Sara's first post

[Sara_Hawkes]

Hey good people of Literotica.

I'm Sara and recently submitted my first story on here. https://www.literotica.com/s/saras-wishlist

I do realise quite a few of the mistakes I've made and I'd like to read through some great stories in the same genre. Not for copying purposes, more to get a feel for different styles and the use of language and descriptive text. This is going to help me in my studies as well as my future submissions on here.

I realise I am asking for a scolding here but if anyone can point me to recommended stories they've read in the "Younger girl / older man," genre I would be grateful.

I will read more on here, and I will feedback positively. I promise you that.

Love and respect to you all,

Sara
xxXxx

 

[lovecraft68]

Hi Sara, welcome to the AH.

I have one story of a younger woman with an older man. Its in mature because of the age gap, but is pretty much a romance. One disclaimer, its eight pages and I build the story before it gets to the 'good stuff'

https://www.literotica.com/s/karma-7

 

[Sara_Hawkes]

Thank you lovecraft68. That's very kind of you.

One disclaimer, its eight pages and I build the story before it gets to the 'good stuff'

No problem as I do need to curb my impatience in reading as well as writing.

 

[NOIRTRASH]

Do you want general material or something with an edge?


I just read an old novel of 1958 titled CLEMMIE by John D. MacDonald. 39 year old Craig is involved and obsessed with 23 year old Clementine. She's rich and beautiful and alcoholic. He's a devoted husband and father. And Hell erupts.

 

[RejectReality]

Here are a few of mine.

https://www.literotica.com/s/nude-holly-day
https://www.literotica.com/s/summers-heat-1
https://www.literotica.com/s/one-incredible-costume
https://www.literotica.com/s/pick-up-the-spare

 

[HandsInTheDark]

Hey good people of Literotica.

Welcome!

I skimmed your story. I've been avoiding the mature category because I assumed all characters in it were older. I didn't realise it was home to older guy/younger girl stories. I'll have to pay more attention to that category...

I mostly write D/s and some of it wanders into noncon - not everyone's cup of oolong. That said, I think you'll like https://www.literotica.com/s/why-i-hate-my-roommate-ch-01 .

Whether you like my other stories depends on how you feel about kidnapped women and other noncon situations.

 

[Sara_Hawkes]

Welcome!

I skimmed your story. I've been avoiding the mature category because I assumed all characters in it were older. I didn't realise it was home to older guy/younger girl stories. I'll have to pay more attention to that category...

I mostly write D/s and some of it wanders into noncon - not everyone's cup of oolong. That said, I think you'll like https://www.literotica.com/s/why-i-hate-my-roommate-ch-01 .

Whether you like my other stories depends on how you feel about kidnapped women and other noncon situations.

I'll give it a try.

I must admit to pondering over what category to place "wishlist" in, deciding eventually that because one character was older I'd go for mature.

 

[sr71plt]

Do a general search on "age difference" and you'll get a slew of story possibilities that weren't self-suggested.

https://search.literotica.com/search.php?type=story&q=age+difference&cid[]=&db=tags&date_from=&date_to=newer&sort=relevancy&sort_order=desc&author=

 

[stickygirl]

Doesn't matter too much about category so long as it's a good story and the Mods would have suggested another if they thought it appropriate.
Welcome to Lit
and I'll read it soon

 

[Sara_Hawkes]

Do a general search on "age difference" and you'll get a slew of story possibilities that weren't self-suggested.

https://search.literotica.com/search.php?type=story&q=age+difference&cid[]=&db=tags&date_from=&date_to=newer&sort=relevancy&sort_order=desc&author=

Good advice. Thank you.

Doesn't matter too much about category so long as it's a good story and the Mods would have suggested another if they thought it appropriate.
Welcome to Lit
and I'll read it soon

Thanks for that. Don't feel that you have to read it, though.

 

[WetBiMoose]

Nice little tale there Sara. Very hot, right to the point. Great use of multiple labels for the lead as well. Sultry Sara was great and swearing Sara or Potty mouth Sara was fantastic. I give it two thumbs and a very hard cock up!

 

[Sara_Hawkes]

Nice little tale there Sara. Very hot, right to the point. Great use of multiple labels for the lead as well. Sultry Sara was great and swearing Sara or Potty mouth Sara was fantastic. I give it two thumbs and a very hard cock up!

Thanks for the frank approval. In real life, Sweary Sara emerges far too often!

 

[stickygirl]

Thanks for the frank approval. In real life, Sweary Sara emerges far too often!

Frank is a cool dude
I like swearing - goshamighty I do dagnamit.
Given the circumstances in the story, I'd say the swearing was perfectly acceptable!

 

[HandsInTheDark]

Frank is a cool dude
Like swearing - goshamighty I do dagnamit

Heh. In my forays into non-fictional dominance, more or less the first rule is - you will not swear in my presence.

People can talk about bondage this and spanking that all day long - that's not dominance. But when someone agrees to change their speaking style out of deference to another - that's radical submission. And it has a radical effect on the submissive.

