Toilet blowjob boyfriend birthday

[loquere]

Its her boyfriends birthday. She has to do anything he wants sexually for his birthday, even if she doesn't like it. That is there agreement because he did what she wanted sexually for her birthday, even though he really did'nt want to. Girlfriend gives boyfriend a long deepthroat blowjob while he's taking a heavy dump on the toilet. He pisses in her mouth etc and she has to swallow anything he puts in her mouth.

PS: 1. He doesn't know it but the aggressive disgusting demands are secretly turning his nympho GF on.


PS: 2. On his GF's bday he let her go to an orgy

 

[Carnevil9]

I'm a big fan of "balance." I like the idea of complete autonomy on a birthday, but I would make a point of including both birthdays in the story, showing that the each grant the other the same complete control. And that the relationship is therefor balanced and functional in the long run, even if it looks depraved and controlling in the short run.

 

[loquere]

I'm a big fan of "balance." I like the idea of complete autonomy on a birthday, but I would make a point of including both birthdays in the story, showing that the each grant the other the same complete control. And that the relationship is therefor balanced and functional in the long run, even if it looks depraved and controlling in the short run.

I agree I too prefer balance and I like your suggestion. Do you think it's important to make each person enjoy the others demand openly and right away, or should it be enjoyed later on during the act?

 

[Carnevil9]

I agree I too prefer balance and I like your suggestion. Do you think it's important to make each person enjoy the others demand openly and right away, or should it be enjoyed later on during the act?

Delayed gratification makes for better drama and character arc. But it could work either way.

 

[Jose_Rick]

...Girlfriend gives boyfriend a long deepthroat blowjob while he's taking a heavy dump on the toilet. He pisses in her mouth etc and she has to swallow anything he puts in her mouth...

Anything involving "taking a heavy dump" is, for me, decidedly unsexy. It certainly conveys depravity and the act is blatantly submissive, but that image is a mental chain saw for my wood.

Write whatever you want, of course, but I have a hunch I'm not alone in my thinking, even around here.

 

[loquere]

Anything involving "taking a heavy dump" is, for me, decidedly unsexy. It certainly conveys depravity and the act is blatantly submissive, but that image is a mental chain saw for my wood.

Write whatever you want, of course, but I have a hunch I'm not alone in my thinking, even around here.

That's what makes it so taboo.

The chapter including that would come with a disclaimer & would also go under the fetish category.

 

[MrRandyWatson]

I believe the term for that is "blumpie." Also, I pretty much stay the hell out of Fetish.

 

[loquere]

I believe the term for that is "blumpie." Also, I pretty much stay the hell out of Fetish.

It would be my first time in Fetish as well, but change is usually a good thing.

 

[Carnevil9]

Taking something decidedly unsexy, and trying to make it sexy, is what the challenge is all about. Go for it! That's what writing is, after all: trying to "sell the lie." It's like the famous Magritte painting: "This is not a pipe."

 

[FunkyBohemian]

ok...

Its her boyfriends birthday. She has to do anything he wants sexually for his birthday, even if she doesn't like it. That is there agreement because he did what she wanted sexually for her birthday, even though he really did'nt want to. Girlfriend gives boyfriend a long deepthroat blowjob while he's taking a heavy dump on the toilet. He pisses in her mouth etc and she has to swallow anything he puts in her mouth.

PS: 1. He doesn't know it but the aggressive disgusting demands are secretly turning his nympho GF on.


PS: 2. On his GF's bday he let her go to an orgy

Personally I would set it in a make toilets, add the extra thrill of 'who will come in'. I would take out the next birthday and have a separate chapter for that. Taking a dump? Nope. Just let it stand at him wanting her to suck him off in a toilets (male or female) maybe some anal finger play and her having to sick her fingers after...include the pissing if you wish....there are possibilities of them being discovered and what happens next....maybe a warden? A policeman?

 

[loquere]

Personally I would set it in a make toilets, add the extra thrill of 'who will come in'. I would take out the next birthday and have a separate chapter for that. Taking a dump? Nope. Just let it stand at him wanting her to suck him off in a toilets (male or female) maybe some anal finger play and her having to sick her fingers after...include the pissing if you wish....there are possibilities of them being discovered and what happens next....maybe a warden? A policeman?

Warden?.... You didn't set this up to be in a jail/prison.