Two married co workers

[silkirk77]

Hi all. I am a long long time reader of literotica. Ive tried other sites but none come close to lit. I always come back here to satisfy my appetite. Anyways i need help with a story. I've tried my hand at writing it myself but unsuccessful. I've come to the realization that no matter how hard i try our how many how to's i am not and never will be a writer. I am OK and will keep reading the stories of those who are, a writer.

The story i need help with is about two co workers who are both married to others. At first they are just co workers then friends then innocent flirting. Both of them have strong morals and have never cheated and their spouses. The male age 40 has been married for 14 yrs, female age 38 has been married for 10 yrs. Throughout their married life both have been propositioned by others but never tempted.

Both are happily married and because of that both are comfortable in the innocent flirting because both know that it is all that it will be. But its a slippery slope. At first they both are ok with the innocent flirting and then it naturally becomes a bit stronger. Then the dreams start. At first the dreams are not sexual in nature so they both share their dreams with each other. Then their dreams quickly escalate into sexual.

When this happens one starts to pull away and the other is offended but that doesnt stop the dreams. In fact of the one who somewhat pulled away the dreams escalate. Finally they both feel they have to talk to each other and deal with this. At first they both agree that nothing can or will come of this because of their morals and respect for eachbother and their spouses.

But their attractraction for each other grows and their dreams only escalate and well they have to deal with this head on. No more dodging or avoiding.

They have sex to get it out of their system. But now after sex their lives are now entwined and can not be seperated. Neither get a divorce but they also cant stop seeing each other.

 

[mwf2ffan]

As another person debating getting into writing himself, go for it. You can try it and revise it later.

Where do you seem to be getting stuck at? You described the scenario perfectly well. If you are wondering how they can be work spouses, why not have them go on business trips together? That should make it so that they can be together but not divorce.

 

[sirhugs]

the work trip is an easy set up.
or they can just work late one, leaning over a desk to look at something, heads close together, hands touch...
or, they have to take a big client to dinner, which happens to be at the client's hotel, then they both have too much to drink, so decide staying at the hotel makes more sense than going home
or they take the client to a strip club...temperatures rise...

 

[Kantarii]

As with all art forms..... Every aspect of it can be taught as a skill and learned by anyone willing to learn except one thing..... Imagination. Imagination leads to ideas..applying one's learned skills to the idea turns those ideas into a reality. Kant

 

[silkirk77]

I am looking for some one who will write thi story for me. I'm not being lazy or anything I've just come to the realization that i am not a writer. I've tried to write different stories but can't seem to put anything together. I have troubles from the word hello. I've successfully edited stories for my own personal use but i havent been able to write from scratch.

If someone is able and willing to this for me id greatly appreciate it. I do have some requirements though.
1 Needs to be detailed. When im in the mood for a story if its a small story i pass.
2 needs a plot, when im reading a story and its only about sex i pass.
3 detail, this includes the sex scene(s). I also pass if there is no detail in sex scenes as well.

 

[ropebunny87]

the work trip is an easy set up.
or they can just work late one, leaning over a desk to look at something, heads close together, hands touch...
or, they have to take a big client to dinner, which happens to be at the client's hotel, then they both have too much to drink, so decide staying at the hotel makes more sense than going home
or they take the client to a strip club...temperatures rise...

This is an interesting idea...but #2 & #3 almost sound like it'd point to the client being a third partner...which would be a different story completely! (Not a bad one though..)

 

[Hypoxia]

This sounds like a slow, illicit romance. How do you visualize the ending?

 

[silkirk77]

This sounds like a slow, illicit romance. How do you visualize the ending?

Your right about the slow romance. That's exactly what i had in mind. The ending would be that they have sex and then after sex they decide that they wont get a divorce from their spouses but wont let their relationship either.

Have their cake and eat it too, kind of idea.

 

[silkirk77]

This is an interesting idea...but #2 & #3 almost sound like it'd point to the client being a third partner...which would be a different story completely! (Not a bad one though..)

I dont plan on bringing a third partner in. Id rather keep it between just these two.

 

[Hypoxia]

I dont plan on bringing a third partner in. Id rather keep it between just these two.

Maybe a third, not as a partner, but as a challenging distraction, an interloper there to pump-up the drama. The couple's increasing attraction is noted by a bi cow-orker who tries to insert themself into and/or obstruct their developing relationship.

