How to write my first story

[7LivesManyFaces]

Hi I'm new to Literotica, though I've been reading stories here for years. So I recently created an account and decided to write about my own sexuality, fantasies, desires and so on and would like to start with my first sexual experience.

What are some basic guidelines and things to put into consideration? Are there any restrictions? I've seen comments about telling a story in the third person or first person point of view. Others about tagging stories under the wrong category.

Also English is my second language. Though I'm pretty fluent, my goal is for my stories to flow smoothly. I tend to get caught up in the small details with words, which results in not being able to get my point across as I intended.

Thanks

 

[Sean Renaud]

The limits are listed somewhere but the general rule is no under age sex. No animals. There is a soft rule on rape and violence but unless you plan on mutilating someone you're unlikely to breech that one. Though Laurel can be random. (In my experience she isn't. But I'm not about to argue with others who might read this.)

Your English seems to be as good or better than most posters so no real reason to worry about that.

I believe this should have been posted in the Author's Hangout. It certainly not a story idea in and of itself. Just for future reference, I'm sure this thread will be moved soon enough to where ever the powers that be decide it needs to be.

 

[MellowGem]

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[tnhardon]

Hi I'm new to Literotica, though I've been reading stories here for years. So I recently created an account and decided to write about my own sexuality, fantasies, desires and so on and would like to start with my first sexual experience.

What are some basic guidelines and things to put into consideration? Are there any restrictions? I've seen comments about telling a story in the third person or first person point of view. Others about tagging stories under the wrong category.

Also English is my second language. Though I'm pretty fluent, my goal is for my stories to flow smoothly. I tend to get caught up in the small details with words, which results in not being able to get my point across as I intended.

Thanks

I would agree that it doesn't seem like you need to worry about your English. I think sometimes people who have English as their second language actually write better than native speakers, because they learn proper English.

As mentioned age is normally the only thing that I see trip people up. Just make sure that your stories involve people who are 18+ and don't refer to sexual history before the age of 18.

The rest is pretty much up to you. You have read plenty of stories so you know what things people generally write. My advice is to have fun and write something that you would enjoy reading. If you are happy with the end product it doesn't really matter what anyone else thinks.

As far as style of writing, I suggest trying a variety of styles as you write stories and see what you like. First person is fun because it allows the reader to step into the shoes of the main character. Third person is nice because you get more of a broad overview and can learn about the feelings of each party in the story.

Stick with one style of writing for a particular story or series, but when you move on to a new story or series try to play around with it to test what you like. Different stories can call for different styles.

 

[joelafayette]

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[Mello_SixtyNine]

When I wrote my first story, the most negative comments I got were:

1) Changing from first person perspective to third.

2) The protagonist having a very large penis and fucking really hot girls.

3) Describing the character's appearance in blunt detail...for example: (I'm 5'8 with blue eyes, long red curly hair, and I have a 36 double D chest).

I've changed my writing style for comments 1 & 3 but I've ignored comment two because I like writing stories about well-endowed dudes that fuck hot chicks. Also, before posting my stories, I'll read them at least three times to catch any spelling mistakes/errors. Even then, I've still missed one or two per story. Since english is not your first language, it might be a good idea to get an editor from the Lit Boards to proofread and give you some suggestions where your you could make some improvements.

The reality is that the comments are not important. What's important is that you like your story and others do as well. I've written four stories so far and all of them have rated high enough to get a red H. Negative reviews from anonymous strangers or Lit members that have not written any stories mean less than nothing to me. Some comments will provide constructive criticism or point out any errors you've made which can be helpful when writing your next story.

One final thing: When you're writing your story and you pop a boner, that's your dick is telling you that you're on the right track.

 

[7LivesManyFaces]

Aww well the age restriction is a downer because I was almost 16 and my husband was 19 so I'm guessing that won't work out. But it's such an intense experience. Oh well. I'll get working on something else and keep that one in my diary

Thanks all for the feedback!

 

[Sean Renaud]

Aww well the age restriction is a downer because I was almost 16 and my husband was 19 so I'm guessing that won't work out. But it's such an intense experience. Oh well. I'll get working on something else and keep that one in my diary

Thanks all for the feedback!

Just lie. You were 18 and he was 21. Trust me we've all had similar conversations about the age restriction and at the end of the day it's Laurel's site and that's not a rule she's willing to bend on.

Sorry don't lie. Fictionalize.

The stories you are reading are true. The names and ages have been trained to protect the innocent. Dun dunduen. Dun dundun dunnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn!

(I was going for dragnet but I think that might be the beginning of Donkey Kong.)

 

[lovecraft68]

Just lie. You were 18 and he was 21. Trust me we've all had similar conversations about the age restriction and at the end of the day it's Laurel's site and that's not a rule she's willing to bend on.

Sorry don't lie. Fictionalize.

