Laura Blossoms

[PSZer0Dark30]

Not sure if this actually belongs here but I just recently discovered the story Laura Blossoms. The story follows a shy wife as she's apparently seduced by a co-worker; however, it's told from the perspective of the husband. There's not much build up before everything goes down but while not perfect I think it has a lot of potential. I like the idea of a shy wife getting attention from a charming guy and slowly falling under his sway. These two parts especially get me:

"I came home one day and Laura was sucking his cock. I guess they didn't hear me come in, and they didn't notice me when I looked into the lounge. He was sitting on a folding chair, with his belt and fly open, her kneeling in front of him, topless. She was sitting on her heels, her back arched, her breasts pushed forward and her neck extended as she bent her head over his cock, gripping it with one hand. She looked graceful and feminine. He held the back of her head, slowly pushing up into her mouth, and I watched them until he stopped moving and she lifted her head. I slipped back out and went to the supermarket to buy dinner."

Love the image of her like that. The other scene comes later, after they've discussed her indiscretion but still invited the guy over to their place again.

"I let the coffee brew for a few minutes and put it on a tray with some biscuits. When I carried it through, I saw them together, him on the sofa where I had been before he arrived, her on top of him, facing him, his hands on her tits and legs, her knees on either side of his hips, her dress bunched around her waist as she moved up and down, her arms round his neck, her lips on his. I stopped still. I went back into the kitchen and stood there. I could hear them, moving on the sofa, murmuring words to each other. I waited for some time, I don't know how long, until they went quiet and I heard him stand up, saying that he had to go, and he left."

Again, the image of the shy wife just giving in right there on the couch almost instantaneously, the description of her dress bunched up as she moved up and down, something very hot about it.

Anyway, I would love to see this story expanded upon. Any thoughts?

 

[sr71plt]

Anyway, I would love to see this story expanded upon. Any thoughts?

You could try to contact the author to suggest an expansion. It wouldn't be ethical for anyone else to expand it without the author's permission.

 

[PSZer0Dark30]

You could try to contact the author to suggest an expansion. It wouldn't be ethical for anyone else to expand it without the author's permission.

Totally. The story is 4 years old at this point and the author seems to be inactive but I still planned on reaching out just in case.

However, I still think it's possible to take the general premise and expand it a little (also maybe cut out the strange male-male turn that happens at the end that I wasn't sold on) and still credit the author for it.

 

[sr71plt]

However, I still think it's possible to take the general premise and expand it a little (also maybe cut out the strange male-male turn that happens at the end that I wasn't sold on) and still credit the author for it.

Crediting the author for it does nothing in terms of legality or ethics--it just points out that you are taking up someone else's work. Why don't you use that story as inspiration and write your own story rising from that inspiration, not extending someone else's story?

 

[PSZer0Dark30]

Crediting the author for it does nothing in terms of legality or ethics--it just points out that you are taking up someone else's work. Why don't you use that story as inspiration and write your own story rising from that inspiration, not extending someone else's story?

Sorry, I think I was bad at explaining myself. That is what I meant.

 

[sr71plt]

Sounds like a good plan.