Take my wife, please.

[BuckyDuckman]

Just a beginning snippet for someone to run with:

There's only one thing I enjoy more than fucking my wife and that's watching someone else doing it. . .

I don't know, there's something about starting with that confession that makes my Muse sit up and take notice. Often, my mind starts with a blanket statement of a preposterous idea, a "what if," if you will (or even if you won't).

Make me believe the improbable and you become my hero.

 

[emap]

Bucky find a better shrink. I admit the first thing that came to me reading that, 'Take my wife, please' I pictured something else.

Namely, the wife is overbearing, so when she comes home she is saying get me a beer bitch. So the husband is the one making dinner. Which is interesting and probably would piss off so many since the big strong man is ruled by a chick instead of ruling the chick.

 

[Hypoxia]

My take on the thread title: Guy wants a different wife but must humanely dispose of the current one. He tries to get somebody, anybody, to taker her off his hands. He could be a flakey guy with a nice but plain wife, or a nice guy with an irritating wife. Either way, he tries to setup hookups but something always interferes. Is he stuck with her?

Twist: story is told from wife's POV. She sees all hubby's machinations for what they are and is either amused or angered or thoughtful. How does she react? Does she plot?

 

[BuckyDuckman]

Rather fun that the title of the thread gets the comments.

@emap: In reality, I once hired a shrink for a couple months to help with smoking cessation. After about eight visits, I did fire her. Too soon, I guess. LOL

Meanwhile, why does the hubby need to be a victim? I prefer the idea they are a loving couple with compatible kinks.

 

[sirhugs]

The "take" in the title suggests to me that hubby wants someone to be forceful with wifey- maybe that's a fantasy of hers, or of his to watch?

 

[BuckyDuckman]

The "take" in the title suggests to me that hubby wants someone to be forceful with wifey- maybe that's a fantasy of hers, or of his to watch?

Perhaps. I only meant it as a reference to the old Henny Youngman line.

 

[Carnevil9]

I picture a kind, tender, loving husband, and a wife who appreciates him, but wants to be taken roughly for a change. She tells her husband to go out and find a brute to take her and fuck her like an animal. The husband says he'll do it.

Later the door is kicked open. The wife looks up in horror to see a masked man, raving like a lunatic. He grabs her, strips her, man-handles her, treats her like a whore, fucks her eight ways from Sunday and leaves her gasping and quivering on the bed. No, scratch that; on the floor, dining room table, or maybe kitchen counter. He leaves, never having said a word or taking off his mask.

The husband comes home later, asks her if she got what she wanted. She smiles and says that she hopes he kept that stranger's number. Husband just smiles slightly. The next day, the wife finds the mask in her husband's sock drawer.

 

[FantasyXY]

I picture a kind, tender, loving husband, and a wife who appreciates him, but wants to be taken roughly for a change. She tells her husband to go out and find a brute to take her and fuck her like an animal. The husband says he'll do it.

Later the door is kicked open. The wife looks up in horror to see a masked man, raving like a lunatic. He grabs her, strips her, man-handles her, treats her like a whore, fucks her eight ways from Sunday and leaves her gasping and quivering on the bed. No, scratch that; on the floor, dining room table, or maybe kitchen counter. He leaves, never having said a word or taking off his mask.

The husband comes home later, asks her if she got what she wanted. She smiles and says that she hopes he kept that stranger's number. Husband just smiles slightly. The next day, the wife finds the mask in her husband's sock drawer.

No wait... What if the wife never tells the husband that is what she wants, but he figures it out when he observes her putting herself out there hoping to be taken by bikers and other ruffians. The bikers enjoy her flirts, but she gets no actual takers.

Then one evening the door is kicked in by a masked man...

 

[Carnevil9]

No wait... What if the wife never tells the husband that is what she wants, but he figures it out when he observes her putting herself out there hoping to be taken by bikers and other ruffians. The bikers enjoy her flirts, but she gets no actual takers.

Then one evening the door is kicked in by a masked man...

That would work, too.

 

[BuckyDuckman]

It's the Story Idea thread, so I'm rejecting anyone's idea. However, I'm more of a mind that it's a loving hubby and his loving wife, who both love and respect each other. Except, they have this shared little kink between them. He really gets off seeing her with other men and she really gets off being watched by him. Maybe she's that much of an exhibitionist and he's that much of a voyeur? And what if it gets hotter and hotter for both of them the more she's exposed? The audiences grow, along with the number of men she's sleeping with in a single evening. . . where's the breaking point? When is enough, enough? When do their sympathetic kinks become too big for them? Maybe it's almost a game of chicken between them?

 

[FantasyXY]

It's the Story Idea thread, so I'm rejecting anyone's idea. However, I'm more of a mind that it's a loving hubby and his loving wife, who both love and respect each other. Except, they have this shared little kink between them. He really gets off seeing her with other men and she really gets off being watched by him. Maybe she's that much of an exhibitionist and he's that much of a voyeur? And what if it gets hotter and hotter for both of them the more she's exposed? The audiences grow, along with the number of men she's sleeping with in a single evening. . . where's the breaking point? When is enough, enough? When do their sympathetic kinks become too big for them? Maybe it's almost a game of chicken between them?

Ooo Oooo, A game of fuck me chicken... I like that one.

