rjordan
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What you are writing could be the subject of future book reports.
Eat your heart out, O Henry!
rj
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What you are writing could be the subject of future book reports.
Along my journey, natural talent carried me far. . .
. . . True photographers can snap photos in just the right way that a photo tells a story, because they understand the ins and outs of photography.
Likewise, a writer might find one day that they can only achieve so much without wielding each and every tool at their disposal.
It is pretty clear from the responses that the answer to the original question is that most of the authors who post in AH understand the theory of multiple meanings, even though some of them pooh pooh the need to do it here.
And I understand that.
They've chosen to pursue a market rather than art, and that's okay too.
But... I still say, when you are able to inject art into your market, then you'll have something that may outlast you.
I'm a hack. A rank amateur. I doubt if anything that I write will outlast me, but some of you are good enough to make the leap...so do so.
My claim to fame? That other site stole my work. LOL. Didn't bother me, but my spouse was incensed. I will take that. The only fan I care about fought for me on Christmas!
I am always very impressed with people who self teach.![]()
Though I am curious, give me an example of "the next level of ultimate harmony".
Short of actually explaining music theory in extreme detail, that's hard to convey in layman's terms.
There are what you can call "basic" skills. They can deliver very basic music (however catchy or moving it may be). Simple "just play chords and scales and make it sound good."
It's the difference of building a doghouse and designing a skyscraper that can resist earthquakes. Most everybody can nail wood together and even do a very good job. But having the know how to build ANYTHING is what theory does for music. It lets you see through just arranging notes in different orders and producing largely similar sounds and songs. It lets you know how to "build" them in a complex array of ways on cue that not only sound great, but unique in the way you used the tools at your disposal.
It's my belief that most art is this way.
The world is a Rorschach test (Brad Pitt is his doppelganger, btw). I'm sure some writers write stories with embedded meanings and lofty symbolism and deeper stuff. But most authors probably just write...and readers and critics and English majors come up with the "meaning." To be honest, I've heard and slung so much bullshit in a creative writing class and an auteur directors class that it's hard to buy that writers are typically purposeful in dual levels, but then, I'm not 100% in that world and I'm on the bottom rung so probably have little idea...I do try to read between the lines, but...
Then you appear to have lost some of your ability to read for comprehension.
We learn to read first. Then we learn to write.
We listen to music first. Then we learn to play.
We listen to speech first. Then we learn to speak.
In each case we are exposed to more sophisticated patterns than we are able to produce, and that's what we learn from. We build our own patterns, but based on what we learned as readers, listeners, etc.
Obligatory quote:
"Learn any language and you'll speak it your way, but your way may be schizophrenic word salad." [NOIRTRASH]
rj
I am the person who linked it. It has a powerfully ironic and moving effect, using (as someone else pointed out) about a third of a Lit page worth of words. However, it was written during a period when our culture was more elevated and the average person more literate. It is challenging for today's readers.BTW, there was an O Henry story (Gift of the Magi) linked here as an example of incredible writing talent, which I don't question. However, I found it nearly unreadable. It may or may not have had all the elements that please literary people, but I couldn't get through it even by skimming. I wouldn't offer that piece as something to emulate for new Lit writers. It would be like having the music teacher recommend your new singer emulate something operatic.
rj
I am the person who linked it. It has a powerfully ironic and moving effect, using (as someone else pointed out) about a third of a Lit page worth of words. However, it was written during a period when our culture was more elevated and the average person more literate. It is challenging for today's readers.
I am of the opinion, and I realize that it is a controversial one, that we are living in a cultural dark age right now. Ask yourself, would our citizenry tolerate our government's behavior, launching one senseless war after another, if that were not the case? I know, that's controversial as well. But if you accept my assertion that we are in a dark age, the only way to climb out of it is by learning the lessons of previous cultural high points, which means reading Shakespeare and other dudes who are not exactly easy to grasp.
I am the person who linked it. It has a powerfully ironic and moving effect, using (as someone else pointed out) about a third of a Lit page worth of words. However, it was written during a period when our culture was more elevated and the average person more literate. It is challenging for today's readers.
I am of the opinion, and I realize that it is a controversial one, that we are living in a cultural dark age right now. Ask yourself, would our citizenry tolerate our government's behavior, launching one senseless war after another, if that were not the case? I know, that's controversial as well. But if you accept my assertion that we are in a dark age, the only way to climb out of it is by learning the lessons of previous cultural high points, which means reading Shakespeare and other dudes who are not exactly easy to grasp.
