GforGraham
Literotica Guru
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I don't actually read anything, just come here for the pictures. Get disappointed most stories are full of just words.
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I don't actually read anything, just come here for the pictures. Get disappointed most stories are full of just words.
I don't actually read anything, just come here for the pictures. Get disappointed most stories are full of just words.
If you look real close at the words, they should make pictures, if they are written right.![]()
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Those without guilt are either angels or deceiving themselves.
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Absolutely! Sometimes I can't even work out (from the story) which way one of the characters is facing, other times I'm left wondering whether they're vertical, about to fall over, or horizontal - these things matter.Very few authors use imagery when they write. They tell their story to the reader rather than show their story to the reader.
With the reader unable to envision their characters, we're unable to care about the characters in the story. Some writers don't even bother describing or naming their characters. If they describe their characters at all, they describe them in one sentence. <snip>
Absolutely! Sometimes I can't even work out (from the story) which way one of the characters is facing, other times I'm left wondering whether they're vertical, about to fall over, or horizontal - these things matter.
BTW I realise that you were talking more about the characters as well as the action, but if even the action is confusingly unclear, the people in the story tend to be even harder to get clear in my mind's eye.
No.
But I do keep it private.
"Shh. My lips are sealed. I won't tell anyone that you were here."
Susan looked at the private investigator, 49greg's wife, seven children, and his priest.
"Who? 49greg? That doesn't ring a bell. I don't know anyone by the name. Try the bar across the street. This is Literotica. Only, perverts come here and I seriously doubt if 49greg is a pervert."
She watched them all walk across the street and go into the bar.
"Okay, 49greg. The coast is clear. Nice dress by the way. Be careful walking in those high heels. Quick. Get inside Literotica before they see you dressed as a woman. Hey, big Louie, guard the front door. No one gets in unless they flash their user ID."
G'day Dee...you should have no regrets for anything at all...u r as close to perfect as any man could get in this world...especially in Australia ...i love your stories.your thoughts on life and most of all your superb body...u will do me Dee...xxooNope. Never have felt guilty about writing / living a porn lifestyle. It's my/our business, and we love it, so that is all that matters. It's a form of release for me from my busy everyday life, so I adore it. I have been a lit member for years now and also posted hundreds of pics all over Voyeurweb and Redclouds for 15 years and just LOVE the interaction, showing off and feedback......