Need suggestions

[Thecsm]

Would like some input on this story I'm thinking about.


1) It's about an 18 year man (Jack) and his 19 year old friend (Dave). They both have worked for a landscaping company for awhile. Which has made them both very buff. Then Dave went off to college while Jack finished High school.

2) Jacks mom just turned 40, not a big flirt but does flirt around with the guys. More on the conservative side. Works for a real estate company for years. She just got a new female coworker (Jane) which is about 30 years old and married also. But is a big flirt and a lot more wild. Mom and Jane has become very good friends.

3) Dad thinks this Jane is a bad influence for Jacks mom.

4) The story begins with Dave out of college for the summer coming over to see Jack. Jane is over at the house. With Dave at the door Jacks mom answers the door. He walks in and immediately Jane starts to flirt with Dave.

5) Jane seems to always be over at Jacks when Dave come over to visit. The flirting gets more and more open and making Dave thinking he has a chance. While in college Dave has become more cocky and a Don Juan. Even though this MILF is older Dave and Jack decide that since she is flirting so much Dave should seduce her. With both boys sharing Jane after Dave seduces her. Some where in the mix mom gets hooked into this.

I want to make this story sound believable. Any suggestions?

 

[Ldy_Sea]

Because porn is all about believeability....

that being said, the whole cougar cub thing is hot right now, so it can work.

Make the boys brothers who worked together at the parents landscapong service.

Jane is a new employee who's fucked every guy at the company and a few of the woman. She's now set her sights on the brothers, so she is always finding reasons to call them and to have them come to the shop of visiting them in the field.

Mom who was a bit wild in her younger days befriends Jane since jane reminds mom of her time at the sorority.

Jane uses this as an excuse to see the boys more often, then she has a party of some sort and Orgasms ensue...

 

[Nezhul]

The hardest part for your story would be justifying mom and son participating in a sexual encounter together. Both would find it very awkward.

I would start the relationship and flirt with co-worker suggesting to drop the guys off somewhere they need to go. Obviously she can't openly flirt with mother watching, bso she will need to somehow get them alone for herself. She seduces his friend, bangs him, then both of them.

As for involving the mother - I dunno how you do it. I'm not into that fetish and I simply can't picture that.

 

[Thecsm]

Because porn is all about believeability....

that being said, the whole cougar cub thing is hot right now, so it can work.

Make the boys brothers who worked together at the parents landscapong service.

Jane is a new employee who's fucked every guy at the company and a few of the woman. She's now set her sights on the brothers, so she is always finding reasons to call them and to have them come to the shop of visiting them in the field.

Mom who was a bit wild in her younger days befriends Jane since jane reminds mom of her time at the sorority.

Jane uses this as an excuse to see the boys more often, then she has a party of some sort and Orgasms ensue...

The hardest part for your story would be justifying mom and son participating in a sexual encounter together. Both would find it very awkward.

I would start the relationship and flirt with co-worker suggesting to drop the guys off somewhere they need to go. Obviously she can't openly flirt with mother watching, bso she will need to somehow get them alone for herself. She seduces his friend, bangs him, then both of them.

As for involving the mother - I dunno how you do it. I'm not into that fetish and I simply can't picture that.

Thank you to both of you for the suggestions. Now I need to figure out how to start the story and see where it takes me.

 

[Ldy_Sea]

Thank you to both of you for the suggestions. Now I need to figure out how to start the story and see where it takes me.

"Yo, Dave you see that new hottie mom hired in sales?" Jack said to his brither as he handed him a bottle of water he had just gotten from the company fridge.

"Naw, man why? Is she hot?"

"Dude she's hotter than Mila Kunis." he says you gotta go check her out."

Jack throws down the shovel he had been using and heads insde the office building of the landscaping company his parents own. Walking past the receptionist he pulls his shirt out of his back pocket and pulls it over his head, knowing how his mom hates it when he walks around the office topless, though the other woman seem to like seeing his well muscled chest and big biceps.

Jack enters the sales department and sees the new woman immediatly. She was bending over a file cabinet and her ass was the most perfect ass jack had ever seen. His dick shot up like a submarines periscope looking for a target as he walked over to introduce himself.

Feel free to use this as is or edit it to your hearts desire. All I ask is you give me credit for anything you use and send me the link when the story is up.


As for getting the mom involved. Costume parties are always a great way to get unlikely people in bed together.

Or Mistaken rooms, they go to a home and garden convention and Dave is supposed to meet Jane in her room but he somehow gets the wrong key and ends up in moms room who's expecting male companionship.

Of course there's the wild party where everyone is shoving body parts into openings and before they realize it, the boys are spit roasting mom.

Lots of ways to make it porn plausible...