Maybe after all the graduate degrees I've had to go through, I've learned to close my ears to pontification and lecturing when I recognize it--like I didn't bother to read too far into this post.
I think, as always, the thread is just devolving into folks with just enough knowledge of writing to be dangerous to themselves and others sticking their noses in the air and telling others how and what to write.
You do realize that this post is you pontificating on how no one here knows anything except you, right?
That you come across as this "God" who sits on high and shakes his head at all the little people beneath them.
So as I always do, I wonder if we're all so lost and confused and dangerous, why you continue to post in these threads. But then posts like the one I quoted answer that, to feed your superiority complex and need to be the BMOC.
You also are in your full mode of replying to posts you have obviously not read through entirely and you don't do that because you have too much contempt to read all our drivel, but that never stops you from snarking on it.
You prove my point-and the one you're trying to prove about everyone else-that there are people here who think their way is the only way and they're so much better than everyone else.
Write whatever you write and leave others to do the same.

Here's a comment that sort of fits the topic here.
by Anonymous
12/26/15
It takes a lot of talent ...
... and kink to write something so absurd and wild within a realistic theme and setting. A lot of commenters got annoyed by the characters - which only shows how much they bought into the realism. It's the beauty of this, that I managed to jerk-off to even the relatively mundane handjob session - because the world was so immersive. Very good world building done mostly through dialogue. Kudos.
Dialogue has always been my strength which this comment backs. But I do think its an eye roll to think there was "world building' in my incest story, but I'll take the compliment because my reason for writing some incest stories is to strive to make the implausible as plausible as possible
BTW. Is that "Tinker, Tailor Soldier, Spy" in your AV ?
To go a little further I do have to ask something. When LC said it seemed a little silly that "world building" might exist in something like an incest story... why is this often so?
In war stories there can be deeper themes or meanings. In fight stories. In romances. In comdies even. In horror. In sci-fi. It would seem fine to inject more complex writing, like world building or character development or what is considered "high brow" writing style. Why is it that when a story is about explicit sex that this is silly or odd to add?
I understand that erotica works fine just being sex stories for the limited purpose of arousal. Yes. That is fine.
But why does it sound ridiculous to think erotica can't go further? Why does "people fucking" seem a strange thing to add duel levels of meaning to?
I wrote a TS/CD story here that followed a young trans women that was at rock bottom, on the brink of suicide. What was a harmless kink to her was a wretched sickness to those she loved. The story encompassed her journey to discover her identity. It included heavily explicit sex and sexual tones. It "may" have carried the undertones of "be who you are and not who they want you to be." (Not that I consciously made the effort for that.) I don't think it was particularly profound or anything, it certainly is no literary classic. But lots of people liked the explicit arousal factor as well as the overall driving theme.
Why does that seem a silly thing to do concerning a story about people fucking? Is it simply the <gasp> sex that hangs us up?
Maybe it seems out of place because there are so many one handed reads on here that in a sense we become conditioned to not take stories seriously here? That when one is it stands out as odd? Just a guess.
I think in my example its me. I see incest as a fun kinky type of writing. I do try to make them plausible, but the stories aren't taken seriously by me. So I guess it strokes me odd people who read them take them more seriously than I do.
In Siblings with Benefits the sister was a drug addict for a decade and I do some flashbacks to her days of addiction. In a three chapter story arc I describe her last days as one which led to a suicide through overdose attempt. But before that I had her deciding to make her family hate her so that way when she went back to drugs and died from them they wouldn't care.
Its a totally fucked up thought process, but dead on accurate. I took a lot of crap for the three chapters, people saying they were to dark, to depressing, didn't belong here. But I also got a ton of feedback asking me if I still battled addiction or if I were currently clean.
I've never done any drugs in my life, never even taken a puff of a cigarette or a hit from a joint and although I've drank heavily in the past, never an issue stopping. But I mailed it because I was raised around addicts so knew the mind set and...I do understand despair and pain.
IN general the reaction was more negative than positive. The score's were low, but have now become decent as the series is a few years old and past the reach of the new story trolls and maybe people reading from start to finish are having less knee jerk reaction than people awaiting each chapter.
It topped off with a comment your last post made me recall, "Some things just don't belong here, keep your real life bullshit in a diary."
