Trying to Hock Up a Sequel.

[jaF0]

In 'Mother Knows Best' a 40 something convinces her happily married daughter to date a coworker. Part of that is agreeing to be the double on a date. Mom isn't thrilled with how chilly the daughter is acting and helps get things heated up. There ends up being plenty of same room action, but nothing direct as far as incest.

It ends openly with plans for subsequent double dates and discussion of getting the younger sister involved once she comes of age.

I don't know where to go. I'm thinking one of the girls doesn't catch on as well as Mom hopes and there needs to be some Motherly discipline. Maybe Mom organizes a gang bang of sorts for all three of them. Maybe a nude night party when the girls have to service the men at Mom's direction as a Dom.

I don't want to go Non-con or BDSM as such, but some sort of rig to hold the girls down while the guys do things could be in order. Maybe some spankings by Mom. Maybe Mom holding their heads while guys fuck their mouths.

 

[SamScribble]

Not an answer. But another question: If you are a writer, why would you ask other writers what you should write? You already have half a dozen quite interesting ideas of your own.

Best of luck with whichever one you choose to go with.

 

[jaF0]

Sounding things out.

 

[AwkwardMD]

Incest stories, by and large, shortchange the motivations that would lead close family members to break taboo. See, want, fuck. If you want to take the time to craft something grounded and plausible, the readwrs will reward that.

If you don't, they will like it anyway.

 

[jaF0]

See, I'm not sure I want to go there rather than skirt around the edges.

Mom telling the girls what to do, offering them up, positioning them for the guys or primping them is not the same as licking them or having them lick her.

 

[Hypoxia]

How do you want the story to end?

 

[AfterDusk]

How do you want the story to end?

Agreed. Figure out the ending and work backwards.

Sometimes I write the ending at the same time as I write the beginning, then I fill in the fluff.

 

[jaF0]

I don't really do endings. None of mine so far has a real conclusion.

Ultimately, Mom would end up turning the girls into full blown sluts like herself. I haven't decided if any of their husbands, boyfriends, etc. would ever know. Unless maybe they found out accidentally. but I don't do conflict either, so that result would need to be worked out.

Possibly she could pimp out the younger daughter to help the family business.

 

[TarnishedPenny]

In 'Mother Knows Best' a 40 something convinces her happily married daughter to date a coworker. Part of that is agreeing to be the double on a date. Mom isn't thrilled with how chilly the daughter is acting and helps get things heated up. There ends up being plenty of same room action, but nothing direct as far as incest.

It ends openly with plans for subsequent double dates and discussion of getting the younger sister involved once she comes of age.

I don't know where to go. I'm thinking one of the girls doesn't catch on as well as Mom hopes and there needs to be some Motherly discipline. Maybe Mom organizes a gang bang of sorts for all three of them. Maybe a nude night party when the girls have to service the men at Mom's direction as a Dom.

I don't want to go Non-con or BDSM as such, but some sort of rig to hold the girls down while the guys do things could be in order. Maybe some spankings by Mom. Maybe Mom holding their heads while guys fuck their mouths.

Nothing personal, but you asked...

OK, Mom is a dom (including spankings), the girls are tied down so the boys can do them and Mom forcibly helps the guys facefuck her daughters...

But you don’t want to go Non-Con or BDSM. And you want to stop short of incest. Really?

From where I sit and given your ideas, it has to be one of those three. And incest is trump.

 

[SimonDoom]

Incest stories, by and large, shortchange the motivations that would lead close family members to break taboo. See, want, fuck. If you want to take the time to craft something grounded and plausible, the readwrs will reward that.

If you don't, they will like it anyway.

I agree with you that Lit readers reward authors for taking time with the motivation. The stats seem to back that up.

But personally, I see incest as a whimsical category. As a reader, I usually demand only a semblance of plausibility, and as an author that's what I strive for. I don't want to take 6 pages to get from see to want, or from want to fuck. Although I guess I sort of did that in my 8-chapter series.

 

[Hypoxia]

I agree with you that Lit readers reward authors for taking time with the motivation. The stats seem to back that up.

But personally, I see incest as a whimsical category. As a reader, I usually demand only a semblance of plausibility, and as an author that's what I strive for. I don't want to take 6 pages to get from see to want, or from want to fuck. Although I guess I sort of did that in my 8-chapter series.

Motivation can be all-important in Mature and Romance but not so much so in the fetish categories, including Incest-Taboo. Kin-sex occurs in the first one or two LIT pages in most of my IT stories -- I think the slowest waited till page three of eight and did not depend on the buildup, but it was unknowing incest.

I see IT as a two-pronged dilemma: 1) pander to pervo readers and 2) try to make myself half-believe it. As an author, it's a puzzle-piece, like constructing a mystery. Just WHY is she lowering herself onto the cock of dad-bro-unc?

ObTopic: If Mom and daughters don't slurp clits or tits and avoid finger-fucks then it's probably not incest. Mom guiding a cock or three into her daughters' orifices likely doesn't count, even if she lubed a finger first. Is she training her girls to pull trains? The story goes into Fetish or Group.

 

[jaF0]

But you don’t want to go Non-Con or BDSM. And you want to stop short of incest. Really?

Exactly my dilemma. You DO understand!!!

 

[Hypoxia]

Exactly my dilemma. You DO understand!!!

Group if they pull trains. Interracial if BBCs abound. Fetish if they wear leather.

 

[TarnishedPenny]

Exactly my dilemma. You DO understand!!!

Indeed, but as I said, Incest is trump. And anything which smells of incest is Incest. And Mom + daughters + sexual activities smells of incest.

 

[Hypoxia]

Indeed, but as I said, Incest is trump. And anything which smells of incest is Incest. And Mom + daughters + sexual activities smells of incest.

Depends. I've put sibling and GM incest in Group stories, no prob. But Laurel decides. Sometimes cousins are incestuous, sometimes not. Close kinfolks slurping are incest; thinking and touching, maybe not, depending on context. Mom dominating but not fucking daughters doesn't sound like incest to me.

 

[Kantarii]

See, I'm not sure I want to go there rather than skirt around the edges.

Mom telling the girls what to do, offering them up, positioning them for the guys or primping them is not the same as licking them or having them lick her.

I’m gonna chuckle because you said, “skirt around the edges.” That’s kinda funnyKant

 

[Zeb_Carter]

Another question? Why would a mother encourage her married daughter to cheat on her husband? If mom wants daughter, why include another man?

Now I write both Incest and Loving Wives stories and I would never... well to each their own.

 

[Hypoxia]

Another question? Why would a mother encourage her married daughter to cheat on her husband? If mom wants daughter, why include another man?

Now I write both Incest and Loving Wives stories and I would never... well to each their own.

This is fucking LIT fantasyland where anything can happen. But some of what purportedly happens out in the fucking real world is weirder than our pervo fictions. People are nutz. We just have to find a narrative.