 

[silkirk77]

As with all art forms..... Every aspect of it can be taught as a skill and learned by anyone willing to learn except one thing..... Imagination. Imagination leads to ideas..applying one's learned skills to the idea turns those ideas into a reality. Kant

I somewhat agree with this but I also disagree. Lets say you have two different artists, ones a painter, the other is a write. You can teach the painter to write and the writer to paint, but the mindset of the painter is to paint and the writer to write. The painter, usually won't be as good as writer and vice versa. The painter understands the concept of writing and the writer understands the concept of painting. What this boils down to is that the painter is a magnificent painter and only a so so writer, and the writer is a magnificent writer but only a so so painter.

If you wanted a painting done, would you go the writer or the painter? If you wanted a story written, would go go the painter or the writer? They both have imagination, the only difference is that the writer imagines words not brush strokes, and the painter imagines painting not keystrokes.

 

[silkirk77]

As another person debating getting into writing himself, go for it. You can try it and revise it later.

Where do you seem to be getting stuck at? You described the scenario perfectly well. If you are wondering how they can be work spouses, why not have them go on business trips together? That should make it so that they can be together but not divorce.

I am getting stuck on the word go, if you know what I mean. I can write ideas or thoughts down but I can't seem to put them together to make the story. I can picture how the story unfolds in my head but its only blocks. I can't seem to get things moving. I've tried many times to write my own stories but they end up reading like a . . . . third grader trying to write a novel.

 

[sirhugs]

I am getting stuck on the word go, if you know what I mean. I can write ideas or thoughts down but I can't seem to put them together to make the story. I can picture how the story unfolds in my head but its only blocks. I can't seem to get things moving. I've tried many times to write my own stories but they end up reading like a . . . . third grader trying to write a novel.

then they'd read better than half the stories on the site.

Instead of getting stuck on the start, try beginning with the middle, and then filling in the background as you go. so start with the uneasiness post-sex, the guilt, then the sex to explain the guilt, then the married reason for the guilt, then the resolution, after more sex (spousal? the two lovers? foursome?).

 

[Hypoxia]

One approach to writing this story: Visualize it as a movie, then blog it. Write out each scene as it happens before you: the words / thoughts / actions. That's the story's framework. Then flesh it out, fill in details, remove the unnecessary, and see how it reads.

 

[Hussar73]

if the two aren't on the same professional level, or this is between professional and staff, the consequences are enormous if they're caught. either one might be fired (and as a managing partner, I'd fire them both) because of the possibility of sexual harassment claims later. this kind of tension can add to the flavor of the seduction.

I think business trips are very cliche (and too easy) and if they're adults, sex in the office is out of the question because they'd know that someone is always there or could be, even janitorial staff, and once its out of the bag, its over.

that would leave Friday nights at a motel, even a cheap, sleazy no-tell motel, during the time when its plausible for other office workers to go out for drinks, but, obviously, back by midnight. or once in a while on weekdays, but never consistent and never often. even this is tricky because neither one can go home to a partner with the scent of the other on him or her.

just adding a bit of reality, since the OP wants it realistic.

 

[Hypoxia]

just adding a bit of reality, since the OP wants it realistic.

Spoilsport.

Yes, setting and status are critical to building drama. Keep the tension high; the more threats and barriers, the better; make them jump to avoid tragicomedy, always just barely one step ahead of disaster. Make the romance a slow, risky adventure. But no car chases.

 

[Hussar73]

But no car chases.

they were supposed to be menaced by utahraptors and there was a scene with an accidentally cross-threaded alien probe.

 

[Hypoxia]

they were supposed to be menaced by utahraptors and there was a scene with an accidentally cross-threaded alien probe.

Yes, their jealous cow-orker is a knowing pawn of the ET aliens and targets them for anal probing and general reversible vivisection. They wake up covered in alien jiz and bearing weird scars. "Was it good for you?" he asks. She croaks something in Altairian. Then the chemtrails descend on them...

 

[Hussar73]

Yes, their jealous cow-orker is a knowing pawn of the ET aliens and targets them for anal probing and general reversible vivisection. They wake up covered in alien jiz and bearing weird scars. "Was it good for you?" he asks. She croaks something in Altairian. Then the chemtrails descend on them...

that's from an Epstein bros. version of the Casablanca script, the unstated croak being, "we'll always have Altarian" (Harrison Solo returned post-production to over-dub "Alderaan" after the RFK assassination).

The jealous cow-orker never returned to Roswell.

The End?​

 

[Hypoxia]

that's from an Epstein bros. version of the Casablanca script, the unstated croak being, "we'll always have Altair".