So maybe people get caught by surprise when someone here takes the time to be 'real'
If anyone cares to suffer through it here's a link to the absolute depths of that arc.
Warning, the beginning is a brother/sister sex scene that's a dream sequence. The pertinent part starts at "I woke up to hell"
https://www.literotica.com/s/siblings-with-benefits-ch-38
The other memorable remark I received through feedback was "You really know how to kill a boner." Oh, and I got flack fro using the N-word in the ensuing fight scene. I forgot the rule all characters must be politically correct.
I am the person who linked it. It has a powerfully ironic and moving effect, using (as someone else pointed out) about a third of a Lit page worth of words. However, it was written during a period when our culture was more elevated and the average person more literate. It is challenging for today's readers.
I am of the opinion, and I realize that it is a controversial one, that we are living in a cultural dark age right now. Ask yourself, would our citizenry tolerate our government's behavior, launching one senseless war after another, if that were not the case? I know, that's controversial as well. But if you accept my assertion that we are in a dark age, the only way to climb out of it is by learning the lessons of previous cultural high points, which means reading Shakespeare and other dudes who are not exactly easy to grasp.
Here's a comment that sort of fits the topic here.
by Anonymous
12/26/15
It takes a lot of talent ...
... and kink to write something so absurd and wild within a realistic theme and setting. A lot of commenters got annoyed by the characters - which only shows how much they bought into the realism. It's the beauty of this, that I managed to jerk-off to even the relatively mundane handjob session - because the world was so immersive. Very good world building done mostly through dialogue. Kudos.
Dialogue has always been my strength which this comment backs. But I do think its an eye roll to think there was "world building' in my incest story, but I'll take the compliment because my reason for writing some incest stories is to strive to make the implausible as plausible as possible
I think the commenter makes a good point that building credible characters in the context of their own "world" might be considered world building. Not in the sci fi/fantasy sense of worlds we have never seen, but in the sense of worlds we aren't intimately familiar with.
I've visited neighbors in their homes where I felt uncomfortable with the surroundings, but, of course, they didn't. It can feel "other-worldly", and an ability to realistically describe that for others isn't far from sci fi world building.
Anyway, I think it's an interesting way to view what you've done and something to do consciously.
rj
World building is what we all do IRL. Some of our worlds are glorious, and plenty are bizarre. As I usta say to patients, BUILD IT AND THEY WILL COME...(or stay the hell away).
The "natural" aspect of this though... I don't think it changes very much. I've used this example before, But imagine a singer. She's on stage at some local venue, and it's clear to everyone this girl has got a voice. It moves people. And ultimately it entertains the crowd. Everyone cheers and applauds her as she leaves the stage. A music enthusiast, say a music teacher who teaches people to do what the singer just did, approaches her.
"That was excellent! I know very few people that can hit a high C like you did."
The singer shakes her head. "I don't sing notes or anything like that. I've never been taught music, I just love to sing. I don't actually sing in scales."
The musician smiles and replies, "Well, yes. You may never have had a single lesson, but those are notes and scales you are singing. That thing you did with your voice at the end is still called vibrato. Whether it was taught or you picked it up singing the songs you love, it was a beautiful vibrato."
I am the person who linked it. It has a powerfully ironic and moving effect, using (as someone else pointed out) about a third of a Lit page worth of words. However, it was written during a period when our culture was more elevated and the average person more literate. It is challenging for today's readers.
I am of the opinion, and I realize that it is a controversial one, that we are living in a cultural dark age right now. Ask yourself, would our citizenry tolerate our government's behavior, launching one senseless war after another, if that were not the case?
I spent 33 years and four months in active military service and during that period I spent most of my time as a high class muscle man for Big Business, for Wall Street and the bankers. In short, I was a racketeer, a gangster for capitalism. I helped make Mexico and especially Tampico safe for American oil interests in 1914. I helped make Haiti and Cuba a decent place for the National City Bank boys to collect revenues in. I helped in the raping of half a dozen Central American republics for the benefit of Wall Street. I helped purify Nicaragua for the International Banking House of Brown Brothers in 1902-1912. I brought light to the Dominican Republic for the American sugar interests in 1916. I helped make Honduras right for the American fruit companies in 1903. In China in 1927 I helped see to it that Standard Oil went on its way unmolested. Looking back on it, I might have given Al Capone a few hints. The best he could do was to operate his racket in three districts. I operated on three continents.