Any (intelligent) lady here interested in reading?

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Looking for a lady who can hold up her end of an email correspondence.

Basically I have completed a series of fairly short, erotic stories and am looking for some feedback/suggestions for improvements.

It's important to me that this comes from someone who simply likes the process of reading rather than any self-styled 'editor'.

I know my own reactions as a male and a writer - now I need those of someone who is a reader and female (owing to the vast numbers of male fantasists on here, I will require proof, sadly).

Please be prepared to email on a regular basis, approaching daily or alternate days.

UK preferred. Get in touch!


Update October '17


I have had a number of correspondents emailing with me on this matter - to all of whom I'm very grateful... and one in particular.

I would now like to invite any further interest, with a view to perhaps establishing an ongoing friendship/correspondence. Please feel free to get in touch provided you satisfy the three conditions implicit in the thread title.
 
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Here is the editor thread. You can specify you are looking for a female perspective and a reader rather than a technical editor.

http://forum.literotica.com/forumdisplay.php?f=9

If any of your stories are submitted or if you do submit them, you can post it here

http://forum.literotica.com/forumdisplay.php?f=1

Again be specific on what kind of critique you want.

Good luck!


Er...yes.

Thank you but, as you say yourself, it's the 'editor thread'...

... and I 'specifically' do not want an editor nor, for that matter, 'critique' but rather a more general correspondence to discuss issues raised and through this the potential for alteration.

Hence the posting here.
 
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Er...yes.

Thank you but, as you say yourself, it's the 'editor thread'...

... and I 'specifically' do not want an editor nor, for that matter, 'critique' but rather a more general correspondence to discuss issues raised and through this the potential for alteration.

Hence the posting here.

You said you are looking for

Basically I have completed a series of fairly short, erotic stories and am looking for some feedback/suggestions for improvements.

Editors can do that too. As I said, be specific.

If, on the other hand, you are looking for women to read your stories, get aroused and exchange email with more of a "do x to me and I will do y to you" type suggestion, resulting in wankfestapalooza, then my advice would still be the same...

be specific
 
You said you are looking for

Basically I have completed a series of fairly short, erotic stories and am looking for some feedback/suggestions for improvements.

Editors can do that too. As I said, be specific.

If, on the other hand, you are looking for women to read your stories, get aroused and exchange email with more of a "do x to me and I will do y to you" type suggestion, resulting in wankfestapalooza, then my advice would still be the same...

be specific


Can't say how very grateful I am for the advice.

Really... I can't say...

So anyway, I specifically maintain my right to be woolly and vaguely in search of a lady who might be interested in reading my humble submissions...

... not for the purpose of getting aroused, although this may be a side effect, but actually for the purpose of giving me the reaction of a reader. Sorry if you find this concept hard to grasp. I don't believe I can help you further.
 
Editors do a number of things, from copy editing to help with structure/pacing to providing general feedback. Folks are right in that you're more likely to find what you're looking for in the editing area, especially if you're specific about what you want.

However, your attitude needs work. I was vaguely interested in responding to your request until I saw your condescension toward people who are trying to help you. That made me completely uninterested in reading anything else you may have written.
 
Editors do a number of things, from copy editing to help with structure/pacing to providing general feedback. Folks are right in that you're more likely to find what you're looking for in the editing area, especially if you're specific about what you want.

However, your attitude needs work. I was vaguely interested in responding to your request until I saw your condescension toward people who are trying to help you. That made me completely uninterested in reading anything else you may have written.


Quel dommage.

I shall try my heartbroken best to get over it...
 
If you're willing for someone to read who isn't a female (yeah I know with the thread title) then send me a PM.

Apparently the concept of getting readers feedback is lost on people so far.
 
I completely understand what you are looking for. I do this type of reading for a number of writers here, both stateside and in the UK. I am not, however, based in the UK. Let me know if you are interested.
:)
 
I know my own reactions as a male and a writer - now I need those of someone who is a reader and female (owing to the vast numbers of male fantasists on here, I will require proof, sadly).

lmao......
 
Always best to ignore idiocy... you know...for fear of contamination...

Bumping again.
 
Hello

I would love to read,your,stories I really enjoy reading, I would also love to give my opinions to help you out. I would also like to have an ongoing friendship with you. If you have kik add me mommabear22014 just let me know.
 
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Allow me to stress the 'bleeding obvious', as aficionadoes of 'Fawlty Towers' might call it:

To contact me, a person needs to fulfil the three conditions implicit in my thread title, namely be truly intelligent, be truly interested in reading... and be truly female.

So can we kindly stop it with all the try-ons..?
 
It seems I have to try again thanks to the splendid zeal of various timewasters.

Can I stress again that males masquerading as females need not apply... you will be 'outed' very quickly.
 
I'm female, based in the states, but I've done quite a bit of reviewing before. If you'd like message me and we can see if we're on the same page.
 
So one last, despairing effort this time around before trying elsewhere...

... but please DO save yourself the effort if you're just another sad, male fantasist-time waster... I'm simply not interested and I assure you that you won't get far...
 
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