Butt Cookies

[Username_of_Sean]

I posted this story in the Anal section recently: https://www.literotica.com/s/butt-cookies

I'm curious to know people's thoughts on it.

Generally speaking, my stories often involve things being casual and no big deal that, in the real world, are not so casual and very much a big deal. When that thing is sex, like in this story, it's called "free use". In a free use world, anyone can simply fuck anyone at any time, at any place.

In my experience, free use stories most commonly include public sex, incest, and/or watersports, but the genre can stand on its own without these other themes as well.

I go a lot further than free use in my other stories, into darker fantasies that are apparently too dark for the site's Erotic Horror section (assumption based on keyword rejection when I attempted to submit one), so this one is my only submission to this site.

Usually I write stories based on my own fantasies, but Butt Cookies came from a story prompt from my wife. We were half asleep and talking, when she misheard something I said, thinking I had said something about cookies in someone's butt. She then asked me to tell her a story about that. I was too tired to really do so, but the next day I wrote this for her while she was at work.

Normally, she doesn't read my stories, as she's not into certain sorts of gory details that I'm into, but I wrote this one with her enjoyment in mind, so I didn't go there with it. When I showed it to her, she had forgotten about asking me for the story, but enjoyed it. (She also enjoys the free use fetish, which is part of why I included it.)

The sites I've posted stories on in the past have been very different from this site, so I'm curious to see the difference in comments I'll see here as opposed to the sorts of comments I've gotten elsewhere. I feel like readers here will be coming to this story from a completely different direction than readers I've had before.

 

[ElsieElsewhere]

lol In a weirdly fucked up way I find it amusing and totally sweet that you wrote this for your wife.

 

[CyranoJ]

The thing with the cookies is not my cuppa but amusingly surreal. Personally I would have thought the "taken by force and liked it" fantasy in the early going was a better fit for NC/R, but admittedly I don't really read the Anal category much.

 

[Username_of_Sean]

lol In a weirdly fucked up way I find it amusing and totally sweet that you wrote this for your wife.

Thanks!

The thing with the cookies is not my cuppa but amusingly surreal. Personally I would have thought the "taken by force and liked it" fantasy in the early going was a better fit for NC/R, but admittedly I don't really read the Anal category much.

In our universe, that would definitely be non-consent. In a "free use" universe, everyone consents all the time.

It's like... If an alternate universe didn't have gravity, there would be no concept of flying. In the same way, they don't have a concept of consent because it's always.

Obviously, you can't get too realistic with such a setting. Then you have to start adding a chapter before the whole story that has someone curing all STDs, some weird magic birth control thing everyone's on (or a massive disaster that creates severe underpopulation), and everyone in the world being 18+ somehow... Having seen a lot of settings like that, it gets grating after a bit. The exposition isn't sexy and really just turns people off before they get to the sexy story part.

 

[CyranoJ]

In our universe, that would definitely be non-consent. In a "free use" universe, everyone consents all the time.

No, I get you, it's just that it's not really that different from the "chicks dig getting taken by force" conventions common in a lot of noncon erotica. At least not in this particular example.

(Not that I'm judging you or playing pious or anything. I write in the NC/R category myself, that's part of why the trope looks familiar.)

 

[Username_of_Sean]

Interesting... If I'm reading something and the primary hook is that it's nonconsensual, I would honestly be disappointed if there wasn't a character who hated what was going on right up to the end.

Not that I read much noncon (clearly). Even in the really dark stuff I write (not on this site), there's some form of final consent. In almost all, everyone's getting what they want, even when it's not something most people in our world would want. In the story of mine that's the lowest on the consent scale, there's still at least gambling consent. Essentially, "I consent to have X done to me if this random number generator from 0 - 100 selects a 7". Most of the people involved only consent to it because of the low odds, but if you come back to the restaurant enough times... No one winds up surprised, at least.

 

[CyranoJ]

Interesting... If I'm reading something and the primary hook is that it's nonconsensual, I would honestly be disappointed if there wasn't a character who hated what was going on right up to the end.

That's not the norm for noncon or reluctance fiction, only for a subset of it. I'll give you that it's more common for there to be some kind of character conflict about "liking it," though; straight to "I'm being forced and I totally dig it" is rarer but not unheard of. It's on a continuum; it's only the part about "forced" that's a constant.

