and she freaks out, blah
--She's unnaturally impressed at his skills and allows it to continue
--Freaks out but eventually succombs to fucking her son when dad ain't around because fantasies, dreams, what have you.
--Decides to use it as reward
--Admits through guilt and shame to dad

-Dad finds out
--Finds out by going to the hotel room
--Finds out later on by catching them in the act at home
--Moms guilt ends up causing her to admit to it

-Dad finds out because somebody else catches them
--That somebody might not know who it is, but informs that she has been cheating as they seen the siluettes or something.
--Dad pretends to sneak away and catches them
--Confronts her until she admits it

-Dad finds out but doesn't care

-Mom tells dad and he doesn't care or finds a reason to allow it

-Son tells dad or lets it slip

-Son accidently tells dad via journal or something

-Dad finds out, raises hell
--They try to fix it and stop fucking each other
--Try to fix it, but simply go behind his back(could be some interesting situations)
--Try to fix it and quit, but their desires are too strong and they faulter
---Dad or somebody catches them again
--Dad leaves them or divorces wife over it, leaving them to their sexual happiness

Ways to go depending on how long or short you want it, how much sex, suspense and whatnot you want in it. Unless dad is good with it, Dad shouldn't find out in till towards the end, unless they keep doing it afterwards.

Good ideas, thanks!

I like the dad being in the dark for as long as possible, and the cell phone idea is a great way to have the mom start wondering but not be sure.

Her phone rings while she is getting fucked by her son from behind and she lets it go to voicemail, or just simply a text she ignores until later. She is out of it from day drinking and so she doesn’t check her phone until later. When she sees the message that her husband is looking for her she thinks she remembers it coming through while she was being fucked but isn’t quite sure through the haze and just chalks it up to misremembering.

She does remember that her husband had more energy than usual and that his cock felt bigger and harder than usual as well.

 

[momloverson]

Good ideas, thanks!

I like the dad being in the dark for as long as possible, and the cell phone idea is a great way to have the mom start wondering but not be sure.

Her phone rings while she is getting fucked by her son from behind and she lets it go to voicemail, or just simply a text she ignores until later. She is out of it from day drinking and so she doesn’t check her phone until later. When she sees the message that her husband is looking for her she thinks she remembers it coming through while she was being fucked but isn’t quite sure through the haze and just chalks it up to misremembering.

She does remember that her husband had more energy than usual and that his cock felt bigger and harder than usual as well.

damn hot premise

 

[Carnevil9]

So since this zombie has been resurrected, I might as well ask: did this story ever get written and posted? I'd read it!

 

[Rob_Royale]

So since this zombie has been resurrected, I might as well ask: did this story ever get written and posted? I'd read it!

The OP hasn't posted in a few years.