The Money Shot Thread

[LeandraNyx]

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[Naughty_Penpal]

Eventually, she felt John put his hands on her head, gripping her hair tight. He started to fuck her mouth and throat, pulling his cock almost all the way from her mouth before quickly thrusting it hard into her mouth, pulling her hair hard to force her mouth all the way over his cock. After perhaps twenty or so forceful strokes, John withdrew his cock and Karen felt jet after jet of hot spunk splash across her face. It felt like a lot, and she could feel it all over her face, running down her cheeks and chin. She licked her lips and could taste the cum, then John pushed the end of his cock back into her mouth. Karen sucked it gently, cleaning all the cum from the end of his cock.

 

[Naughty_Penpal]

She felt lightheaded, weak, totally overcome and as her pleasure peaked, she felt his cock twitching inside her, could hear him grunting with pleasure behind her. She felt jet after jet of spunk leave his pulsating cock, adding more juice to her already soaking wet pussy. She felt the weight of his body against hers as he fell against her, and he put one hand out onto the dresser to steady himself. His gasping breath was loud in her ear, and he tenderly kissed the back of her neck.

 

[CyranoJ]

Interesting exercise. I write sex scenes based a lot on build and repetition, so they're often pretty extravagant by the time we hit the money shot. Assuming everybody's orgasms count for "money shot" status, herewith from a story I'm working on:

She squealed into a faceful of Nura's delectably slippery sex as she went soaring past the point of no return, her pussy clenching wildly around Mack's prick as he hollered and buried himself to the root, Nura clamping her thighs meanwhile like a vise around her head as she gasped imprecations of lust while she bucked and squirted all over Oona's pretty features, half smothering her. Pleasure came in wave after wave as she felt the sperm splattering inside her: one volley, two, three, more, each thick jet of spunk drawing a fresh response as her pussy gripped his spitting cock and she fervently sucked Nura's clit and swallowed down as much of the sweet nectar dousing her face as she could. The act worked its familiar magic on the elasticity of time, and it seemed both a brief moment and a blissful eternity that the three lovers' bodies merged into one simultaneous howl of release.

 

[drkomacho__]

He came. Inside her. Grasping her hips. Her ass pushing back against him. She still wanted more. He grabbed for her skin as his cock filled her pussy with cum. Before his final spurt, he slapped her ass and pushed deeper into her. He pulled all the way out and gave her a taste of their work.

 

[member9458]

Ooh, can I add to the Literotica Cumpilation?

Suddenly there was another sharp jerk at the back of her head, and she opened her eyes to see Caleb beating off furiously above her face. In a split second she realized it was time to hit the showers, so she closed her eyes and stuck out her tongue and felt the first hot jet of his creamy passion streak across her forehead. She gasped and laughed, and felt more of his thick load splash across the bridge of her nose, the lid of her eye, her cheek, her lip, her tongue, her cheek again. "OH FUCK," she could hear Caleb moan, "fuck...fuck..." and she responded with a moan of her own, before licking her lips and swallowing what landed in her mouth. She wiped the spunk clean off her eye, swallowed that too, and opened her eyes to see Caleb, winded, sitting on the floor, his spent dong drooling onto the mat.

 

[NotWise]

She had lost control. I slipped my tongue through her deep creases and sucked her juices. I flicked it along and over her trigger again and again, until she dug her fingers into my leg and screamed through her orgasm.

 

[clistenovena]

Excellent Idea!

I have no idea what I'm doing, but here goes...

He placed his hand over her throat, at the place where his cock caused the bulge, watched the panic fill her eyes as she fought to pull away so she could get a wisp of air into her burning lungs. Her hands pushed hard at his thighs. He easily held her head in place as he fucked even more deeply into her mouth. She felt his cock swell rock hard, heard his roar of release, and tasted his salty tang right before she lost consciousness...

When she came to, he was using his finger to outline her bruised lips with the leftover cum.

 

[SimonDoom]

Suddenly, Chad's back arched and he couldn't hold back. He stepped close to Kymberly and held his cock down, pointing directly at her open pussy. Cum shot out of his hard cock in fast, violent spurts. Kymberly looked with satisfaction at the thick streams of his cum frosting her thighs and tummy and spilling down between her legs into the raw, fleshy furrow of her sex. A few thick drops even landed right on the lips of her pussy. Kymberly's back arched against the elevator wall, and she came too, for the second time in the elevator in front of this man she barely knew.

-- From Hotel Exhibitionist Ch. 03

 

[ElectricBlue]

He slid above her, their bellies slick with their sweat, and deep inside them both long pleasure began, churning and building from deep within their centres. His churning seed and her blood on the high moon began its count to her beginning days. Morgayne's time was not here, not yet, so no magick wasted but her body a promise and her mind left behind. Artur mindless as he fucked upon her flesh, the thick hard slide of his cock up and down, up and down, until with a massive gasp he arched his back and, pressing his swollen balls deep to the wet slide of her cunt, shot a great stream up between her breasts right to her throat.