The basic paradigm of noncon on Lit is supposed to be that in the end, everyone's getting what they "want" or at least something reasonably pleasurable that they didn't know they wanted. That's also a consistent theme of noncon fiction. (There are harsher forms of noncon that don't bother with this nicety, or aggressively reject it, but obviously that's not the part of the spectrum your story called to mind.)

 

[Username_of_Sean]

...reluctance fiction...

I think that's honestly a better name in my opinion for what you've described to me.

The few noncon erotica things I've read have had the person's entire life is made into a hell by whatever's happening to them, with their hope eventually fading away (if they survive).

 

[CyranoJ]

I think that's honestly a better name in my opinion for what you've described to me.

The few noncon erotica things I've read have had the person's entire life is made into a hell by whatever's happening to them, with their hope eventually fading away (if they survive).

Yeah, that would be the harsher end of the spectrum. Lit's norms tend towards (or are supposed to tend towards) "reluctance" at the most.

Personally I've never been able to make it through the stuff that's about fetishizing realistic rape and the associated anguish -- which I've encountered in far more vicious forms than anything you'd see on Lit -- but you don't have to worry about that being the entirety of the category.

It's also worth noting that some readers take it as a courtesy to have anything that problematizes consent flagged up front. None of my NC/R stories* involve straight-up rape in the sense of just grabbing a person and fucking them; they're there because they involve some form of sex-under-duress or (in one case) rape roleplay.

(* EDIT: Admittedly your response makes me wonder how many readers go ahead and assume those stories are big old brutal sadistic rapefests on account of the category. I just like to err on the side of having an expansive definition of "noncon" that doesn't wind up blind-siding anyone.)

 

[jonyoungau]

I posted this story in the Anal section recently: https://www.literotica.com/s/butt-cookies

I'm curious to know people's thoughts on it.

Generally speaking, my stories often involve things being casual and no big deal that, in the real world, are not so casual and very much a big deal. When that thing is sex, like in this story, it's called "free use". In a free use world, anyone can simply fuck anyone at any time, at any place.

In my experience, free use stories most commonly include public sex, incest, and/or watersports, but the genre can stand on its own without these other themes as well.

I go a lot further than free use in my other stories, into darker fantasies that are apparently too dark for the site's Erotic Horror section (assumption based on keyword rejection when I attempted to submit one), so this one is my only submission to this site.

Usually I write stories based on my own fantasies, but Butt Cookies came from a story prompt from my wife. We were half asleep and talking, when she misheard something I said, thinking I had said something about cookies in someone's butt. She then asked me to tell her a story about that. I was too tired to really do so, but the next day I wrote this for her while she was at work.

Normally, she doesn't read my stories, as she's not into certain sorts of gory details that I'm into, but I wrote this one with her enjoyment in mind, so I didn't go there with it. When I showed it to her, she had forgotten about asking me for the story, but enjoyed it. (She also enjoys the free use fetish, which is part of why I included it.)

The sites I've posted stories on in the past have been very different from this site, so I'm curious to see the difference in comments I'll see here as opposed to the sorts of comments I've gotten elsewhere. I feel like readers here will be coming to this story from a completely different direction than readers I've had before.

eating food out of a girls ass, (clean and bacteria free) is kinky as hell. theres a girl i know who i would like to test it on. kind of like those sushi places where the girls naked with the food on her. except in her would be a option too.

 

[Username_of_Sean]

eating food out of a girls ass, (clean and bacteria free) is kinky as hell. theres a girl i know who i would like to test it on. kind of like those sushi places where the girls naked with the food on her. except in her would be a option too.

We certainly wouldn't want those cookies to go to waste just because they were in some girl's butt.

I can't personally have seafood, but the general concept of eating food off of and out of a woman is definitely sexy, I agree.

Sushi served on a naked girl's body is called nyotaimori. I only remember that fact because of a story that combined nyotaimori with teppenyaki, which are those big table-like metal grill surfaces.

 

[ElsieElsewhere]

Sushi served on a naked girl's body is called nyotaimori. I only remember that fact because of a story that combined nyotaimori with teppenyaki, which are those big table-like metal grill surfaces.

That sounds...painful.

 

[Username_of_Sean]

That sounds...painful.

Yes. Pain was part of the point of that particular story.