Creepy twins come of age

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I've had one or two creepy twins threads on here so I wanted to try and pitch a different one. Instead of one where ththe lead Pursues the twins, the twins Pursue them.

1. Twins were homeschooled their whole life but move to a state where that isn't allowed. So their senior year, they go to high school. Their new classmates are freaked out by them but try to be polite despite the fact they're just so darn creepy.

1a. One of their classmates gets done with practice late and ends up showering alone. The light go out and when they come back on, the twins are in there with her, saying the water is out at their home. They all shower together but as it proceeds, they start questioning her and teasing her about how she seems nervous around them. They back her into a corner and keep pressing her with their questions as steam blankets everyone.

Which leads to the girl admitting she only acts nervous because she can't stop thinking about how sexy she finds them, then plants a kiss on both of them and fucks them silly.

1b. Girls have a number of boys interested in them but once the guys find out what the twins want, they run for the hills. One guy though is desperate and agrees to whatever they ask. Leading him to be tied up in their bedroom with the light of a full moon shining down on him through a window.

2. Woman marries a rich guy and things her life is set. Sure, he has daughters, but they are away at boarding school so she'll never have to see them. However, when the school burns down they come home and are very interested interested in their new stepmother.

2a. Woman succumbs to the twins' lust and it's revealed her marriage was part of a deal they had with their dad, either as a way to keep their behavior under control or as part of a magical pact where they used dark magic to aide his business endeavors.

2B. Woman has daughter who befriends the twins and winds up seduced by them. She not only has sex with them but starts dressing and talking like them. Mom then notices her daughter and the twins have ordered things online and when they arrive they are in Mom's size.

a. They are the twins outfits in her sizes

b. The package has a dog Leash and a number of ropes, lingerie, and fetish wear, as well as a book of dark magic spells.

Feel free to pitch your own ideas, whether humorous, creepy, or some other mix.
 
Twins... hmm, some interesting ideas here.

I've got twins in my current work in progress. They don't get on with each other, not at all.
 
Are these the same creepy twins from The Shining, but all grown up and of legal age? That would be a good basis for an erotic horror story.
 
Twins are fun. Identicals have their own dynamics. Fraternals can be started the usual way, or by IVF, or mom could have pulled a train with a mixed-race sports team and has no idea who fathered who. Fraternals can be similar or very different -- think of DeVito and Schwarzenegger. Is twinly creepiness due to nature or nurture or both?
 
Twins are fun. Identicals have their own dynamics. Fraternals can be started the usual way, or by IVF, or mom could have pulled a train with a mixed-race sports team and has no idea who fathered who. Fraternals can be similar or very different -- think of DeVito and Schwarzenegger. Is twinly creepiness due to nature or nurture or both?

I explored the lure of Twincest in my story, "My Sexy Sisters," possibly my most beloved story of all time. Not that I am shamelessly plugging it, no not at all, that is RIGHT OUT!
 
I explored the lure of Twincest in my story, "My Sexy Sisters," possibly my most beloved story of all time. Not that I am shamelessly plugging it, no not at all, that is RIGHT OUT!
But are they creepy? Slutty twins are easy. Creepy twins take more work.
 
Carnevil: same archetype but not ghosts. Essentially they can talk in synch without thinking about it, finish each other's sentences and have a stare that can bore right into you. For extra fun I figured the twins in these stories also do creepy things or have creepy stuff happen around them, whether they intend I think or not (like a school burning down without any evidence of arson, birds falling down dead from the sky when they walk under them, etc.)

Hypoxia: that's an interesting point and could have some fun spins. I will admit, I've only met identical twins on two occasions and in both cases, environmental factors and life made them look quite different. Alternatively, I've met fraternal twins who look practically identical.

Maybe the twins have a complex about not being identical so do what they can to look like each other. They also bond a lot to try and deny they aren't.
 
My brother-in-law has an identical twin we've met. They despise each other. Go figure.
 
I have a buddy who is married to a twin. I asked him once how he tells his wife and his SIL apart. He said, "I don't bother to try. The other one just has to watch out for herself!"
 
...that's dark

Had another, more sapphic, incestous idea.

Twins were always together but once they turn 18, One of the twins, Sam, decides she wants to go it alone. She starts dressing in regular clothes, joins some activities around her school's campus, and even gets some "normal" friends. Her sister, Heather, is hurt and doubles down on the creepy.

Sam however isn't fitting in and is miserable. Her friends don't find her instaram posts of roadkill and graveyards funny, and the girls she tries to hook up with just want her for a 3 way with their boyfriend or are so vapid, she gets turned off.

Eventually, she comes clean to Heather, who is summoning a demon. She had been having wet dreams about her twin sister and didn't want hurt her. Heather admits she's been crushing on her for awhile and they make love while the summoned demon rips apart their school and ushers in an age of darkness.
 
I like the concept of "Irish twins", kids born less than a year apart. I expect they're rather more common than identicals or fraternals. I used 10-month-different Irish Twins in a couple of stories (and more if/when I resume writing). Those in A Taste of Kumquat are indeed creepy and synchronized.

The Creepy Identical Twins (CITs) trope is almost too easy. BFs never know which twin they're fucking. GFs might suspect, by flavor. More drama (or tragicomedy) is needed. Let's say our CITs have read too much LIT and set themselves a contest to seduce relatives: siblings, aunts-uncles, cousins, and finally their parents. Whoever does-em all first, wins. Hilarity ensues.

Decide how you want your twins story to end, and take it there.
 
Well the big thing is that I want them to be creepy beyond being identical twins. While those are fine ideas, They lack the creepy factor.

So if they did something like have a competition to seduce relatives, the encounters would need to have their relatives terrified.

For example: one of them goes to seduce an uncle and she seems to appear behind him as though from smoke. He feels her pressed against him and she feels ice cold. When she tries to whisper seductively into his ear, he feels as though spiders are crawling on his skin. He of course is extra worried about where the other twin is.

Yet...he can't help but feel aroused and twin quickly grabs hold of his manhood.

So a plot little that could happen but the twins need to be creepy.
 
Slightly less trite: the Secret Identical Twins. Nobody knows that there are two of them; they each pretend to be the same person, which makes them appear to have near god-like powers. Especially to the boyfriend, who says "I love you so much, I almost wish there were two of you!" And she surprises him with a threesome after "cloning" herself (really just stepping into another room and coming back with her sister).
 
Slightly less trite: the Secret Identical Twins. Nobody knows that there are two of them; they each pretend to be the same person, which makes them appear to have near god-like powers. Especially to the boyfriend, who says "I love you so much, I almost wish there were two of you!" And she surprises him with a threesome after "cloning" herself (really just stepping into another room and coming back with her sister).

And of course there is the opposite approach: everyone thinks they are twins, but it is really one person portraying two different personas. Possibly she actually believes that she is two people; either that or she is just putting on an act for some purpose.
 
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