Possible entry for the geek contest?

DragonCat91

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I normally just do fanfic, but in the past I dabbled with original fiction ideas. One of them being a world where humans are pets/not the dominant species. I figure the basis of the idea might work for the geek contest here, the fantasy/sci fi one. Or it might be stupid, but here goes.

Female lead is in a heavy heat (humans in this world have visible "heat" or estrus cycles), male lead is a stud purchased by the female lead's owner to sire her young. Male is put in with female and a short interaction occurs where he smells her heat scent (yeah, stronger noses too), causing him to get a rock hard erection, which in turn causes her to get a soaking wet genital area, and they proceed to have primal, animal-like sex multiple times in the span of about a day until her heat is quenched, then the two are separated. The ending will probably be the female lead wondering about the child she is now carrying, and if it's male, if he will be as handsome as his father.

Yeah. Suggestions needed for the dominant species, the "owners". Some kind of alien race for sure, but should they be like, reptiles, mammals, or something else entirely?

Also I'm toying with the idea of the male being a virgin, and picked as a stud because of some trait the breeders value, that he shares with the female. The female will have mated with "teaser males" before, as in, males that have been given vasectomies, but this is her first actual breeding/impregnation. The breeders keep a few of those around their females they don't want to breed yet.

Any other kind of constructive feedback also appreciated. If this idea is too stupid, please say so.
 
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I guess my point is "what's going to make me want to read this story?" I mean there isn't much seperating this from other stroke stories i've read.
 
I guess my point is "what's going to make me want to read this story?" I mean there isn't much seperating this from other stroke stories i've read.

Don't know what you mean by "stroke stories" but yeah, I get it. It needs more ideas, which I'm asking for.
 
sorry its a term i picked up from a different story site a "stroke story" is a story especially written to encourage the reader to stroke their naughty bits.
 
Apologies for the double post, some ideas.

Mating 1: Missionary, simply because they're not used to each other yet. Average sized cum load.

15 minutes pass, he naps, she stays awake.

Mating 2: He wakes up to her cupping his testicles in her hand and grinning at him lustily. His penis erects instantly, she gets on her knees and begs for doggy style, which he gives her. Slightly smaller cum load.

1 hour passes, they both nap.

The owners bring some food and water, they awake to a bit of a feast. Her heat scent is still strong.

Mating 3: She grabs his penis and strokes it until it hardens, then lines up her vaginal opening with it and lowers herself onto him, then holds him close and strokes his hair while humping downward until he shoots a small cum load into her.

He is still hard, but starting to soften. Only a few minutes pass.

Mating 4: He pins her down and mounts her, missionary again, but with wilder humping from both of them. He only shoots a single spurt of cum into her.

Her heat is quenched, and he is exhausted. The owners remove him from the room.

I think 4 matings will do. I still need to decide stuff about the species of the owners.
 
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