 

[Hypoxia]

Ooo Oooo, A game of fuck me chicken... I like that one.

I'll once again ask my query du jour: How should the tale end? Is hubby a happy or unhappy wittol (willing wimp), a stealthy blackmailer, bi-curious, stoned out, preparing for divorce, justified in his own philandering, pimping wifey, or what? Is wifey itchy for strange or pulling trains, disappointed by either hubby or strange, working her own strategy against hubby, stoned out, surprised by her unleashed desires, merely playing mind games, or what?

To answer, visualize a closing scene. Then figure how to get there.

 

[BuckyDuckman]

I'll once again ask my query du jour: How should the tale end? Is hubby a happy or unhappy wittol (willing wimp), a stealthy blackmailer, bi-curious, stoned out, preparing for divorce, justified in his own philandering, pimping wifey, or what? Is wifey itchy for strange or pulling trains, disappointed by either hubby or strange, working her own strategy against hubby, stoned out, surprised by her unleashed desires, merely playing mind games, or what?

To answer, visualize a closing scene. Then figure how to get there.

OR, create a couple interesting characters based on the original premise, ignore easy to apply labels, and write the story while allowing the characters to find your ending. I don't always know an ending when I start a tale. Quite often, not knowing the precise ending is the motivation for writing. A good example would be my FAWC #1 entry, FAWC 1: A Gloryhole Adventure, I didn't realize it was actually a love letter to her friend until the very end. I always thought foundly of that ending.

 

[sirhugs]

another way to use the title is that two guys are chatting. Guy A is complaining that he has to go to a work couples retreat, but is suddenly single, his gal having recently split. wishes he had a substitute.

Guy B generously says "Take my wife please...she would love the trip, I'd get stuff done around the house...."

 

[BuckyDuckman]

another way to use the title is that two guys are chatting. Guy A is complaining that he has to go to a work couples retreat, but is suddenly single, his gal having recently split. wishes he had a substitute.

Guy B generously says "Take my wife please...she would love the trip, I'd get stuff done around the house...."

Ooo, that's fun! I can imagine the tension of Guy A and Wife B as they are expected to participate in intimacy building exercises, drawing closer while constantly trying to maintain their distance. At some point, they would surely reach a tipping point, and then what? Do they tell Guy B?

I once had a friend who wanted me to fuck his wife. Problem was, they both worked for me. While she was attractive and fun, I couldn't bring myself to cross that line from a professional basis. I just knew, if I went there, it would come back and bite me in the ass at work. Still, I can see parallels.

 

[Carnevil9]

another way to use the title is that two guys are chatting. Guy A is complaining that he has to go to a work couples retreat, but is suddenly single, his gal having recently split. wishes he had a substitute.

Guy B generously says "Take my wife please...she would love the trip, I'd get stuff done around the house...."

I always thought that would be a good setup for a father/daughter incest tale. The wife is unavailable, so the businessman takes his daughter and introduces her to everyone as his wife. What could go wrong......?

 

[BuckyDuckman]

I always thought that would be a good setup for a father/daughter incest tale. The wife is unavailable, so the businessman takes his daughter and introduces her to everyone as his wife. What could go wrong......?

Fun idea, though how would you explain away the age difference? I suppose she could be introduced as a trophy wife, but it still seems a bit of a stretch. Might work better as brother/sister incest.

 

[Mr. Briggs]

Just a beginning snippet for someone to run with:

There's only one thing I enjoy more than fucking my wife and that's watching someone else doing it. . .

I don't know, there's something about starting with that confession that makes my Muse sit up and take notice. Often, my mind starts with a blanket statement of a preposterous idea, a "what if," if you will (or even if you won't).

Make me believe the improbable and you become my hero.

Not to change the tone of the thread but based on stories you've written I also like the idea of a wife story where the wife wants another guy to take her husband

 

[BuckyDuckman]

Not to change the tone of the thread but based on stories you've written I also like the idea of a wife story where the wife wants another guy to take her husband

You do know me well. Not a bad suggestion.

 

[Carnevil9]

Fun idea, though how would you explain away the age difference? I suppose she could be introduced as a trophy wife, but it still seems a bit of a stretch. Might work better as brother/sister incest.

Exactly. She would be seen as a trophy wife. Which would only enhance his reputation at work!

But yeah, it would work with bro/sis as well.

 

[LizVegas79]

This is a VERY naughty thread ....

 

[SEVERUSMAX]

Perhaps a man with a lower libido than the wife, so he naturally does what is most loving.....sharing her. (And yes, it would be loving for the wife to do the same thing if his libido outstripped hers, too....I'm all for gender equity and equality).

 

[SEVERUSMAX]

This is a VERY naughty thread ....

But of course.

 

[loquere]

Erotic Horror

I'd like this idea if you added an erotic horror element. He watches the guy fuck his wife. In this capacity he is passive, just an observer. Then after the sex show an activity he and his wife both partake in, is killing the guy she just fucked.

Knives ropes a chainsaw or whatever, just make it bloody.

 

[BuckyDuckman]

I'd like this idea if you added an erotic horror element. He watches the guy fuck his wife. In this capacity he is passive, just an observer. Then after the sex show an activity he and his wife both partake in, is killing the guy she just fucked.

Knives ropes a chainsaw or whatever, just make it bloody.

That certainly took a dark turn!