Erotic Horror Idea: Not what You Expected

[KayceeCharles]

Imagine this little scenario.

The most innocent but also the hottest girl you've seen found you in the bar, and invited you upstairs.

You two took one sexy shower and she got you REALLY randy.

Then she got out and went off to bed.

You got out of the shower, but it's dark as heck. She told you to come to bed, and leave the light off. She prefers it that way.

You shrugged and think it's kinda kinky just to grope.

So you found the edge of the bed, and slipped under the covers.

You reached over...

It's NOT HER.

Before you can mutter WTF something clamped over your mouth.

What happens next?

* Is the woman a serial killer out to harvest your dick for her collection?
* Does the woman have a zombie sister you need to satiate before you can fuck her silly?
* Other?

 

[Hypoxia]

"What happens next?" could be anything. She has a hungry giant anaconda in the room, or a shemale brother, or three Bolivian dwarves, or an identical-but-albino twin sister, or a tentacle critter, or a kinky husband, or a female giant praying mantis, or a CIA rendition team, or grandma with a spatula. Take it any way you want. How do you see it ending?

 

[sirhugs]

"What happens next?" could be anything. ... How do you see it ending?

badly.

No actually I'm a sucker for happy endings (of all sorts) so I want strange interspecies true love (and hot sex).

 

[Hypoxia]

badly.

No actually I'm a sucker for happy endings (of all sorts) so I want strange interspecies true love (and hot sex).

If our human subject (the MC) is a woman, we must go with the sentient female giant preying mantis for interspecies (hell, interorder) lesbian lust. Oooh, what that ovipositor does to her...

The first breath of winter blew in a couple days ago. Before that, lingering summer heat kept mantids lively all around our place. They hung from every window, every planter, every railing. We walk outside and their heads turn, watching us, evaluating us. They're about the only insects that you KNOW pay attention to you.

But I digress. No, our MC is a man. And this *IS* Erotic Horror. So after the "most innocent but also the hottest girl" leads him upstairs, he has a threeway with her and the mantis-girl -- who bites off his head during orgasm. That's nature (sigh). But human-girl and mantis-girl have a nice romantic relationship. Cue the violins.

 

[KayceeCharles]

That could work. I recall reading a super-short story that had the same beginning but went off in the tangent that the girl had a zombie sister who still want sex (!), and this is the only way she can get a man to fuck her sister. So I decided to throw it in here and see what else can come of it.

You basically had a parallel idea. Maybe they've been doing this for a while, mantis-girl is an experiment gone wrong, escaped from a lab, and the innocent one was the professor's bi-sexual daughter who needed a twisted playmate.

 

[Hypoxia]

You basically had a parallel idea. Maybe they've been doing this for a while, mantis-girl is an experiment gone wrong, escaped from a lab, and the innocent one was the professor's bi-sexual daughter who needed a twisted playmate.

Very nice setup! Yes, human-girl has been bringing playmates / fresh food to mantis-girl for some time now. Reminds me of an old Rand Holmes underground comix piece (I think from an issue of TALES OF SEX AND DEATH) where a MILF must bring home drunks and decadently fuck them in order to feed them to her pet tyrannosaurus.

Expanding your start: Mad scientist Max von Drumpf and his daughter / lab assistant Iwanka work in a remote locale (maybe underground) splicing human DNA into mantis genes to breed man-size mantids with soft skin and high intelligence. They retain their mouths, claws, genitals, etc. Model XA-501 aka Marta is the ultimate. Iwanka is smitten by her manners, her smell, her low voice, her ovipositor. Max becomes too intimate; Marta bites off his head and devours him. Yum.

Iwanka and Marta flee to civilization... but then what? Do they move from town to town, from hotel to hotel, Iwanka luring pickups from the hotel bar to their upstairs room... which they must abandon the next morning? Do they blackmail a hotel manager to ignore their doings so they can stay awhile? Instead of luring victims 'upstairs', do they instead operate out of motel rooms or a motorhome. Are they joined by a sympathetic entomologist (female, of course)? Is Marta successfully inseminated? What do her spawn look like?

 

[KayceeCharles]

Do they share a hate for exterminators?

Will the duo's end be met by a truck?

 

[Hypoxia]

Do they share a hate for exterminators?

Will the duo's end be met by a truck?

This is romantic erotica so they'll survive Happily Ever After into the sunset or swarm or wherever. But probably not in a bug-buggy. The hard part will be adequately disguising Marta.

I'm reminded of a late friend, anti-scion of a politically prominent family, whose downwardly-mobile path took him from woodworker to exterminator to septic pumper. The bug-killing gig was very informative -- he told us just which restaurants to avoid, basically any in buildings over five years old. But I digress.

Marta, Iwanka, and Heidi (the entomologist) take their threesome to a tropical island where Marta can really spread her wings, so to speak. Does the occasional male guest disappear from nearby resorts? Must have swum out too far.