I need a baiter tester for my new story

[Elloelle]

Would someone like to read it and look for bad writin' and stuff cause I write like I talk and and sometimes I talk faster than I can type so I mess up sometimes. You can send me a private massage if you want and I'll mail you the story on the computer instead of the regular mail cause that could take a week to get it to you.

Thanks

Debbie

 

[HeyAll]

What category and length?

 

[My I]

9300 words, Humor and Satire

 

[lovecraft68]

Careless alting there folks.

 

[Handley_Page]

Do you mean BETA reader ?

 

[ChloeTzang]

Do you mean BETA reader ?

"baiter" - I think that's american pronunciation, old chap.

 

[Handley_Page]

"baiter" - I think that's american pronunciation, old chap.

I guessed, but it's still BETA [ain't it ?]

 

[jaF0]

Would someone like to read it and look for bad writin' and stuff cause I write like I talk and and sometimes I talk faster than I can type so I mess up sometimes. You can send me a private massage if you want and I'll mail you the story on the computer instead of the regular mail cause that could take a week to get it to you.

Thanks

Debbie

If it's written like your post here, I'd sooner gouge my eyes out with red hot pokers.

 

[jomar]

Do you mean BETA reader ?

I like baiter better. And private massages.

 

[jaF0]

Bet you're a Master too.

 

[Elloelle]

If it's written like your post here, I'd sooner gouge my eyes out with red hot pokers.

I'll get the fire started and stuff but you have to bring you own pokers, Miss Snootypants.

 

[geronimo_appleby]

Careless alting there folks.

boom!

 

[My I]

Careless alting there folks.

Not like it's ever been a secret.

 

[Elloelle]

Do you mean BETA reader ?

Ain't that for fish tanks and stuff?

 

[Handley_Page]

Ain't that for fish tanks and stuff?

no; that's 'baiter'.

 

[ChloeTzang]

no; that's 'baiter'.

I thought that was what you had with fish and chips

 

[geronimo_appleby]

I thought that was what you had with fish and chips

batter - it's wot the fish is wrapped within.

or is that butter, you mean?

 

[Elloelle]

batter - it's wot the fish is wrapped within.

or is that butter, you mean?

That's a lectric sweeper, silly cause I got one of those and it;s really good for picking up cheetos that My_I dropped and stuff.

Debbie

 

[geronimo_appleby]

That's a lectric sweeper, silly cause I got one of those and it;s really good for picking up cheetos that My_I dropped and stuff.

Debbie

it's.

 

[Elloelle]

it's "I'm an anal retentive smartass."

Fixed that for you and stuff.

Debbie.

 

[geronimo_appleby]

Fixed that for you and stuff.

Debbie.

*yawn.

how witty.never seen that before. what's your next trick? do you pop out of the alt-box?

 

[Elloelle]

*yawn.

how witty.never seen that before. what's your next trick? do you pop out of the alt-box?

I might if you pop that stick outta your arse.