The Devil seduces a Priest

[Asbel]

I'm in a bit of a creative lull at the moment, as I've realized that I'm in act 4 of a 5 act story and it'll be time to say goodbye to my current story soon. Sigh.

So I'm going over what I might be able to pull together next, and I keep coming back to an idea I had a long time ago about a priest who ends up becoming the playtoy and philosophical banter partner of the Devil himself. They discuss things like, what is sin anyway, why is it bad, what exactly does the priest's faith mean to him, all sorts of shit. And they have sex. Insane, kinky bondage sex.

Other idea: an angel falls in love with either a human or demon on Earth and ends up having said kinky bondage sex with that person, but this causes his wings to fall out for some reason the angel can't figure out.

I have no idea what to do with my life or these ideas. I can't do both, they're way too similar. So which one is better?

 

[LastLostIdols]

-The Angel falls and becomes a demon due to its new obsession as a Fuck toy.

-The Devil possesses the priest and turns a convent into his personal brothel.

-The Devil possesses a nun and turns her into a whore, leaving the convent to become a starlet in the city.

-A priest sells his soul to the devil to become the pope, and turns the Vatican into his own twisted sexual kingdom. (Not sure if this already hasn't happened)

 

[sirhugs]

I'd go with the Angel one- more action, less exposition?
Or try writing 100 words of each, see which feels better to you...

 

[Hypoxia]

-The Angel falls and becomes a demon due to its new obsession as a Fuck toy.

Angels, fallen or not, are literally divine messengers -- as in, {JHWH}'s telegram boys and bike couriers. One might wonder what message {JHWJ} wants conveyed, and to whom.

-A priest sells his soul to the devil to become the pope, and turns the Vatican into his own twisted sexual kingdom. (Not sure if this already hasn't happened)

Papal politics have indeed been rather devilish at times. More than a few have called the Vatican a satanic system. Or maybe that's only sour-grapes whining from losers in the global contest for souls and tithes.

The fallen archangel Lucifer-Satan, yet another creature of {JHWH}, doesn't really need to work to collect unsaved souls. Most folks naturally ignore moral rules and redemption and consign themselves to perdition. Satan need merely await their arrival. Also, what does Satan gain by collecting souls? Do they function as currency? We know (from Job) that {JHWH} and Satan gamble. Do they wager souls?

Back to the OP. Satan has lots of free time and so, when not playing divine dominoes with {JHWH}, Zeus, Ishtar, and Ganesha, he blows his evenings ensnaring priests, nuns, rabbis, ayatollahs, savants, and televangelists, all for fun and games. In fact, we can see Satan as the Gamester, just as (from Genesis) we can see {JHWH} as the Trickster. Which screws humans more?

(In biblical texts, {JHWH} killed far more people than did Satan.)

Let's flip the OP. The priest, an empowered agent of the deadly Trickster {JHWH}, seduces and dominates playful Satan, complete with insanely kinky sex. Yes, the priest summons Satan with a mighty spell and fucks the shit out of the poor helpless demon. Oh, the humanity!

 

[Asbel]

I guess it would have helped to add that I usually focus on story first, sex second. Weird, I know. My stuff usually revolves around a "corruption of the innocent" kind of vibe as well. Good ideas to bounce off though.

 

[Hypoxia]

I guess it would have helped to add that I usually focus on story first, sex second. Weird, I know.

Sometimes maximal plot with a bit of sex added is great. I could have omitted explicit sex from Prickly Pairs but it sure flavors the tragic tale. The Botanists has only one scene of mild explicit sex but it nicely punctuates the plot. Sometimes hot sex with minimal plot is great, like the A Taste of Honey cycle of endless fuck-a-thons. Varied approaches are fun.

My stuff usually revolves around a "corruption of the innocent" kind of vibe as well.

I forget if I've corrupted any innocents lately. Usually they corrupt each other. I don't write a lot of virgin-poppings. Maybe because it's been so long, I hardly remember the process...

 

[Asbel]

Virginity usually has nothing to do with it, but seducing someone into a dark world of bondage or sadomasochism is really fun.