Shy girl becomes witch's servant/slave

[Strangebuddy]

A young woman living with parents or on her own observes a new neighbor move in next door. The neighbor seems a bit odd but her sexy body and bubbly personality wins everyone else in the neighborhood over.

The young woman tries to keep to herself but one night she hears loud noises coming from next door. She calls the cops to take a look but when they arrive, they just turn around and drive back to the station, reporting that they asked the neighbor to keep things quieter. The girl then nervously heads over and sees the door is unlocked. She steps inside and sees (blank).

The girl then gets pulled inside by the neighbor who berates her and accuses her of trespassing. The girl's so frightened that she just begs the woman to let her go and agrees to anything the woman says...including giving her a lock of hair. The woman cuts a lock and then smiles. Turns out she's a witch and the hair will let her have power over the girl.

To prove her point, she makes the girl stand in place while she prepares some ingredients. She muses how the spell she put on her house should have made everyone ignore her...but then realizes the spell only affected non-virgins.

The witch then grows an eerie smile and tells the girl to back home and tell nothing of what she saw. She then must come back the next day and every day after work/ school to assist her. The girl does so and finds the witch looking excited at her arrival. The witch then hands her a robe and tells her to get changed.

What sort of things does the witch want from her? How long does the witch keep her under her thrall? Can the girl escape?

 

[Hypoxia]

My usual question: How do you visualize this ending? A good turnaround: the girl Glynnis, enslaved awhile, observes enough of the witch Wanda's work to master spells herself and dominate Wanda. When Glynnis tires of the fun, she disposes of Wanda and moves to a quiet suburb -- where a neighbor girl gets curious. The cycle repeats endlessly...

Or maybe Wanda's rivals locate her hideout and try to wreak damage. Wanda must enlist Glynnis to aid her defense. They vanquish the rivals -- and THEN Glynnis subjugates and misuses Wanda. I see the ending as Glynnis knitting in a rocking chair, knitting an endless skein of hair from the black cat in her lap, the cat into which she transformed Wanda. Probably knitting sorcerous black capes.

What kind of ending do YOU want?

 

[Strangebuddy]

Honestly, There's a number of ways it could go. I like your ending ideas and I suppose it depends on the relationship between them. Whether it remains with the girl as the witch's slave and goes into nonconsent territory or if they start to bond in a more affectionate way.

For example: darker

Witch wants her so she can acquire virgin ingredients for her spells or hawk them to other witches. She keeps the girl on a tight leash and keeps her aroused at all times but won't let orgasm or have sex. She uses her for a few months at the end of which she plans to auction her off for magical favors. Girl flips the tables and instead tricks the witch into auctioning herself, with demons and other spirits paying handsomely to have the chance to have a witch as their play thing.

Lighter:

Witch does want some ingredients but doesn't try to be cruel about it (she asks girl to shave herself and cut her nails). Witch then has her as more of an assistant and starts to get her to open up about herself and what she wants. Witch eventually gets her to open up about her sexual fantasies that she's never told anyone and helps her out with magic so she can achieve them, which also marks the end of their arrangement as she disposes of the lock of hair and the girl forgets all of the magical activity that occurred, she just thinks the witch is a weird but nice woman whom she did some work for and who gave her some relationship advice.

Witch meanwhile misses her young friend but follows her exploits as she grows old. Alternatively, witch waits until girl finishes college and then starts up a new more even relationship. Or...she finds out her new house cleaner is stealing her stuff and is capable of seeing her magical familiar.

 

[LairOfTheCougar]

I like the idea, it's a great setup.
How about this for an ending or direction?

The girl is bound to the witch to be her sexual plaything, helper and general apprentice. When the girl learns sufficient skills to break the enchantment she can become a witch in her own right. This is the manner in which witches are made. Kind of similar to a kung fu master teaching a student until the student can beat the master.

It's a little bit like Hypoxia's suggestion except the girl doesn't dominate the witch.

 

[Hypoxia]

It's a little bit like Hypoxia's suggestion except the girl doesn't dominate the witch.

But non-domination = non-drama. Just breaking-in new witches isn't dramatic. They need to claw their way into position. I'm working on that in my next (forthcoming) Evil Queen story. Each Evil Queen mentors a princess who eventually overthrows and replaces her. Many patriarchal dynasties worked that way.