The stories you are reading are true. The names and ages have been trained to protect the innocent. Dun dunduen. Dun dundun dunnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn!

(I was going for dragnet but I think that might be the beginning of Donkey Kong.)

I always hear the Law and Order 'dramatic sound effect'

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=FmTkrF-UOPU

 

[Kantarii]

I'm willing to bet a story's title and description are harder to write than the actual story itself. But, a great story title will make the writing of the story a breeze

 

[EverLux]

The first story I submitted here was rejected. I wasn't attached enough to it to fix it and resubmit, but the reasons for its rejection were helpful for future stories.

1. If a person is underage, don't so much as think/remember/dream about sexiness. Looking back on it now (a whole two months later), I just smack my forehead and think "duh!"
2. Non-consent is great and all, but the lady/guy/tentacle monster needs to get a modicum of enjoyment out of it, too. I still wish this weren't a rule, but I understand why it is.

My advice? Stop paying attention to comments on other people's stories, because it sounds like they're causing you to overthink things. Just start writing. You're doing this to explore your sexuality and desires, so focus on that. Once you've submitted your story and start receiving feedback that you find helpful, you can always make changes and submit an edited version.

I'd say don't pay attention to the ratings on your first story, but that would be really hypocritical of me. I watched my stats like a fucking hawk. Still do.

 

[EverLux]

One final thing: When you're writing your story and you pop a boner, that's your dick is telling you that you're on the right track.

And if you're unlucky enough to have been born without a penis, just check your panties for wetness. It's not as dramatic as a boner, but a good gauge, regardless.

 

[soflabbwlvr]

The most important thing to remember is that you are telling a story, not filing a news report. As a story, it should have a beginning, a middle, and an end. Don't let annoying facts like age get in the way. The purpose is to entertain, not create an historical record. Change whatever you need to change to achieve your goal of entertaining your readers. No one else will know if the story is 100% factual, or 50% bullshit. It's a story, not the NY Times.

 

[Sean Renaud]

I always hear the Law and Order 'dramatic sound effect'

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=FmTkrF-UOPU

Back in my day kids watched Joe Friday and Bill Gannon, all you young whippersnappers with your LL Cool Js and your Ice T's.

 

[Sean Renaud]

Oh, pay no attention to the comments section especially of other people. I would probably tell you ignore them on your first few stories as well. Me? I'm in a happy place now where I can sort the haters, from the critics with a point, from when I genuinely screwed the pooch, from the lovers who will tell me a I'm a special snowflake no matter how bad I botch (don't get me wrong I enjoy having my cock sucked as much as the next guy but I'm aware of when it's happening), from the people who genuinely enjoy my work and want me to do more of a specific thing.

Until you get there either ignore them all, or only pay attention to the positive peeps cus hatters gonna. . .there's a goddamn spider on my monitor. . .I hate everything.

 

[TxRad]

Write and then write some more. After that, write and write again. Somewhere along the way, you will find your own voice and style.

After that, keep on writing. Go back and reread the first thing you wrote. Then you will find out if you are improving or not.

 

[jomar]

Keep it simple, write what turns you on and enjoy.

 

[joelafayette]

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[tomlitilia]

Also English is my second language. Though I'm pretty fluent, my goal is for my stories to flow smoothly. I tend to get caught up in the small details with words, which results in not being able to get my point across as I intended.

Thanks

I too write in English as a second language. I would also consider myself quite fluent, and I write in English in my work on a daily basis. Still, I make mistakes that I might have picked up if I was writing in my first language. You might want to consider an editor, and the best place to look for one is probably here: http://forum.literotica.com/forumdisplay.php?f=9
It's also a great way to improve your writing if you use the editor comments to identify patterns in your mistakes.

Good luck!

 

[elfin_odalisque]

Back in my day kids watched Joe Friday and Bill Gannon, all you young whippersnappers with your LL Cool Js and your Ice T's.

Law and Order is now creaking at the seams though good for oldies!

 

[xPassionx]

These are all great points. Something that I would add is write from what you know. Seeing how this is indeed something that you're pulling directly from, that should be obvious, but pulling experiences from your personal life can make the story much more authentic. I look forward to reading your stories. Keep us updated.

 

[HandsInTheDark]

I'd say don't pay attention to the ratings on your first story, but that would be really hypocritical of me. I watched my stats like a fucking hawk. Still do.

You seem bright. You'll get over it.

 

[NOIRTRASH]

If you wanna learn to write stories read plenty of fairy tales. Watch cartoons.

Almost every child is nursed on fairy tales and knows their form intuitively. Ditto cartoons. Go with what you already know. Build upon it.

 

[Kantarii]

I was going to start my first story off with "in the beginning". I got really discouraged when I found out there was already a collection of written works in a 2,000 year old book that started with the words " in the beginning", so I trashed my first writing idea and started all over writing with just my imagination. It turned out pretty good for me.

 

[joelafayette]

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