Incest story - will readers be mad?

[regularguy13]

Hello, I'm considering an Incest story for the Halloween contest. i know incest stories are usually presented as love, lust or just good family fun. Do you think i would alienate the Incest crowd if the daughter/dad sex occurs because of mind control or demonic possession? Thanks r

 

[SusanJillParker]

Hello, I'm considering an Incest story for the Halloween contest. i know incest stories are usually presented as love, lust or just good family fun. Do you think i would alienate the Incest crowd if the daughter/dad sex occurs because of mind control or demonic possession? Thanks r

Imagination or lack thereof should be the only thing in the way of writing whatever you want and whatever you feel you need to write.

Mind control, demonic possession, or burglars turning into rapists and forcing a father to have sex with his daughter and/or a daughter forced to suck her father all works.

Go for it.

Over the years, I've written some Mind Control stories that were fan favorites, such as, Blowjobs on Demand, about a husband who hypnotizes his wife to give him blowjobs on demand. Only, with him thinking that she's hypnotized and forced to suck his cock, after she gives him a blowjob she goes shopping with his credit cards.

His wife cooks up a scheme with her sister and her husband hypnotizes his sister-in-law too, or tries to hypnotize her. After she sucks her brother-in-law, she goes shopping with his credit cards too.

It's a good, endearing, family story.

"Seriously, isn't incest the best? The family who has incestuous sex together stays together," said Jerry Springer.

 

[HandsInTheDark]

I think that people who don't like incest won't read your story regardless, and people who do might or might not be ok with your non-consensual take on the topic - like anything else in fetish-land, some will find it hot and some will be infuriated. As such I don't think it's a contest-winning idea. But in a symbolic sort of way I'd say it captures more of what actual incest is about than incest stories here ever do, so if you're inclined to write it, do it. Don't expect to make friends though.

Simplified: write what you like, within the rules, and as long as it's fiction who cares who likes it? Someone will, plenty won't, that's expected and it's why we have categories. What category you put it in is another question; I'd rather have it in incest because that way I won't see it. If you put it in noncon, mind control (the other noncon) or fantasy, for pity's sake put a disclaimer on page 1 so people horrified by your concept can click out early. You should probably add a disclaimer if it goes into Incest too, though I for one wouldn't mind hearing what happens if you don't add that disclaimer.

If you write it and don't get enough response, you can up your game by writing a story in which it's gay incest that's driven by demon possession. I feel certain that will get you comments of some kind. But if even that isn't lighting the fires of reader reaction, you may have to go all the way and have the demon kill the family dog. (Not have sex with it though, that breaks a rule.) And then you'll truly be basking in the warm glow that only Lit readership can provide.

I'll mention for no particular reason that you should never consider posting your real name or address on this site.

 

[SusanJillParker]

Duh? What's the problem? You already have a huge following.

If you write it, 'they' will read it.

In the vein of the story needs to be written, write it.

Once your characters are developed, trust me, they'll tell you if the story was worth writing. Don't listen to anyone else but your gut and your characters.

"You're getting sleepy, very sleepy, so sleepy that you can no longer keep your eyes open," he said to his 18-year-old daughter.

He brushed back her long, blonde hair to stare in her big, blue eyes before she closed them.

"Oh, Daddy, suddenly, I'm so sleepy," she said with a big yawn. "Suddenly, I'm so horny," said his daughter as she stripped off her clothes while under her father's hypnotic control.

 

[8letters]

Hello, I'm considering an Incest story for the Halloween contest. i know incest stories are usually presented as love, lust or just good family fun. Do you think i would alienate the Incest crowd if the daughter/dad sex occurs because of mind control or demonic possession? Thanks r

I don't read a lot of daughter/dad sex stories. My impression is that the most-liked daughter/dad sex stories have the daughter initiating the sex. So if your story has the daughter using mind control or the daughter being possessed by a demon who wants to have sex with the dad, I think it'll do fine.

However, always write what you want. If you want the dad to use mind control to seduce his hot daughter, you get paid the same as the other way around.

 

[Hypoxia]

Hello, I'm considering an Incest story for the Halloween contest. i know incest stories are usually presented as love, lust or just good family fun. Do you think i would alienate the Incest crowd if the daughter/dad sex occurs because of mind control or demonic possession? Thanks r

My hallowe'en vignettes (A Taste of Spirits and A Taste of Pumpkin & Candy) include sibling and parent-child incest as family fun, yes, but also mind-control and demon-spirit possession and trickery. Readers didn't seem to disapprove. But remember, you're writing for yourself. Whatever you post, some will love and some will hate and most won't notice. Write what you want.

This message is hidden because SusanJillParker is on your ignore list.

Whatever, Freddie.

 

[LeandraNyx]

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[HeyAll]

The truth is, there are different niches in different categories.

For incest, there will definitely be a market for this. For some people, it's a hot fantasy. Some people are indifferent to the mind control thing and would enjoy it regardless. Others would be disgusted by it and give it a low score.

