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Oh My, My Hot Mom In Miami (OPEN)
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Corrected typo.
Does the woman in question know you're posting her pics on an erotic literature site?
By the way, unless you're looking to role play you're in the wrong board. There's a reason the site owners want to approve or deny all stories before they're on the site.
Does the woman in question know you're posting her pics on an erotic literature site?
By the way, unless you're looking to role play you're in the wrong board. There's a reason the site owners want to approve or deny all stories before they're on the site.
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To answer your question, yes.
And yes, I'm looking to role-play. I'm suggesting a scenario with its basis being from my reality.
So if I'm in the right spot, great.
If not, tell me which one I should be in and I'll move if it bothers you that much.
I've already been told to leave one section, so I can do it again.
By the way, so far I've had two people swoop down and just go at me for breaking these rules as if a crime. Um, I'm new here. Maybe take that into consideration with the way you're approaching me or other future rookies. It's just, "Rahhhhh! Rules! Rules! Rules!"
Ease up a bit, huh?
And I caution the response of: "If you don't like it, go somewhere else." Because that would carry the suggestion of motive behind coming in hot banging on about rules.
The actual post above - Oh Mio My Mom In Miami (thinking about changing the title) just started off meaning to be just a quick little blurb to bring whoever might be interested in it up to speed on where I was coming from dealing with the type of mom I have and her annoying obsession of being on a reality TV show and talk about clothes and makeup and shopping but it's really her wanting to be like all "Look at me". Whatever total tangent.
Obviously I can go off on a lot of tangents talking about my mom (who I'm referring to with a meta-fictional name, Erica - which I kinda did a rush pick when writing Oh Mio My Hot Mom In Miami and not sure if I feel it fits her. I'm always open to creative and constructive input, so if anyone who has read the Miami Episode and the other Lit E Forum posts I've wrote (which can be found by clicking my name)
Anyhow, I was just going to write a little intro and it was like suddenly I was I guess transported back to her Miami audition (I don't know about anyone else, but when I'm recalling any kind of game changing moment in life, I really do feel like I've been "transported" back into the memory. Everything around me is fuzzy and out of focus behind the memory I'm back at... sort of like a VR version of it where I'm like right behind and above the "me" in the memory. Make sense? I guess it's just basically I daydream deep.)
So next thing I know, I was just typing the all the backstory leading to going to Miami with my mom because I thought the whole "audition in her hotel room" sounded cheesy and "Guy Smugly" looked like the kind of cheesy adult (kinda like Steve's dad (who's name is also Steve) who has probably worked the "hotel room audition" angle successfully before. I mean, there's was just no way him flying Erica out first class and paying for a two-day stay at the swanky hotel was his maiden attempt, you feel me?)
It's when I got to the part where I was reflecting on the moment I realized I was going to have to do at least something to skew the odds back in my favor just enough where I couldn't either look like I did it or at the very least, not intentionally... even just typing that now is like almost pulling me into the wormhole to that memory - totally Donnie Darko, I know, but not really - but just like just then now, then I sort of saw how much I'd typed and just like that, I was out of the memory and looking over what I'd typed.
And you know what? I think it's the best thing I've written (and I'm just getting into the game of a writer's regimen and applying it to a "write what you know" topic that obviously isn't mainstream and a surface reaction is to the taboo, so to speak, so other writing sites don't exactly have a section for my topic. So I've been trying out this site.
And so far, I've had the thing with the rules - which ok, yeah I get it, I own the mistakes, but remember, I'm new - and that's it. No comment whatsoever about the piece that I wrote. I suppose if people refer to it as a "story."
But you know what I haven't got? Any sort of respect one writer should have for another. I put down some of the most straight up honest writing I've even thought I was capable of. And considering the topic... it's part of the reason I didn't take the reader with me past that moment of realization. Plus, I thought it was an actual good point structurally to invite ideas of where either the reader thinks things went or how they would hope/want them to. So the idea of using this scene from my reality as a source for other writers/roleplayers who want to find out where it went as well as pondering possible avenues of the imagination. I feel pretty fucking confident in describing who Erica is as a "character." Or if I'm wrong and didn't, feel free to share where I failed.
(I had thought about - and still consider it - just sort of short handing who my mom is and what she looks like/acts like by naming some of the people that I would "cast" as Erica if I was making a movie of any of the "scenes" I've been imagining her in lately, seriously its a lot. But as a writer, I think that would l be cheating. My job is to use words to the best of my ability to pull the reader as far into the memory with me. But that's not to say I'm not planning on it later. Yet somehow I get the feeling if I do, I'm going to get hammered for breaking some rule. It's going to take some viewing of other Forums to see what is out there that doesn't have someone pointing out what rules are being broke. Therefore if I see a post using pics in the way I want to and they're not getting flagged, I should be able to post something in the very same way and not get flagged.)
Anyway, I didn't even mean to write this much. I hope I didn't break any rules trying to explain myself and bring you, and you the reader, into my "story" but I think of it in "meta" terms like Larry David playing a character named Larry on Curb Your Enthusiam.