 

[Zeb_Carter]

"Oh god, I'm coming, I'm coming..."

Then she lost the ability to speak. The noises coming from her throat were unintelligible. Meaningless gibberish. Then her whole body collapsed and her hand stopped moving the dildo. She still held onto it tightly, but didn't move it again. She was shivering and shaking with internal orgasms like I had never seen her before. Then her eyes opened. She didn't jump like I thought she would. She smiled up at me.

"Did you enjoy the show?"

 

[LeandraNyx]

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[ChloeTzang]

Try to keep it to a paragraph, when possible.

I can never keep it to just one paragraph.... but here goes.... (and the setting, btw, is a Catholic church, Catholic High School student - chinese, 18 of course...)

That sensation? That experience? The first time Trey came in me, how to describe it? How can one describe the indescribable? His cock had me impaled, thrust deep inside my sex, his rigid length pulsing and throbbing against the walls of my channel as he prepared to flood me with his thickly spurting cum.

“Yes … yes …yeeeeees!” My voice sobbed, my sex spasmed and danced on his cock, gripping him, clasping him, squeezing down on the rigid length of him as a great golden wave of pleasure swept through me, far more intense than those earlier climaxes, overwhelming me, holding me helpless across the altar as his cock throbbed and pulsed inside me.

“Nnnugghhhh.” Behind me, Trey grunted deeply, humped himself hard into me and I felt it. Felt that shotgun blast eruption of his cum spurting outwards in a flooding jet against my cervix, where the tip of him brushed lightly against me. The first time a man had cum inside me. That sensation was brand new, never before imagined or experienced, that spurting eruption within me, his cock throbbing and pulsing where I clasped him, his cum erupting inside my body, spurting within me, flooding my sex with his cum all while I shook and quivered and moaned through my own climax.

“Nnnuuughhhh.” Trey grunted a second time, jolting my body, forcing me hard against the altar, moving my body with the impact. White hot blasts of cum spurting inside me one after the other as I sprawled face down across the altar, my legs splayed wide apart. He stood between them, looking down at my butt, my back, the back of my head, his cock pumping his cum into me in an endlessly spurting flood that went on and on and on.

“Ooohhhh …. Ooohhhhh.” My sex spasmed on his throbbing length, his cum jetted out, flooding me and even as he was still pumping into me, I could feel it starting to seep out of me, lubricating the movements of his rigid cockshaft within my sex, squelching outwards at the point where our bodies joined, his cum oozing from my sex as his jerky movements slowed at last.

“Oh Trey …. Trey…” Lying before him, his cock impaling me, throbbing inside me, I was glowing, my body alive in the aftermath of my own climax, so aware that my sex was flooded with his cum, that he’d taken me and finished inside me. I’d never felt such pleasure, such intoxicating enjoyment and excitement, I’d never been so aware of my own body as I was in that moment in time where he’d finished inside me and we were still joined together, where he was still inside me.

Lying on the Church altar, the white altar cloth cool against my breasts, against my cheek, I was unable to move. My body had turned to jello, my legs and arms were outside my ability to command. I sprawled face down on the altar, just as Trey had finished with me, breathing in great gasps, helpless, Trey leaning forward, still pressed up against me, still inside me, his cock faintly pulsing.

 

[LeandraNyx]

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[ChloeTzang]

Yeah, that one was long, but also totally worth it; nice!

She thought so too

 

[member9458]

I really like this one...it's funny ("time to hit the showers," lol), but not in a way that detracts from its sexiness, either. Plus, the approach is interesting: a male orgasm as experienced from the female POV. It's very realistic and quite immersive, too.

Oh man, if you liked that, I'd love to hear your opinion on the whole thing; the story's called Graduation and it has two chapters so far. It's not gonna scratch a non-con itch (there's one small bit in the second chapter, but I'm such a wuss that I apologized for it, unprompted, days later), but...frankly, I'm always going to chase the approval of someone who even for a brief second had a Futaba avatar, so bear with me while I seize...okay, monopolize this moment.

...You know, speaking of approval, it wouldn't be nice of me to completely derail this thread with my groveling! Here's a money shot from chapter one, the result of a handjob our heroine gave our hero while she straddled his body:

She said, "Show me what this cute face looks like when I make this beautiful cock cum."

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My God, did he show her! He cried out, his face expanding, his pupils shrinking. She felt him jerk under her body and twitch in her hand before his first rope of sperm shot forth and spattered across his belly. His eyes never left hers, and while each new shot brought a new groan and a new variation of his excited, awestruck face, her expression never changed save for a grin that ever-so-slowly widened through his eruption. When it was over, she leaned in and sucked one more kiss out of him. Then another one, because he had become such a good kisser.

 

[LeandraNyx]

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[clistenovena]

Oh, hell's yes, though admittedly, I am biased; brutal noncon is my most favoritest thing in the world, beaten only by kittens and cotton candy.

Thanks. I don't do much writing. Out loud anyway. Mostly all in my head.

Kittens!!!