So much of sex has nothing to do with sex.

 

[stickygirl]

But what man can resist a peel of cussitudes from the sweet lips of his conquest as he brings her naked form to the first of many orgasms over his desk
...only saying

 

[Sara_Hawkes]

Heh. In my forays into non-fictional dominance, more or less the first rule is - you will not swear in my presence.

I'd find that incredibly difficult I'm sure, but that's part of the intention I guess.

 

[NOIRTRASH]

Heh. In my forays into non-fictional dominance, more or less the first rule is - you will not swear in my presence.

People can talk about bondage this and spanking that all day long - that's not dominance. But when someone agrees to change their speaking style out of deference to another - that's radical submission. And it has a radical effect on the submissive.

So much of sex has nothing to do with sex.

Naaah. It isn't submission when I piss in your toilet rather than on your carpet.

Few understand dominance.

 

[NOIRTRASH]

Real dominance is a presence others find delicious and appealing. Real dominants release the gusto and elan in others. Think Pied Piper.

 

[lovecraft68]

Heh. In my forays into non-fictional dominance, more or less the first rule is - you will not swear in my presence.

People can talk about bondage this and spanking that all day long - that's not dominance. But when someone agrees to change their speaking style out of deference to another - that's radical submission. And it has a radical effect on the submissive.

So much of sex has nothing to do with sex.

Wow, TPE? No one's ever heard of that!

If you want to sound impressive and mysterious lose google as your source and maybe go pick up the Gor books, they're right up your alley and would give you better material to work with as well as great masturbation fodder.

And this thread was about age gap stories, not non consent and another chance for you to wow the board with your perceived dominance, but here you are steering it that way because you have to show everyone how 'manly' you are. The ones who say the most do the least. You're another of the "I'm Christian Gray" posers that run amok here.

Your ideas and theories about women are wrong. You got that slapped in your face on the lingerie thread and many other threads on other points. For someone who incessantly claims he has legions of adoring females, the women here don't seem to buy your act. Then again, they're too old for your games, they're all over 22

Perhaps you should start a 'lets talk non con' thread and do people the same courtesy I did with the incest thread I started, talk to the people who want to talk about it and stop shoving how much you love subjugating women (in your mind, I seriously doubt your real life experience)at everyone in every thread regardless of topic.

And if the mod reads though this, this is not an attack, just a reaction to a poster who continuously brings up a topic many people find offensive here. There's a BDSM forum to talk all about BDSM and the non consent people try to force into a consensual lifestyle, it does not need to be posted everywhere in this forum.

 

[Sara_Hawkes]

Back on track?

In a barely concealed attempt to divert the way this thread is going I would like to make a statement.

I am absolutely astonished at how respectful and helpful everyone has been as regards my initial post and request.

I expected a far harsher response.

Thank you, all of you that have responded here, in PMs and via email to me.

My confidence is far less fragile than it was 24 hours ago. I may even put some time today into physical writing on the follow up story to "Wishlist."

 

[Handley_Page]

But what man can resist a peel of cussitudes from the sweet lips of his conquest as he brings her naked form to the first of many orgasms over his desk
...only saying

That sounds like something from a personal experience.

Sara, good luck to you, madam, and a warm welcome to the AH chaos.

 

[NOIRTRASH]

In a barely concealed attempt to divert the way this thread is going I would like to make a statement.

I am absolutely astonished at how respectful and helpful everyone has been as regards my initial post and request.

I expected a far harsher response.

Thank you, all of you that have responded here, in PMs and via email to me.

My confidence is far less fragile than it was 24 hours ago. I may even put some time today into physical writing on the follow up story to "Wishlist."

Most people sense when a poster is what I call a YES BUTTER. That is, the poster submits a thesis or proposition with a request for remedy then discounts every offer with YES, BUT! Straight shooters get a different reception.

 

[Sara_Hawkes]

Do you want general material or something with an edge?


I just read an old novel of 1958 titled CLEMMIE by John D. MacDonald. 39 year old Craig is involved and obsessed with 23 year old Clementine. She's rich and beautiful and alcoholic. He's a devoted husband and father. And Hell erupts.

It's available for Kindle. I will be downloading that to read when I'm back at Uni. Thank you.

 

[GforGraham]

Hey good people of Literotica.

I'm Sara and recently submitted my first story on here. https://www.literotica.com/s/saras-wishlist

Sara
xxXxx

I have not read your story yet but I will assume you mean older by more than a couple of years. There are many on the site, just keep plowing through mature category. Also try using tag search.

Being older myself, ie what is left on top is grey, I will look forward to reading your story.

 

[NOIRTRASH]

It's available for Kindle. I will be downloading that to read when I'm back at Uni. Thank you.

Some Kindle books are loanable, I loaned a book to a friend recently. Its for 2 weeks I think. If you wanna save $6 lemme know and I'll loan CLEMMIE to you.