You know what, while I'm getting this all out there, I want to give a shout out to the Darlene and Tommy McFarlane stories that I guess premiered here and apparently had a following for its run of 8 "stories" (I heard the Halloween one and the second Prom one were the most popular of the series. All things considered, I can see why the success of the Halloween prank made the "story" a favorite. Its definitely one of mine)
Its because of and after reading all of the Darlene and Tommy stories that I was like, "Whoa, here's someone writing about a very specific type of "relationship" between Darlene and Tommy that mirrored mine with my mom who has the same MILF image the background people in that world have of Darlene. A topper was also how Darlene and Erica both - while aware of how they turn heads when entering a room - are oblivious to how younger guys have unanimously anointed MILF status (and all of what goes with it) upon them. To say reading the way the author introduced Darlene and her look (aside from some of the same "paid for parts" Darlene doesn't look much like Erica at all, it's more about the personality) was surreal to say the least.
That connection is what inspired me to see it's possible to write about my mom and some of the stuff that I found myself "daydreaming" a different outcome. Obviously I had to go down a hella rabbit hole on the web to track down all of the Darlene and Tommy stories since the author removed them from the site after what went down between the parties involved. I don't blame him, but it did make it hard to track down the other stories, two of which he didn't - was going to - make it on to Lit E.
Man, when I write about something involving this topic... I really go..
And hey, I get it. What I'm writing about - at a surface glance - isn't going to interest everyone for whatever reason. I fully expect to get judged and whatnot. But if it's going to be over this rule or that rule being broken (and a minor fuck up from what I can see. It hasn't caused any disruption) how about at least read it and toss in what you hate about it if you want. Just at least say what or why you hated it.
I'll be taking a peek at anyone who comments in any way, to see if they've written anything & had the same courage to put it on here. If there's stories, bet on me reading them and offering some words. On the story.
Because that's what matters.
Stories.
Not rules.
Nothing great was created following the rules. Not ever.
Before reacting and responding about a rule being broken (especially one that hasn't disrupted anyone) it's important to see what it is that's breaking the rule. To really look at it, read it. Heck, especially if you're actually someone with authority on the site. If it's just some site narc with nothing better to do than nit pick newbies breaking rules, then I really don't give a shit about what they may have to say about what I write because I already know the place inside them from where it'll be coming from. But hey, if you're one of these "Mods" (it'd help if you'd identify yourself as one) then ok, tap my shoulder about a rule being broken, but then how about - if you're a writer that has produced things - mentioning something about the content of this thing that broke the rule? You know how it feels when someone says something intelligent about what you wrote - be it supportive or criticism. That's how writers foster a community of support and positivity. Isn't that what you guys want over here?
There's a lot to respond to here. Give me what you got. About any which what not in there. Let's keep it real.
And yes, I'm looking to role-play. I'm suggesting a scenario with its basis being from my reality.
So if I'm in the right spot, great.
If not, tell me which one I should be in and I'll move if it bothers you that much.
I've already been told to leave one section, so I can do it again.
By the way, so far I've had two people swoop down and just go at me for breaking these rules as if a crime. Um, I'm new here. Maybe take that into consideration with the way you're approaching me or other future rookies. It's just, "Rahhhhh! Rules! Rules! Rules!"
Ease up a bit, huh?
And I caution the response of: "If you don't like it, go somewhere else." Because that would carry the suggestion of motive behind coming in hot banging on about rules.
The actual post above - Oh Mio My Mom In Miami (thinking about changing the title) just started off meaning to be just a quick little blurb to bring whoever might be interested in it up to speed on where I was coming from dealing with the type of mom I have and her annoying obsession of being on a reality TV show and talk about clothes and makeup and shopping but it's really her wanting to be like all "Look at me". Whatever total tangent.
Obviously I can go off on a lot of tangents talking about my mom (who I'm referring to with a meta-fictional name, Erica - which I kinda did a rush pick when writing Oh Mio My Hot Mom In Miami and not sure if I feel it fits her. I'm always open to creative and constructive input, so if anyone who has read the Miami Episode and the other Lit E Forum posts I've wrote (which can be found by clicking my name)
Anyhow, I was just going to write a little intro and it was like suddenly I was I guess transported back to her Miami audition (I don't know about anyone else, but when I'm recalling any kind of game changing moment in life, I really do feel like I've been "transported" back into the memory. Everything around me is fuzzy and out of focus behind the memory I'm back at... sort of like a VR version of it where I'm like right behind and above the "me" in the memory. Make sense? I guess it's just basically I daydream deep.)
So next thing I know, I was just typing the all the backstory leading to going to Miami with my mom because I thought the whole "audition in her hotel room" sounded cheesy and "Guy Smugly" looked like the kind of cheesy adult (kinda like Steve's dad (who's name is also Steve) who has probably worked the "hotel room audition" angle successfully before. I mean, there's was just no way him flying Erica out first class and paying for a two-day stay at the swanky hotel was his maiden attempt, you feel me?)
