Tempted wife

[youngrabbit]

Hello,

I've been thinking about an idea for a story for a while now, kinda based on a plan I had in reality a year or two back. Would like to hear your thoughts and comments, here goes with a brief run through...

My wife is feeling a bit neglected as I've been busy with work and as a result has not been too interested in being adventurous in the bedroom despite my suggestions. Now I've always been interested in wife swapping or watching her play but she has totally dismissed the idea. I know my wife has a slut inside her its just hard to bring it out so I have an idea for a bit of a game I'm going to play with her.

I but a pre-pay mobile phone and start texting her. I knew from before that a couple of the male work colleagues at the college where my wife works were always flirting with her. I start sending her anonymous texts saying that I think she's hot and slowly become more sexually explicit.

At first she ignores them and then after a couple of days reluctantly replies. Sometime I'm texting her in the very same room and she doesn't know its me. When I have to stay over on business trips I start to ask her for naked pics and videos of her masturbating, which she eventually obliges me with.

As things start to escalate I never reveal my identity and now have her dressing for work to my requests and not wearing underwear for work. Meanwhile she is coming home every night horny as hell and our sex life goes through the roof, she's constantly wet and turned on.

As I keep the pretense going I convince her to meet me (as mystery man) in a hotel room but insist that she lets herself in and blind folds herself to keep suspense going. She arrives at the hotel and does as shes told. I enter and cuff her to the bed posts, blindfold firmly intact. I have invited a couple of hung guys to fuck her for the night.

They guys get to work on her while i watch, occasionally i put my cock into her mouth and she doesn't even realize its me. She is loving it, not knowing who or how many guys are there.

Finlay we finish up, un-cuff her and leave the room before she removes her blind fold. I head home quickly and wait for her return. We she gets home i ask her how her night was and what shes been up to, she lies and says just a few drinks with the girls not knowing I've watched the whole thing.

bit short on detail at this stage but lots of ideas to make it more interesting

 

[sirhugs]

you have a good start. add some detail & you will have a story worth submitting.

 

[youngrabbit]

Thanks Sirhugs. Not written anything before but keen to get the full story out there

 

[ThisNameIsntTakenYet]

The story idea sounds good to me. Like sirhugs said it does need some fleshing out but for a plotline it's a great start. Just be sure to take your time and have her not give in to the demands she gets by text too soon. Every new thing that is asked should be met with some resistance. She shouldn't accept to do things immediately, especially not in the beginning. She can do what is asked from her sooner later in the story, but things like sending nudes and going to work without underwear are things that the texts should slowly build up towards, and then take some persuasion to convince her.

If you do that, I'm sure it will become a great story.

 

[johnny1705]

Love the story idea!

 

[CeasarBoobage]

Interesting idea, but for me there's a few things that need some time to develop.

First, what woman (hell, what person, male or female) will get into the text conversation started by a stranger? Me personally, if I got some texts from an unknown number saying it was a female who wanted to chat, I would not reply with anything more substantial than "who is this?", then not go further until I knew for a stone-cold fact who it was. I can easily see women being more reluctant to carry on a convo when the other side isn't a known person. This just doesn't seem in any way realistic without a background.

Yes the issue of "suspension of belief" is needed to believe a fictional story or movie (ex: the incredible hulk). You said the lady is feeling neglected by her husband and therefore reluctant to do bedroom playtime, so I'd see it more likely that she'd be interested in some Lady's Man at work or a personal trainer, but not some anonymous texter. She wouldn't want to be caught in the act of cheating, so she would want to ensure that she knows the person and can guarantee the secrecy. Just because 1-800-555-1212 has said for weeks that she's hot doesn't mean that she will go into the bathroom to take nude selfies, then sit two feet away from her hubby and send those pictures to that number.

That brings up point two. Between the portions where texting happens and she goes into slut mode at the office, we have to know why. Is there blackmail involved? A promise of a promotion? Would the original orders/dares of tame sexuality in the office generate pictures that would be used to threaten her job or marriage? Both history and modern times are full of reports of wayward spouses, but there needs to be a damn good reason why this formerly reluctant wife is in shown in a video, nude between six male co-workers in a circle-jerk. She has to work with them every day for the forseeable future, and most times, as much as a down-blouse or up-skirt shot in the office is enough to make most women clam up and try to be invisible until she gets over her exposure embarrasment.

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All that being said, I'm not a huge fan of the wife-swapping genre. Also, I like stories to be at least somewhat plausible. There are tons of people (the one-handed slobbering folks) who read here that do enjoy the four-second progression of "shy meek wife who was a virgin when she married turns into a slut who loves inter-racial gang-bangs, bukakke, and golden showers" types of ladies. NO, I'm not saying that's what your story looks like, nor what I think you're aiming towards. I'm saying it has an interesting plot and story line, just that there are a few details to figure out in order to take this from an idea into an engaging story for the masses.

Please don't think I'm trashing your idea, I'm not. I'm just saying that I think the outline needs some more bullet points and fleshing out.

 

[mikendel]

I would want to be cuffed to the bed and see the other guys standing there. No place to go so just lay back and enjoy the attention. She see's you sitting back and watching and it turns her on even more. After the 2 guys are done and leave its your turn with her.

 

[Bigspurt]

I would want to be cuffed to the bed and see the other guys standing there. No place to go so just lay back and enjoy the attention. She see's you sitting back and watching and it turns her on even more. After the 2 guys are done and leave its your turn with her.

Sounds like a great plan!