The Djinni Slut

[PrevertOne]

My new story, "The Djinni Slut" https://www.literotica.com/s/the-djinni-slut has just dropped. My thanks to Todger 65 for the edit (plus a tip of the hat to Clemestra for the inspiration ). Hope you enjoy.

 

[SyleusSnow]

Not to my taste, but a creative concept. Some very quick observations:

Maybe explain the underlying concept of mixing of mythologies (e.g. Gaiman's idea im American Gods that gods are created by belief and powered by worship. Pratchett used the same idea in Small Gods.) The pace seems breathless- all action and no time for reflection by the protagonist, other than short moments of outrage. If she was turned into "a slut" I'd expect her to welcome the sex openly right from the start. She seemed to go from being outraged and unwilling at the start to loving the genie with no progression or reflection.

The bit where she died and met the angel of death was not clear at all. I had to read it a few times to understand that's what happened and who the angel was.

Just my $0.02.

 

[JackLuis]

My new story, "The Djinni Slut" https://www.literotica.com/s/the-djinni-slut has just dropped. My thanks to Todger 65 for the edit (plus a tip of the hat to Clemestra for the inspiration ). Hope you enjoy.

"Nothing succeeds like Excess!"

 

[ChuckWolf]

Overall, I liked it (even though it's not really my type of kink) and liked the dialogue and felt it was easy to read/follow.

However, the birth control stuff & the knife stuff with Larry were both boner-killers for me.