Do You Fuck With The Reader?

[RetroFan]

One of my Erotic Couplings stories - Bridget the Bossy Bridezilla - would have set off a perfect storm of hatred in Loving Wives if posted there.

The story is basically about a spoiled and selfish young woman whose response to her long-suffering fiancé calling her out on some of her bullshit is to cheat on him with his loser younger brother (whom she cannot stand) and allow him to do sexual things with her that she prohibits her fiancé from doing. And while her fiancé also cheats with a cougar client in an open marriage, the vile and vindictive young bride-to-be cheating out of pure spite is never caught or held to account for her infidelity.

In this story female characters treat male characters badly (one support character frequently calls her boyfriend a fucking idiot, another causes a man so much stress he gets sick), that male characters are often portrayed as bumbling buffoons with the females more intelligent, and that the women get away with behaving the way they do, I can't imagine the Loving Wives crowd being very loving towards this story can you?

 

[gunhilltrain]

All my LW stories poke one faction or another with a sharp stick. Comments are always a good laugh.

I have a story that appeared in LW about two days ago. It was not intended to be a mind-fuck.

To their credit, the readers over there pay attention. I've never gotten so many votes or so many comments (most of them negative). And yet I got six favorites so far and one new follower.

 

[Professor_Chaos]

Fucking with the reader

This won't be in LW, but I've had a story on the tip of my brain for years now. The characters are a pair of opposite twins, a teddy bear, two sex partners, an antagonist, etc. Trick? They're all the same person. It's more a non-lethal stick I plan on poking them with but should definitely fuck with them.

 

[Edward Teach]

Do You Fuck With The Reader?

Hell yes! At least the female ones who ask me nicely.

Now there is wishful thinking if i ever heard it.

And then there is JBJ who only wants to fuck with the authors here in the AH. That's the reason for all these idiotic threads of his. He could care less about your answer as long as he get some attention. So here James, you're getting a whole minute and a half of my attention.

Hi Tx, Your post reminded me of my first feedback on my first story, "A Honeymoon Affair," about an older man who fucks a 22yr old newlywed on her honeymoon. Some man sent me a picture of his pretty young wife and asked if I'd be interested in fucking her. Being new to Lit, I had no idea that he was probably serious and gave him a rather mean, sarcastic reply. Oh well.

Hope all is well with you and yours,
Teach.

 

[FEELINGLUCKYPUNK]

TEX'S family coat of arms features their famous creed, SIC SEMPER DOOFUS. Iy translates to: NO HAT, NO CATTLE, BUT LOTSA BULL.

 

[KeithD]

Reported.

 

[TxRad]

Hi Tx, Your post reminded me of my first feedback on my first story, "A Honeymoon Affair," about an older man who fucks a 22yr old newlywed on her honeymoon. Some man sent me a picture of his pretty young wife and asked if I'd be interested in fucking her. Being new to Lit, I had no idea that he was probably serious and gave him a rather mean, sarcastic reply. Oh well.

Hope all is well with you and yours,
Teach.

Hey Teach, where ya been? Lurking does not suit you.

Yeah, back in the early days here, I got some interesting and quite tempting offers of all kinds. A couple or three even panned out. The rest are water under an unknown bridge. Experience is what you get when you didn't get what you wanted in the first place.

I hope you and yours are doing well also.