 

[clistenovena]

By the way, did I mention how really great this thread is?

Damn great.

Oh, yes it is.

 

[member9458]

Okay, so I honestly don't know what "Futaba" is...

...I was afraid of this. Okay, you know that avatar you had a while back of that redheaded nerd girl in a dark room, leaning into her computer? That's a character from a video game called Persona 5. Her name's Futaba. It's Japanese. I am a huge nerd and I'm sorry for nerding up this excellent thread. My lunch money's in the mail.

BTW, I hardly think you need "approval" from me, lol. A 4.86 rating with 175k views is nothing to sneeze at. Congrats!

Still pretty damned flabbergasted at that TBH. Honestly, I knew it'd do well, but I didn't think it'd do that well. It kinda made writing the second chapter, which was more setting up for the things I wanted to do, a bit of a bitch because I knew my ego was gonna take a small hit...though I obviously need a bigger one because I'm hijacking your thread again, holy hell. Here, a selection from a story I didn't write nearly as well:

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And that was it for him. The moment he pulled out, a white hot jet of cum shot out and traveled all the way up to Erica's face, gluing her right eye shut. He roared through the rest of his incredible volley; Erica twitched and groaned in a mini-orgasm as several shots landed on her neck, her chest tattoo, her tits, and her stomach. The last of it dribbled out over the word "Salvation" [that was tatooed above her pubic area].

Erica laughed as she came down from her orgasm, in awe of the huge load that she was anointed with. She wiped away only the cum on her eye, then glanced down to admired the thick streaks of goo splashed all over her torso. "Oh, boy!" she giggled, "Don't I feel appreciated?"

 

[StrangeTamer]

I'll play, from W.I.P Rebirth Ch. 03.

With Arianna’s breathing turning to rapid panting under her, Mindy adds a third finger to Arianna’s warm hole and intensifies her attention to her clit. With Arianna starting to spasm under her, constantly jerking her head against her clit. Mindy can feel Arianna’s release building within her. Soon she feels her lover’s back arching up and her head being squeezed between Arianna’s soft thighs as she hears her soft cries of pleasure muffled by her own pussy pressed against Arianna’s face.


Feeling the wonderful feeling of her nipples being pulled and Arianna’s head shaking in orgasmic bliss against her clit Mindy can’t holed out any longer, with her head still between Arianna’s thighs she uncontrollably shakes on top of Arianna’s warm sweaty body and screams her release into her lover’s pussy.

 

[Areala-chan]

I'll play too!

From "Crash Into Me":

The most beautifully expressive use of the f-bomb I'll ever hear blasts from her lips as she holds my head in place and lowers herself again. Following on its heels are a series of rapid inhales and exhales, each one holding different words, new words, sometimes my name, sometimes not, sometimes just a cry as my tongue tickles her clit and coaxes the climax out of hiding and into the starlight. She gives herself over to the moment, permitting the wrong to become right, accepting her own sister is the cause of it all.

I grab her calves, one soft and supple, the other firm and unyielding, and hold her as she holds my head, letting the waves of heat and pleasure and panic and deliverance carry her away into a world where there is no pain, no rejection, no disorder, no chaos, only us. Her and me. Lynn and Colleen, stranded on a desert island comprised of nothing but beautiful sunrises, perfect sunsets, and clear night skies that stretch into infinity.

How'd I do?

 

[LeandraNyx]

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[LeandraNyx]

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[Boxlicker101]

I don't see how you can limit anything to just one paragraph.

With her tongue positioned to catch his semen, Rachel started sucking Brian’s cock faster and using shorter strokes. She tightened her mouth, because she wanted to savor and swallow all his cum and didn’t want any dribbling out and wasted. After another minute, his cock jerked in her mouth, and a big, viscous gob landed right where she wanted it, immensely pleasing her taste buds. She knew he wasn’t through, so Rachel kept sucking until she felt and tasted two more bursts of the thick fluid gushing into her mouth.

When she was sure there would be nothing more ejaculated, Rachel took the cock out of her mouth. She held it upright so nothing would leak out of the end and swirled the semen in her mouth, relishing the taste and texture, before letting it slide down her throat. Like a child with an ice cream cone, she licked all the sticky fluid off the shaft she was holding, being sure to curl her tongue around and under the ridge.

When everything had been cleaned off the outside, Rachel placed her thumb in front of Brian’s scrotum and her fingers on the opposite side of his shaft and moved her hand toward her mouth. The rest of his cum oozed out into her waiting mouth and, after probing the slit with the tip of her tongue, she treated the second mouthful as she had the first. No more of her boyfriend’s semen went to waste than she could help.

When she was completely through sucking him off, Rachel leaned back on her heels and smiled up at the man who had just filled her mouth with his cum. He got off the bed and knelt in front of her, and the two lovers shared another long kiss. The fact that there were traces of semen on her lips didn’t keep Brian from kissing her, and even thrusting his tongue into Rachel’s mouth.

“My turn now,” he said, grinning as lewdly as she had.