Fixed. Meanwhile the Senior Partner snorts, "Cheating? Within my staff? I'm shocked, shocked to find that cheatlng is going on here!" His naked secretary pushes open the door behind him. "Oh baby, come back to bed now!" [sotto voce] "Oh, yes, right away." [louder] "Everybody out at once!" Meanwhile, the guilty lovers try to blend in with the crowd at the sleazy Adalberon tavern. They ignore the commotion behind them. Voices are raised. Drinks are spilled. Lasers crackle. Heads fall away. Quiet resumes. More drinks are poured. The lovers sneak out the back door for a quickie in the nearest unlocked shuttlecraft. Roll to cliffhanger credits...

 

[Hussar73]

...The lovers sneak out the back door for a quickie in the nearest unlocked shuttlecraft. Roll to cliffhanger credits...

He didn't notice when she changed from her conservative Ann Taylor all season two button suit into a cocktail dress short enough to be illegal on eleven planets, including this one, but there she was at his side, staring dreamily with her hazel eyes into his. He followed her come-fuck-me heels out the back door of the lounge to a dark, grimy alley where a mattress store had moments before junked perfectly usable surplus inventory as a tax dodge.

He unzipped his Brooks Bros. pants to the surprised gasps and applause of numerous watchers when he noticed his lady-love had fainted, once again, at his nearly immeasurable size and girth.

VOICEOVER:

Tune in next week for another episode of "Will They Or Won't They?

 

[Hypoxia]

Tune in next week for another episode of "Will They Or Won't They?

Of *course* they will. But with whom? Reminds me of an old tagline: Yes, she will -- but not with you. Cue the audience participation.

He unzipped his Brooks Bros. pants to the surprised gasps and applause of numerous watchers when he noticed his lady-love had fainted, once again, at his nearly immeasurable size and girth.

Reminds me of a line I wrote in 'Neath Western Skies, Ma! "He was just another dusty saddle tramp with a battered Stetson, a dented Sharps carbine, a mouse-eaten bedroll, and a huge ten-pound sausage of a schlong. She was a well-worn saloon floozy with a cunt the size of Carlsbad Caverns. They were a perfect pair." Evocative, yes?

 

[Hussar73]

Reminds me of a line I wrote in 'Neath Western Skies, Ma! "He was just another dusty saddle tramp with a battered Stetson, a dented Sharps carbine, a mouse-eaten bedroll, and a huge ten-pound sausage of a schlong. She was a well-worn saloon floozy with a cunt the size of Carlsbad Caverns. They were a perfect pair." Evocative, yes?

very evocative, yes, and I bemoan the loss of such saloon floozies to history.

it reminds me of my own Tail From The South Pacific, telling the saga of the much loved Hooker-Queen of the Island and her doomed romance with the crusty battleship gun captain, ENS. Jack "16-inch" MacHammer, USN.

 

[Telemmedic0371]

Situation Sounds Familiar

I know this may sound unbelievable, but your story idea is similar to what I'm going through now. I was friends with a female co-worker for a few years. We are both paramedics for a large EMS service. We would meet for coffee while on duty and just discuss our crappy lives. She was married for about 20 years and me for 28. Over time, I found that I was developing feelings for her. I tried to ignore them, but that didn't work. The feelings got much stronger and I found that I fell in love with her. One night when we met for coffee, I decided to tell her how I felt. We sat in her truck for, about, 2 hours. While we were talking, things got a bit more romantic and physical. It ended off with her inviting me to stay with her in the morning. We have been carrying on for about 8 months, now.

 

[Hypoxia]

I know this may sound unbelievable, but your story idea is similar to what I'm going through now. I was friends with a female co-worker for a few years. We are both paramedics for a large EMS service. We would meet for coffee while on duty and just discuss our crappy lives. She was married for about 20 years and me for 28. Over time, I found that I was developing feelings for her. I tried to ignore them, but that didn't work. The feelings got much stronger and I found that I fell in love with her. One night when we met for coffee, I decided to tell her how I felt. We sat in her truck for, about, 2 hours. While we were talking, things got a bit more romantic and physical. It ended off with her inviting me to stay with her in the morning. We have been carrying on for about 8 months, now.

Write the story. Please. It's not difficult. Play the story as a movie in your mind. Blog it, writing the details of what happens over time, your thoughts and words and actions. Flesh-out that framework with sensations and fun. That's how many of us start writing here -- we pad-out our experiences. A story like yours should be easy since you already know how it starts and ends. Just tell what happened, with imagination.