It's when I got to the part where I was reflecting on the moment I realized I was going to have to do at least something to skew the odds back in my favor just enough where I couldn't either look like I did it or at the very least, not intentionally... even just typing that now is like almost pulling me into the wormhole to that memory - totally Donnie Darko, I know, but not really - but just like just then now, then I sort of saw how much I'd typed and just like that, I was out of the memory and looking over what I'd typed.
And you know what? I think it's the best thing I've written (and I'm just getting into the game of a writer's regimen and applying it to a "write what you know" topic that obviously isn't mainstream and a surface reaction is to the taboo, so to speak, so other writing sites don't exactly have a section for my topic. So I've been trying out this site.
And so far, I've had the thing with the rules - which ok, yeah I get it, I own the mistakes, but remember, I'm new - and that's it. No comment whatsoever about the piece that I wrote. I suppose if people refer to it as a "story."
But you know what I haven't got? Any sort of respect one writer should have for another. I put down some of the most straight up honest writing I've even thought I was capable of. And considering the topic... it's part of the reason I didn't take the reader with me past that moment of realization. Plus, I thought it was an actual good point structurally to invite ideas of where either the reader thinks things went or how they would hope/want them to. So the idea of using this scene from my reality as a source for other writers/roleplayers who want to find out where it went as well as pondering possible avenues of the imagination. I feel pretty fucking confident in describing who Erica is as a "character." Or if I'm wrong and didn't, feel free to share where I failed.
(I had thought about - and still consider it - just sort of short handing who my mom is and what she looks like/acts like by naming some of the people that I would "cast" as Erica if I was making a movie of any of the "scenes" I've been imagining her in lately, seriously its a lot. But as a writer, I think that would l be cheating. My job is to use words to the best of my ability to pull the reader as far into the memory with me. But that's not to say I'm not planning on it later. Yet somehow I get the feeling if I do, I'm going to get hammered for breaking some rule. It's going to take some viewing of other Forums to see what is out there that doesn't have someone pointing out what rules are being broke. Therefore if I see a post using pics in the way I want to and they're not getting flagged, I should be able to post something in the very same way and not get flagged.)
Anyway, I didn't even mean to write this much. I hope I didn't break any rules trying to explain myself and bring you, and you the reader, into my "story" but I think of it in "meta" terms like Larry David playing a character named Larry on Curb Your Enthusiam.
You know what, while I'm getting this all out there, I want to give a shout out to the Darlene and Tommy McFarlane stories that I guess premiered here and apparently had a following for its run of 8 "stories" (I heard the Halloween one and the second Prom one were the most popular of the series. All things considered, I can see why the success of the Halloween prank made the "story" a favorite. Its definitely one of mine)
Its because of and after reading all of the Darlene and Tommy stories that I was like, "Whoa, here's someone writing about a very specific type of "relationship" between Darlene and Tommy that mirrored mine with my mom who has the same MILF image the background people in that world have of Darlene. A topper was also how Darlene and Erica both - while aware of how they turn heads when entering a room - are oblivious to how younger guys have unanimously anointed MILF status (and all of what goes with it) upon them. To say reading the way the author introduced Darlene and her look (aside from some of the same "paid for parts" Darlene doesn't look much like Erica at all, it's more about the personality) was surreal to say the least.
That connection is what inspired me to see it's possible to write about my mom and some of the stuff that I found myself "daydreaming" a different outcome. Obviously I had to go down a hella rabbit hole on the web to track down all of the Darlene and Tommy stories since the author removed them from the site after what went down between the parties involved. I don't blame him, but it did make it hard to track down the other stories, two of which he didn't - was going to - make it on to Lit E.
Man, when I write about something involving this topic... I really go..
And hey, I get it. What I'm writing about - at a surface glance - isn't going to interest everyone for whatever reason. I fully expect to get judged and whatnot. But if it's going to be over this rule or that rule being broken (and a minor fuck up from what I can see. It hasn't caused any disruption) how about at least read it and toss in what you hate about it if you want. Just at least say what or why you hated it.
I'll be taking a peek at anyone who comments in any way, to see if they've written anything & had the same courage to put it on here. If there's stories, bet on me reading them and offering some words. On the story.
Because that's what matters.
Stories.
Not rules.
Nothing great was created following the rules. Not ever.
Before reacting and responding about a rule being broken (especially one that hasn't disrupted anyone) it's important to see what it is that's breaking the rule. To really look at it, read it. Heck, especially if you're actually someone with authority on the site. If it's just some site narc with nothing better to do than nit pick newbies breaking rules, then I really don't give a shit about what they may have to say about what I write because I already know the place inside them from where it'll be coming from. But hey, if you're one of these "Mods" (it'd help if you'd identify yourself as one) then ok, tap my shoulder about a rule being broken, but then how about - if you're a writer that has produced things - mentioning something about the content of this thing that broke the rule? You know how it feels when someone says something intelligent about what you wrote - be it supportive or criticism. That's how writers foster a community of support and positivity. Isn't that what you guys want over here?
There's a lot to respond to here. Give me what you got. About any which what not in there. Let's keep it real.
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Thanks for the tip.
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