 

[R. Richard]

If you plan to publish incest for pay, I suggest that you check out Lot's Cave. It's the only place that I know where I can publish my incest novels.

 

[TamLin01]

Sure, some readers will be "mad." But some readers will be mad no matter what you write. If your goal is to please everybody, you'll end up writing nothing at all.

A better question is, will YOU be happy?

 

[Hypoxia]

I don't read a lot of daughter/dad sex stories. My impression is that the most-liked daughter/dad sex stories have the daughter initiating the sex. So if your story has the daughter using mind control or the daughter being possessed by a demon who wants to have sex with the dad, I think it'll do fine.

My few dad-daughter couplings include:

* demonic possession (a devil made them do it)
* inadvertency (they didn't know their kinship)
* instigated for good reason (survival or revenge)

These are totally disconnected from real life, where daughters are victims. I've written only satire about mindcontrol because as an author I think it's cheating but yes, a psychically powerful daughter would be better than another victim.

Try a reverse-flip: dad plots to do daughter but her MC powers dominate him instead. Dad-the-dog gets to lick-clean the nethers of all of daughter's GFs (and BFs). In a double-reverse, it's what he really wanted anyway.

 

[Carnal_Flower]

Breaking news: Escapist fantasy incest erotica does not capture what "actual incest" is about.

Is that a failing? Should it?

And if incest stories on lit presented highly eroticized versions of exploitative relationships, molestation and rape, that would be ok?

Actually, minus the genetic connection, quite a few Non-Con and "Reluctance" stories, especially of the older man / young impressionable girl, Master / Slave variety, seem to do just that. But there's no shared DNA, so it's ok

I think that people who don't like incest won't read your story regardless, and people who do might or might not be ok with your non-consensual take on the topic - like anything else in fetish-land, some will find it hot and some will be infuriated. As such I don't think it's a contest-winning idea. But in a symbolic sort of way I'd say it captures more of what actual incest is about than incest stories here ever do, so if you're inclined to write it, do it. Don't expect to make friends though.

Simplified: write what you like, within the rules, and as long as it's fiction who cares who likes it? Someone will, plenty won't, that's expected and it's why we have categories. What category you put it in is another question; I'd rather have it in incest because that way I won't see it. If you put it in noncon, mind control (the other noncon) or fantasy, for pity's sake put a disclaimer on page 1 so people horrified by your concept can click out early. You should probably add a disclaimer if it goes into Incest too, though I for one wouldn't mind hearing what happens if you don't add that disclaimer.

If you write it and don't get enough response, you can up your game by writing a story in which it's gay incest that's driven by demon possession. I feel certain that will get you comments of some kind. But if even that isn't lighting the fires of reader reaction, you may have to go all the way and have the demon kill the family dog. (Not have sex with it though, that breaks a rule.) And then you'll truly be basking in the warm glow that only Lit readership can provide.

I'll mention for no particular reason that you should never consider posting your real name or address on this site.

 

[SusanJillParker]

Being that I'm a survivor of incestuous relationships that weren't consensual, I'd never write stories of rape and/or stories of molestation and/or humilation, especially of underage characters.

I know first hand the effects of what happens when forced to do dirty, nasty sexual, and incestuous things with her uncle, her cousin, and her brothers. I'm a product of that. They ruined my life. I still have nightmares of the horror that happened more than 30 years ago. Even though I've had years of psychological therapy, here I am writing erotica on a porn board, go figure.

The only incest stories that I write are consensual and of legal age sex stories between a mother and son, father and daughter, aunt and nephew, and cousin with cousin.

The only incest stories that I write are either real incest stories of those fans who want to read their story in print or are stories that could be deemed as believably real. The only incest stories that I write have a beginning, a middle, and an ending, with plot, dialogue, tension, character development, imagery, and description.

Yet, over and again, I see incest stories that don't have a beginning, a middle, and an ending, with plot, dialogue, tension, character development, imagery, and description.

Unfortunately, too many readers just want to read a stroke story. Too many readers lack the fundamentals of intelligence, comprehension, and concentration to read anything other than a stroke story. Too many readers can't appreciate what we writers must sacrifice by creating, developing, writing, reading, editing, rewriting, rereading, and reediting a story over and again to write a quality story.

Then, after too many of these fools throw stones at what I write by not appreciating my stylistic efforts and calling them repetitive (lol), I receive comments from the few who appreciate what I've written with them in mind.

Out of nearly 80,000 people who write here, there's a reason why I'm the 18th most favored writer.

I'd never post a shit, stroke story no matter what the category. I take pride in all that I write even and especially if it's having sex with one's mother.

"Can someone help me down from my soapbox please?"

 

[regularguy13]

Thanks gang

All the replies were helpful. I agree write what you want to write.

I'm a little boxed in as this isn't 100% my story. I suspected if i said, "The devil made me do it" some will complain, but as we know someone will always complain. Thanks, again. R