Just one Line.

[karaline]

Connie picked up the statement and handed it back to Andrea, as though it was a discarded sock she'd found underneath one of the beds.

"Things might be different this time? He's changed?"

 

[AnAngelReally]

I admit I was a little spooked this morning when Camelia irrupted in the bathroom and jumped right in the shower to embrace me.

 

[ElectricBlue]

His hands felt a slight resistance, as if something was loosely strapped around his wrists, but then it was gone. He sat up, and looked down at his cock, still thick and hard. Shaking his head slowly, he circled his hand around the wetness on his gut, then smoothed the cream into his skin.

 

[AnAngelReally]

One thing for sure, he got what he paid for, but whatever possessed him to walk in the Dominatrix Domain, a notorious BDSM club, that night.

 

[SeanBurns1975]

Her eyes met his and he saw no fear in them, she was not shaking, she shed no tears, her gaze was level as she began to remove the necklace.

 

[CoffeeWithMonkeys]

Did I post this before? I was attempting to, but I don't remember if I did or not.

Anyway from my kidnap story #2
He walks over to me, leans over and kisses me on the forehead.
"I went and got us something for dinner. I'm starved and figured you have to be since you haven't eaten in a couple of days. How do you feel today?" he asks.
I look at him. I want to ask how the fuck do you expect me to answer when you have me gagged but I'm gagged so I can't ask him.

 

[AnAngelReally]

The musician put her flamenco guitar carefully on its stand and picked-up her favorite lute. It wasn’t the most elaborate or even a true historical reproduction, but it came to life in her hands.

 

[lovecraft68]

Allison knocked back the tequila and placing the glass on the bar, smiled. “Damn I needed that. Nothing like a mouthful of something salty.”

 

[lovecraft68]

“Kid, that woman was looking at you the way a fat man stares at a buffet, she didn’t come here to talk.”

 

[AnAngelReally]

The well-tended woods of the king’s domain have given way to the dark wild forest, but I don’t care. I can’t care. I run for my very life, my soul.

 

[SimonDoom]

He'd known what was coming, and he'd had three days to prepare for it, and still he shook like a baby in the hands of a psychotic day care provider.

 

[LeandraNyx]

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[SimonDoom]

Wow, that one packs a powerful punch. Lots of emotions in one line. Awesome.

Thanks! I wrote the entire story -- BTB, Incorporated -- in an over-the-top, noir-spoof style, and it was lots of fun to write. It had its share of fans, but lots of people absolutely hated it!

 

[LeandraNyx]

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[FantasyXY]

From a story I am working on..

Placing together the bits and pieces of his life, he wondered if fate had caused his actions, or if his actions had caused his fate.

 

[AnAngelReally]

When she was done, she reaped her reward in their enthusiastic applause, in the money showering in the open guitar case, and, most important to her, in the laughter and hugs of the youngest members of her audience.

 

[NotWise]

When she was done, she reaped her reward in their enthusiastic applause, in the money showering in the open guitar case, and, most important to her, in the laughter and hugs of the youngest members of her audience.

I like this one. I want to know the character.

 

[KindofHere]

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[AnAngelReally]

I like this one. I want to know the character.

It's from the outline of a story that will be developped into a 5 novels series. It's just too good to fit in a single story.
I will publish it if I can ever resolve my issues with Lit who can't seem to post my stories properly and insists on making unwanted unilateral changes.

Here's another line from the same story:

As a mark of her own appreciation for their attentiveness, she wove a spell of thanksgiving in the music to send them off with a light heart for the rest of their day at the fair.

 

[lovecraft68]

“Craig golfs.” Jess smirked. “Belongs to an uppity golf club. I’d love to show up at the end of the course and be the nineteenth hole.”

 

[ElectricBlue]

I will publish it if I can ever resolve my issues with Lit who can't seem to post my stories properly and insists on making unwanted unilateral changes.

Now that really has got me curious. When has the site ever done what you claim? Details?

 

[AnAngelReally]

Now that really has got me curious. When has the site ever done what you claim? Details?

Look at my submission page: https://www.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=1643541&page=submissions

They repeated the series's name in each title of 'The Empath Cycle' and didn't include '2015 Kiss me, you fool' in the series even though I clearly indicated that it was part of it.

They changed the titles of the first two stories of the 'A Family Affair' series. These were NOT chapters, but stand alone stories. AND the stories titled '1st...', 2nd...' to '8th...' were clearly indicated that they were part of that series.

Exactly as the stories '01...', '02...' to '05...' were part of a series called 'First Times'.

In some cases, they didn't put the <H1> tags for the titles or simply deleted the titles within the stories.

I tried again and again to explain this and have the situation corrected. To no avail.
I wish there was someone I could reach out to, but my only contact can't seem to be able to help.
It got to the point where it looked like they have a problem with me personally.
That's why I stopped submitting stories even though I have quite a few more ready to post.

 

[AnAngelReally]

So, there’s one perk attached to this job. Muriel, the short order cook, is as much a sex addict as I am and she has the biggest collection of toys I’ve ever seen in private hands.

 

[NotWise]

I wish there was someone I could reach out to, but my only contact can't seem to be able to help.

Is your contact anyone other than Laurel?

 

[ElectricBlue]

Look at my submission page: https://www.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=1643541&page=submissions

They repeated the series's name in each title of 'The Empath Cycle' and didn't include '2015 Kiss me, you fool' in the series even though I clearly indicated that it was part of it.

Ah yes, I see. A bit of a cock up.

PM Laurel - she is the site editor and the only person who will fix this. No other "contact" is of any use. I suggest you explain in your PM exactly how you want the stories titled and listed, and I'm sure she will fix it.